September 2007 - Amrit Seecharan - Dramatic Sunset

wargrafix · 03-09-2007, 12:20 PM

Well let me start this one off. Its an amazing challenge and thanks to Chrisp-3DT for getting things operational. I had always played around the idea of a barren wasteland frozen in time. I decided to try out somewhere with water and see how that would play out.
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Suirebit-3DT · 03-09-2007, 01:01 PM

Seems a good composition to start with

I would cut a little from the right part to position the sun more towards the right third. Go to a color sketch, that would help more establish the elements of the scene.

Alletun · 03-09-2007, 02:08 PM

good sketch. I'd experiment moving the horizon line down so the sky filled 2/3 of the picture, instead of half-half as it is now.
Really nice idea with the planets.

wargrafix · 03-09-2007, 07:27 PM

Thanks for the critiqe.

Suirebit-3DT: I was still playing around with the composition and how much mountain I should add.

Alletun: Yeah, I noticed it when I posted. Right now I'm juggling my final year thesis. Will work on it in a while.

Oh in this project, I'm working from scratch. Zero references and no stock. All brain matter. If I should implode during the process, well I guess that would suck. lol
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3dtodd · 03-09-2007, 07:28 PM

I want to see a color version, too. It's hard to gauge anything right now.

wargrafix · 04-09-2007, 04:44 AM

Here is a basic lights off version.

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Suirebit-3DT · 05-09-2007, 11:00 AM

still too centered IMO...i would shift it to the right a bit and make a visual path from bottom left to top right.

wargrafix · 05-09-2007, 06:52 PM

Thanks. Actually I'm looking at it and thinking to scrap it. Its just not feeling right.
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Suirebit-3DT · 05-09-2007, 08:15 PM

the concept can turn out good, you just need to improve the composition. But if you have something else in mind..well...keep us updated

wargrafix · 05-09-2007, 11:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Suirebit-3DT

the concept can turn out good, you just need to improve the composition. But if you have something else in mind..well...keep us updated

Thanks. Yeah normally I would feel ansty about abandoning a piece, but this one is taking so long that I decided the hell with it. Besides, I think i can possibly do something better. Who knows?

Thanks again.
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eyecon · 07-09-2007, 06:01 PM

Hey I hope you could find another concept....

03-09-2007, 12:20 PM	#1
wargrafix The alpha and the omega Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 401 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	September 2007 - Amrit Seecharan - Dramatic Sunset Well let me start this one off. Its an amazing challenge and thanks to Chrisp-3DT for getting things operational. I had always played around the idea of a barren wasteland frozen in time. I decided to try out somewhere with water and see how that would play out. ________ Vaporizer Affiliates Attached Images Last edited by wargrafix; 04-05-2011 at 02:26 PM..

03-09-2007, 01:01 PM	#2
Suirebit-3DT Redefining Reality Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: my wizard tower Posts: 581 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Seems a good composition to start with I would cut a little from the right part to position the sun more towards the right third. Go to a color sketch, that would help more establish the elements of the scene. __________________ "Digital Art is like magic...and we are all it's Wizards" -Tiberius Viris- Website: http://www.suirebit.net/ Buy my prints \| Visit my Blog \| Facebook Fan Page Last edited by Suirebit-3DT; 03-09-2007 at 01:05 PM..

03-09-2007, 07:27 PM	#4
wargrafix The alpha and the omega Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 401 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the critiqe. Suirebit-3DT: I was still playing around with the composition and how much mountain I should add. Alletun: Yeah, I noticed it when I posted. Right now I'm juggling my final year thesis. Will work on it in a while. Oh in this project, I'm working from scratch. Zero references and no stock. All brain matter. If I should implode during the process, well I guess that would suck. lol ________ OUTDOOR SWINGERS Last edited by wargrafix; 04-05-2011 at 02:27 PM..

04-09-2007, 04:44 AM	#6
wargrafix The alpha and the omega Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 401 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Here is a basic lights off version. [IMG][/IMG] ________ CONCEPT S Last edited by wargrafix; 04-05-2011 at 02:27 PM..

05-09-2007, 11:00 AM	#7
Suirebit-3DT Redefining Reality Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: my wizard tower Posts: 581 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	still too centered IMO...i would shift it to the right a bit and make a visual path from bottom left to top right. __________________ "Digital Art is like magic...and we are all it's Wizards" -Tiberius Viris- Website: http://www.suirebit.net/ Buy my prints \| Visit my Blog \| Facebook Fan Page

03-09-2007, 02:08 PM	#3
Alletun Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	good sketch. I'd experiment moving the horizon line down so the sky filled 2/3 of the picture, instead of half-half as it is now. Really nice idea with the planets.

03-09-2007, 07:28 PM	#5
3dtodd Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Santa Monica, California Posts: 68 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I want to see a color version, too. It's hard to gauge anything right now.

05-09-2007, 06:52 PM	#8
wargrafix The alpha and the omega Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 401 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks. Actually I'm looking at it and thinking to scrap it. Its just not feeling right. ________ Shemale naomi Last edited by wargrafix; 04-05-2011 at 02:28 PM..

05-09-2007, 08:15 PM	#9
Suirebit-3DT Redefining Reality Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: my wizard tower Posts: 581 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	the concept can turn out good, you just need to improve the composition. But if you have something else in mind..well...keep us updated __________________ "Digital Art is like magic...and we are all it's Wizards" -Tiberius Viris- Website: http://www.suirebit.net/ Buy my prints \| Visit my Blog \| Facebook Fan Page

07-09-2007, 06:01 PM	#11
eyecon Matte what? Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Singapore, Philippines Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Hey I hope you could find another concept.... __________________ :: Believe in what is real :: visualize in what is not :: My CGportfolio and Deviant CGsociety Deviant 2008 Mattepainting Reel : HIGH RES Low Res

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