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darkskills · 18-04-2003, 06:44 AM

Opinions and Critiques are always welcome.

Styles · 18-04-2003, 11:17 AM

Nice work...I love the rain effect and the detail of it in contact with the buildings.

in general i like it, except for a few minor details...

1- the clouds are white and it takes the details of you rain away...clouds and ambiant light are usually darker on rainy days

2- the two towers on top look a weee bit too much like candles

Good Job

Downup · 19-04-2003, 08:23 PM

Whi

1. The image is too bright? dont kow
2. the Ground is crazy
3. THIS IS A GREAT IMAGE AND THE RAIN I SUPER!!!!!

sneaky_d · 19-04-2003, 11:44 PM

Nice image. There are a few things I'd change tho.

1. The clouds, as mentioned - they are too light for this kind of thing. Dark and brooding is what you want (just drop them brightness/lightness in which ever package you have).

2. The lights on the building seem a little bit wierd, windows fading in and out - doesn't sit right with me.

3. The sign seems a little off - the 68. Don't know why just seems a bit wrong

4. The whole image is too light - really heavy rain as suggested by the spattering on the first roof would mean you'd have really low visibility - maybe drop your lighting system down a little bit, make it more gloomy.

Last thing is the rain - It's real nice but I'm not sure whether you had it in shot or comped it. If you didn't comp it you really should - it'll drop your render times a lot. The same for the rain drops landing on the roof - that could all be another layer and comping would be real easy.

Great work - just needs a little polish - like most things

sneaky_d

Styles · 24-04-2003, 02:40 PM

Whats Comping??? do you mean compositing?

sneaky_d · 24-04-2003, 06:39 PM

Yeah I did mean compositing

sneaky_d

bilfrok · 23-05-2003, 01:53 PM

Well done! You are full of own style my friend! I think what it is more important its develope your own way.

Awesome rain effect, I hope we´ll see it animated

18-04-2003, 06:44 AM	#1
darkskills Full-Cel Alchemist Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Metro Detroit Area Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Environment: Tech Facility Opinions and Critiques are always welcome.

18-04-2003, 11:17 AM	#2
Styles Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Montreal Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice work...I love the rain effect and the detail of it in contact with the buildings. in general i like it, except for a few minor details... 1- the clouds are white and it takes the details of you rain away...clouds and ambiant light are usually darker on rainy days 2- the two towers on top look a weee bit too much like candles Good Job __________________ "WORK" should only be a word in your description of "FUN" __________________________ http://www.meetfeed.com

19-04-2003, 08:23 PM	#3
Downup 3D Studio Max 7.0 Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: In a box Posts: 2,112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whi 1. The image is too bright? dont kow 2. the Ground is crazy 3. THIS IS A GREAT IMAGE AND THE RAIN I SUPER!!!!! __________________ 40% Stupid + 60% BrainDead = 100% Downup Some undone work http://downup.inc.se/

19-04-2003, 11:44 PM	#4
sneaky_d Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: UK Posts: 71 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice image. There are a few things I'd change tho. 1. The clouds, as mentioned - they are too light for this kind of thing. Dark and brooding is what you want (just drop them brightness/lightness in which ever package you have). 2. The lights on the building seem a little bit wierd, windows fading in and out - doesn't sit right with me. 3. The sign seems a little off - the 68. Don't know why just seems a bit wrong 4. The whole image is too light - really heavy rain as suggested by the spattering on the first roof would mean you'd have really low visibility - maybe drop your lighting system down a little bit, make it more gloomy. Last thing is the rain - It's real nice but I'm not sure whether you had it in shot or comped it. If you didn't comp it you really should - it'll drop your render times a lot. The same for the rain drops landing on the roof - that could all be another layer and comping would be real easy. Great work - just needs a little polish - like most things sneaky_d __________________ My slice of Deviant Art

24-04-2003, 02:40 PM	#5
Styles Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Montreal Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Whats Comping??? do you mean compositing? __________________ "WORK" should only be a word in your description of "FUN" __________________________ http://www.meetfeed.com

24-04-2003, 06:39 PM	#6
sneaky_d Registered User Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: UK Posts: 71 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yeah I did mean compositing sneaky_d __________________ My slice of Deviant Art

23-05-2003, 01:53 PM	#7
bilfrok Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Location: Madrid Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	great work Well done! You are full of own style my friend! I think what it is more important its develope your own way. Awesome rain effect, I hope we´ll see it animated __________________ bilfrok.com

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