[nudity] Warmachine

luisaum_gma · 30-01-2008, 06:57 PM

Hi, this is my latest work, i just finished it.
I hope you guys like it, it's about a machine made for war battles, that has a kinda beauty as contrast.

2k

Thanks.

inveni0 · 30-01-2008, 07:09 PM

I like the image quality, but the concept seems a bit strange. It appears like this machine would do very little in a battle (besides distract the opposition).

neolith · 30-01-2008, 07:35 PM

Wow,i saw "nudity" in the thread title so i just had to see this.Anyway,i agree with invenio.The image looks great,but what bothers me is the way the legs look,i dont know how this robot could walk without stumbling every 2 steps.But i like it anyway,good work

RockstarKate · 30-01-2008, 08:34 PM

The subject is corny. Boobs on a robot! It really doesn't get any more cliche than that.
The textures and lighting look pretty nice.

newhere · 31-01-2008, 09:02 AM

I like the concept tho the legs do bother me too.......i like how you mixed real human parts (skin,bones,coagulated blood) with mechanical parts.

Pirateguybrush · 31-01-2008, 11:24 PM

Yeah, I can't see how it'd walk either. I also don't see the point of putting boobs on a robot, nice boobs though they may be. Still, it's a well exexuted piece, though it may not make sense.

yoyomon · 01-02-2008, 01:11 AM

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Wow,i saw "nudity" in the thread title so i just had to see this.

I second that! I was also hoping for the TT game =(.

But yeah I agree with the other guys. The rendering looks pretty good but the design needs work. It'll be nice to see some metal parts/armor on the exposed torso to help unify it with the rest of the body. The nobs on the neck are too small to really be considered. The arm with the chain gun should be looked at again. The skin flapping over the robotic bicep should be the other way around. It should look as if the metal was grafted on her instead of growing out of her. No ammo box/belt on the cannon? Definitely revisit the lower torso and legs. They look really cumbersome and limited in articulation. If you want to stick with the chicken legs. Try looking at an AT-ST for inspiration.

luisaum_gma · 01-02-2008, 08:20 PM

thanks guys for the c&c! about the legs, i did a rig, so its totally animatable.

i did a little color correction:

Thanks.

miclepickle · 11-02-2008, 06:35 AM

i think the legs should be more like a human skeleton, so it looks like it looks like it once had skin covering the rest of the body but was torn off.

Pirateguybrush · 11-02-2008, 08:31 AM

Seconded. Quite possibly bones with metal re-enforcements and coverings.

30-01-2008, 06:57 PM	#1
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	[nudity] Warmachine Hi, this is my latest work, i just finished it. I hope you guys like it, it's about a machine made for war battles, that has a kinda beauty as contrast. 2k Thanks.

30-01-2008, 07:09 PM	#2
inveni0 Man of the Hour Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Why right here, of course... Posts: 6,829 Thanks: 40 Thanked 37 Times in 33 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	I like the image quality, but the concept seems a bit strange. It appears like this machine would do very little in a battle (besides distract the opposition). __________________ I need a 2D landscape artist (bright, vibrant, atmospheric, a little cartoony) willing to collab on mobile game development. Responsibilities would involve painting props, foregrounds, and backdrops in 8 different states. Want more info? Interested? Just PM me.

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newhere Work, art and videogames Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Boston, Massachusettes Posts: 1,235 Thanks: 10 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	I like the concept tho the legs do bother me too.......i like how you mixed real human parts (skin,bones,coagulated blood) with mechanical parts. __________________ "Life is like a video game that you have to play seriously. You can't just push the start button if you fail and come back in with everything you know or everything you have gained over a period of time." ~Newhere~ Angel Mars (Nudity) http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=75414 Queen's Blade Vol. 12 ~ Cattleya http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=62172 Dominance War V - God Of Enlightenment: http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=82875

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30-01-2008, 08:34 PM	#4
RockstarKate Maxaholics Anonymous Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Redwood City, CA Posts: 1,244 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	The subject is corny. Boobs on a robot! It really doesn't get any more cliche than that. The textures and lighting look pretty nice.

31-01-2008, 11:24 PM	#6
Pirateguybrush Learning The Ropes Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 789 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Yeah, I can't see how it'd walk either. I also don't see the point of putting boobs on a robot, nice boobs though they may be. Still, it's a well exexuted piece, though it may not make sense.

01-02-2008, 08:20 PM	#8
luisaum_gma CG Artist Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: brazil Posts: 72 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	thanks guys for the c&c! about the legs, i did a rig, so its totally animatable. i did a little color correction: Thanks.

11-02-2008, 06:35 AM	#9
miclepickle Registered User Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: Kansas City Posts: 181 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	i think the legs should be more like a human skeleton, so it looks like it looks like it once had skin covering the rest of the body but was torn off.

11-02-2008, 08:31 AM	#10
Pirateguybrush Learning The Ropes Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 789 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Seconded. Quite possibly bones with metal re-enforcements and coverings.

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