A beautiful face

stevefox · 09-04-2003, 08:33 PM

Hi im new to the forum and this is the first head ive planned that looks good and im ready to model it, so give some feed back as to what i should fix. Im going for photo realistic. Does it look good overall. one thing i noticed is that the front forehead looks a little wide. should i fix it or is it all right?

Jordan · 09-04-2003, 09:01 PM

Hmm not bad but proportion r a bit off and the eye r too high...forehead is too small and mouth too big

I quickly drew a fem face to show you..hope this will help.

stevefox · 09-04-2003, 11:38 PM

I think i fixed it now, it does look better this way, do you think the eyes should go down further since i didn't move them all that much.

Jordan · 10-04-2003, 12:29 AM

no...the eyes look better now

Tweaked verteX · 13-04-2003, 03:31 PM

At times like these a little shading always helps. I've taken the liberty. Once the highlights and shadows were added, the problems became more apparent - the eyebrows were too low and the lips were a little too high. She was a little wall eyed too. Hope this is helpful to you.

Tweaked verteX · 13-04-2003, 03:32 PM

*slaps forehead*

Rephrase. I hope -THIS- is helpful

Vitron · 15-04-2003, 02:56 AM

Eyes aren't right. They are too far apart. There should be about one eye length between the eyes. Here is a good site for drawing the face. Click
Hope that helps.

Vitron

stevefox · 15-04-2003, 04:50 PM

Hey guys this helps allot, to bad i modeled it a day before you replyed and found my mistakes the hard way. it looks a bit alien

right now with the eyes off to the side. anyway, i need the practice and i have lots of free time now, ill probably update my picture or redoo it sometime this week.

stevefox · 24-04-2003, 02:10 AM

Well i started over, got some better references and came out with this, my only problem is that im not sure how the top of the head should look so if someone could quickly outline it for me that would help allot! I havn't finished shading yet, it's the first time ive tried painting like this, it's fun.

stevefox · 29-04-2003, 03:13 PM

well i think it's good , please give me feed back, is it ready to model or is there something i should change,

I don't think ill do this much detail on the side view

sneaky_d · 29-04-2003, 03:48 PM

Polykarbon has some really good tutorials on drawing. It's slanted towards anime but it's got some good general drawing tuts as well.

The guy behind it does some work for the games industry - think his latest was doing character for Quantum Redshift.

sneaky_d

Dan-3DT · 22-05-2003, 03:56 PM

Moved this post to the 2D forum as it isn't really concept art...

09-04-2003, 08:33 PM	#1
stevefox Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	A beautiful face Hi im new to the forum and this is the first head ive planned that looks good and im ready to model it, so give some feed back as to what i should fix. Im going for photo realistic. Does it look good overall. one thing i noticed is that the front forehead looks a little wide. should i fix it or is it all right? Attached Images Last edited by stevefox; 09-04-2003 at 08:35 PM..

09-04-2003, 09:01 PM	#2
Jordan Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Quebec - Canada Posts: 16 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hmm not bad but proportion r a bit off and the eye r too high...forehead is too small and mouth too big I quickly drew a fem face to show you..hope this will help. Attached Images __________________ 3D Makes Dreams Real

09-04-2003, 11:38 PM	#3
stevefox Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	is it better I think i fixed it now, it does look better this way, do you think the eyes should go down further since i didn't move them all that much. Attached Images

10-04-2003, 12:29 AM	#4
Jordan Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Quebec - Canada Posts: 16 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	no...the eyes look better now __________________ 3D Makes Dreams Real

13-04-2003, 03:31 PM	#5
Tweaked verteX Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Canberra, Australia Posts: 172 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	At times like these a little shading always helps. I've taken the liberty. Once the highlights and shadows were added, the problems became more apparent - the eyebrows were too low and the lips were a little too high. She was a little wall eyed too. Hope this is helpful to you. Last edited by Tweaked verteX; 13-04-2003 at 03:34 PM..

13-04-2003, 03:32 PM	#6
Tweaked verteX Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Canberra, Australia Posts: 172 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	slaps forehead Rephrase. I hope -THIS- is helpful Attached Images

15-04-2003, 02:56 AM	#7
Vitron Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Earth Posts: 14 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Eyes aren't right. They are too far apart. There should be about one eye length between the eyes. Here is a good site for drawing the face. Click Hope that helps. Vitron

15-04-2003, 04:50 PM	#8
stevefox Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey guys this helps allot, to bad i modeled it a day before you replyed and found my mistakes the hard way. it looks a bit alien right now with the eyes off to the side. anyway, i need the practice and i have lots of free time now, ill probably update my picture or redoo it sometime this week.

24-04-2003, 02:10 AM	#9
stevefox Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Reedoo Well i started over, got some better references and came out with this, my only problem is that im not sure how the top of the head should look so if someone could quickly outline it for me that would help allot! I havn't finished shading yet, it's the first time ive tried painting like this, it's fun. Attached Images

29-04-2003, 03:13 PM	#10
stevefox Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Canada Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	well i think it's good , please give me feed back, is it ready to model or is there something i should change, I don't think ill do this much detail on the side view Attached Images

29-04-2003, 03:48 PM	#11
sneaky_d Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: UK Posts: 71 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Polykarbon has some really good tutorials on drawing. It's slanted towards anime but it's got some good general drawing tuts as well. The guy behind it does some work for the games industry - think his latest was doing character for Quantum Redshift. sneaky_d __________________ My slice of Deviant Art

22-05-2003, 03:56 PM	#12
Dan-3DT Master Designer Join Date: Sep 2002 Location: Philadelphia, PA USA Posts: 368 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Moved this post to the 2D forum as it isn't really concept art... __________________ Dan online portfolio

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