small site...

oku · 07-04-2003, 05:04 PM

Got my site up, not much on it yet, just a few images i did in photoshop, and a bit of my turntables skills to listem to! Tell met what you think, allways looking for ways to improve...

oku

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-=THE_PUNISHER= · 08-04-2003, 03:43 PM

hi,

to be honest, you're site is total crap.

maybe its smart to make a template before you start making the website.
The information is all over the page and not very nice and clear to read.
The buttons are okay but the rest is not good. Try to use tables and layers. And take a minute to think about what colors to use. You're site looks like it has been made by someone who has downloaded dreamweaver demo and started working without any skills on how to make a website.

maybe a tip:
Try to make the structure first and work that out before you start creating the site.

oku · 08-04-2003, 05:12 PM

thanks for your constructive criticism.spanka!

Corth · 13-04-2003, 06:04 AM

I like the buttons and the graphics you have all around on the pages, they look neat.

It does seem that you went ahead and created the page before putting much thought to it though. I would suggest sketching a layout on paper first, that would go with your whole page, then creating it on the computer. You also need something that holds the page together, not having pictures "floating" about, it looks much more professional that way (3dtotal is a great example

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oku · 13-04-2003, 01:41 PM

yeah i agree, need more of a proper design. I did quite rush it, just wanted somewhere to put up some of my photoshop images for a small portfolio type site. Will put more into to soon though. Thanks for ur comments.

oku

zoo-prod · 15-04-2003, 02:50 PM

Sorry. I don't like your design and your colors...
I think it''s a little ugly (colors !!! )...

But i'm sure you can do better.
surf the web, look beautifful sites and search some imagination. Then i'm sure it will be better

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oku Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	small site... Got my site up, not much on it yet, just a few images i did in photoshop, and a bit of my turntables skills to listem to! Tell met what you think, allways looking for ways to improve... oku click Last edited by oku; 08-04-2003 at 05:20 PM..

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oku Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for your constructive criticism.spanka! Last edited by oku; 08-04-2003 at 05:19 PM..

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Corth Post Count +1! Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Alberta, Canada Posts: 454 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I like the buttons and the graphics you have all around on the pages, they look neat. It does seem that you went ahead and created the page before putting much thought to it though. I would suggest sketching a layout on paper first, that would go with your whole page, then creating it on the computer. You also need something that holds the page together, not having pictures "floating" about, it looks much more professional that way (3dtotal is a great example ) __________________ I'm going to live forever, or die trying. Web

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zoo-prod Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Paris Posts: 132 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	... Sorry. I don't like your design and your colors... I think it''s a little ugly (colors !!! )... But i'm sure you can do better. surf the web, look beautifful sites and search some imagination. Then i'm sure it will be better __________________ ZoO-PrOd ============== www.zoo-prod.fr.st ==============

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08-04-2003, 03:43 PM	#2
-=THE_PUNISHER= Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Posts: 35 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hi, to be honest, you're site is total crap. maybe its smart to make a template before you start making the website. The information is all over the page and not very nice and clear to read. The buttons are okay but the rest is not good. Try to use tables and layers. And take a minute to think about what colors to use. You're site looks like it has been made by someone who has downloaded dreamweaver demo and started working without any skills on how to make a website. maybe a tip: Try to make the structure first and work that out before you start creating the site.

13-04-2003, 01:41 PM	#5
oku Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yeah i agree, need more of a proper design. I did quite rush it, just wanted somewhere to put up some of my photoshop images for a small portfolio type site. Will put more into to soon though. Thanks for ur comments. oku

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