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11-10-2007, 07:16 PM
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October 2007 - mohammedbood - Lost Valley
Hi members ... My communion in this competition which had been put in this month ( October 2007 ) ... I wished add the work on Parts intermittent, but I did not feel I am working on the Computer that I have finished the design dramatically  ...I will happy members giving me their opinion and comments on the communion ... Photos will be added close to some places even enjoy view ... Wait comments ...  Sorry, my English language not good  ...Best wishes to all ... mohammedbood |
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12-10-2007, 02:39 PM
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Hi all,
These are some pictures close ( zome ++ ) to work ...  Best wishes to all ... mohammedbood Last edited by mohammedbood; 14-10-2007 at 11:12 AM.. |
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14-10-2007, 10:15 AM
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Looks promissing! Good work
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14-10-2007, 10:27 AM
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Thank you for your reply friend Kingcolin beautiful and encouragement ...
Thank you for your opinion ... |
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14-10-2007, 11:11 AM
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I make some adjustments to the design, distribution lighting amendment and modification work on the integration of the mountains and Add blur for mountains & plain ...
I like you to enjoy seeing ... I wish to hear your opinion,advice and your comments after adjustments ...  We await your comments  Last edited by mohammedbood; 14-10-2007 at 11:14 AM.. |
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14-10-2007, 11:48 AM
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pay attention to levels, right now the far off cliffs have the same black levels as the foreground lizard and that confuses the eye, plus there's no depth. move the black levels of the cliff more towards gray
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15-10-2007, 01:41 AM
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Thank you my friend Suirebit - 3DT for your visit , I would be fortunate for comments beautiful
...I hope that the new amendments is better than the previous  ...I wait your opinion,advice and comments after adjustments  ... thanks all,, Last edited by mohammedbood; 15-10-2007 at 12:38 PM.. |
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15-10-2007, 02:19 PM
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mohammedbood, im sure this will look good, if u just take care of some stuff, like depth, composition, focus and light. good work.
your already got some nice suggestions by suirebit-3dt, that would surely help... .here are a couple of suggestions from my end: . have a definate light source, different parts getting it from different angles. like the lizard is getting it from right but moutains from top/behind. u even have to plan it nicely to get rid of the flat light throughout. . too much detail everywhere, every area is busy and distracts the viewer. there are so many patterns right now. the mountains have equal amount of detail all over. some has to get diffused. composition, have a balance, the image is very heavy at the left side. . have some shadows there, according to the light direction. hope these help... . all the best mate.
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This set of images you do anomalies including the one hand increase the proportion Blure behind the Lizard ...
I wish you seen, and any best ratios (the ratio will be written in the left corner at the top ) ...  ooooohh, Thank you my friend waheed nasir-3DT on your comments wonderful ...I wait my friends ... Sorry again, my language English is not good ... |
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19-10-2007, 12:47 AM
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These are some adjustments you have made to the design, such as shadows on the outskirts of design and add a faint light from the sky into the valley and made valuable Depth 60% ( I wish to hear your opinion on this value 60% )...
I wish the work better than the previous ...If there are comments on the latest amendments Or add new amendments , I wish tell me  ... We await your comments, criticism and suggestions that would help to develop our level to the best ... |
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23-10-2007, 03:36 AM
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Hello mohammedbood,
I really liked your image, but the new ones i guess are a bit far form what suirebit said. (well the way I understand it.) What he meant was this, as an object moves farther away from the camera it looses it color values, meaning it turns grey, not necessarilly gray flat but more gray less color. What you did was blur the image, which in turn shifted the focus to the lizard. You lost a lot of detail and in my opinion, that took a lot of beauty from your image. Try removing the blur and add a little grey in the back part instead, that might give you better results. I hoped I helped. Again you have a great piece of art here |
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23-10-2007, 11:10 AM
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I agree on Eyecon.. although I should not 100% remove the Blur.. Keep some low % blur.. 10 / 20 % ish blur. And put on some greytones..
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24-10-2007, 06:05 AM
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Thank you my friend eyecon wonderful
, and thank you for the clarification and observations beautiful  , and in fact I really weak English language  , but used in translation dictionaries not forget my friend wonderful Al-Haitham Jassar which help me to translate sentences, which did not understand the meaning ...I thank my friend Kingcolin to comment wonderful ...I hope that the amendment is now much better than before ...Sorry, the delay in amendments, Because a large volume of design W : 5764 - H : 2780 , and I find it difficult to Move freely in the painting  ... I waited your comments after the latest amendments ... |
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24-10-2007, 06:35 AM
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Looks good, nice idea.
what always helps me is to stand back, zoom out of the pic a bit and squint it down. Values are huge for painting. I tihnk I like the first pic with not so much blur works a little better than now. And maybe vary the composition a bit, instead of the one mountain ridge cutting straight across, like you can follow the mountain base along a single dark line across the bottom, maybe bring some rocks closer to break it up. Keep going though! Last edited by RQuack; 24-10-2007 at 06:38 AM.. |
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