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a wip of a volkswagen beetle i've been working on. crits welcome!
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Canadian, eh?
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I think it looks good. On the whole it's very accurate, clean and tidy. Unfortunately, a few areas let it down. The biggest of these is the headlight area, it's kind of deformed there, and the polyflow good use some serious work. Also, I think some tweaking is in order for the corner of the hood and the doorhandles, they are a little bit untidy.
Other than that, looks like a solid start.
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a material test, plus some things added.
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Hi man maybe this may help you
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thanx kujoe!
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a materials update and a question: how can i make the light go through the glass material?
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Hi maybe put a light inside and lwer it down.maybe .34
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started working on the backround fore the car. backround inspired by one of the textures on www.mayang.com/textures/.
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another scene update. am I on the right track?
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Nice progress!
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thanks for liking it bubbaloo.
another small update further enhancing the atmosfere. (i guess) |
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more comments?
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not bad. I would try to tweak the FG settings a little more it reduce some of noise (if htat was the effect you were going for, then X that last statement).
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more updates
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Don't like that tree!
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