my new character

ledmagic · 19-04-2008, 08:48 AM

Hi everyone , this time I take a character (a girl

) to you . it is my first finished character. i model the girl by 3ds max and render it in mental ray . i draw the maps in photoshop and bodypaint. i wish you like it , and if you have many suggestions , please reply!

ClassicGamer-3DT · 19-04-2008, 09:25 AM

Superb effort for a first character.

Looks great to me, much better than I could ever do

CG

ggutshal · 19-04-2008, 12:16 PM

She's pretty! Good job. Only critique I can think of is that her hands look a little small.

parleee · 19-04-2008, 01:38 PM

Nice work, very clean attractive modeling. I really think her proportions could be adjusted though, assuming you're going for realism. Her arms are too short I believe, but the biggest issue is her head, it is much too big. In comparison to her legs, her torso is a little short as well.

Good work.

ledmagic · 20-04-2008, 04:46 AM

thank you for all the replies.at beginning ,i wanted to make a Japanese style character ,and i found some references . but when i finished it ,i found it was very different from the references.

here is one of the references.

DJdude · 20-04-2008, 05:55 AM

nice character. my first character was a horrid mess.

Lethn · 20-04-2008, 08:56 PM

That's a great model for a first, I agree with the others heh, I'm still trying to make mine had quite a few failed head attempts already >_> I actually shudder at my old work now when I look at it heh.

dhruvsm · 21-04-2008, 07:45 PM

congratulation on the ur first character!!! and as for that, its beautiful...!!!...

keep it up...!!!

Aniboomer · 23-04-2008, 08:02 AM

excellent for a first model! I think something's wrong with her elbows though...

19-04-2008, 08:48 AM	#1
ledmagic Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: china Posts: 25 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	my new character Hi everyone , this time I take a character (a girl) to you . it is my first finished character. i model the girl by 3ds max and render it in mental ray . i draw the maps in photoshop and bodypaint. i wish you like it , and if you have many suggestions , please reply! Attached Images

19-04-2008, 09:25 AM	#2
ClassicGamer-3DT Reliable Moderator Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: East Midlands, UK Posts: 7,471 Thanks: 500 Thanked 378 Times in 343 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Superb effort for a first character. Looks great to me, much better than I could ever do CG __________________ iMac\|Lion OSX\|Cinema 4D R12\|Photoshop CS4\| My New Portfolio My Blog (Now with Free Models) Twitter

19-04-2008, 01:38 PM	#4
parleee Canadian, eh? Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Manisnowba Posts: 1,226 Thanks: 32 Thanked 37 Times in 35 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Nice work, very clean attractive modeling. I really think her proportions could be adjusted though, assuming you're going for realism. Her arms are too short I believe, but the biggest issue is her head, it is much too big. In comparison to her legs, her torso is a little short as well. Good work. __________________ Rawr? Looking for work. * http://vimeo.com/27518412 my panhead model, free to use for credited, non-commercial work. https://www.dropbox.com/s/z086qvlg33h42rg/panhead.zip

20-04-2008, 04:46 AM	#5
ledmagic Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: china Posts: 25 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thank you for all the replies.at beginning ,i wanted to make a Japanese style character ,and i found some references . but when i finished it ,i found it was very different from the references. here is one of the references. Attached Images

21-04-2008, 07:45 PM	#8
dhruvsm Registered User Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: bangalore, india Posts: 1,179 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	congratulation on the ur first character!!! and as for that, its beautiful...!!!... keep it up...!!! __________________ WIPs my low poly thread!!! the roman soldier!!! the MALE head, Updates! page - 04 Hanuman - The Indian Mythological God,Updates! page-03 The Southern Cross - Creature >page 04 my Sculptures thread...(nudity!!!) www.dhruvsm.blogspot.com

19-04-2008, 12:16 PM	#3
ggutshal Registered User Join Date: Feb 2005 Posts: 56 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	She's pretty! Good job. Only critique I can think of is that her hands look a little small.

20-04-2008, 05:55 AM	#6
DJdude noobster Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: nowheresville Posts: 958 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	nice character. my first character was a horrid mess.

20-04-2008, 08:56 PM	#7
Lethn Registered User Join Date: Dec 2007 Posts: 266 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That's a great model for a first, I agree with the others heh, I'm still trying to make mine had quite a few failed head attempts already >_> I actually shudder at my old work now when I look at it heh.

23-04-2008, 08:02 AM	#9
Aniboomer http://www.aniboom.com Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: The Internet Posts: 157 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	excellent for a first model! I think something's wrong with her elbows though... __________________ http://www.aniboom.com

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