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[NeXt 0ne]

Hey!
I decided to model my mobile phone, i spend like a mont for the model of phone, and a week for render. model was made in cinema 4d. The ambient occlusion was rendered with cinema advanced render, the mdel itself was rendered vith vray. I composed it in photoshop. i hope you like it, please comment.

[Banaan]

love the background on the phone

the render looks a bit dull to me :c

[BattlemasterXP]

I agree with Banaan about this dull look,
but for me it's not the render itself,
in my opinion it's the shading.
Have you used a noise map in your material for the "chrome" and the case material on the back with the "Siemens" stroke?,
if yes,delet it or increase the tiling number,what ever will improve the look.

Another point is the presentation.
You should use one keylight which is the brightest one, so you will get a falloff from one to the other side. For the overall look you have to play around with some additional lights,but I think you already know that.
This aspect will capture the viewers attention and will make the whole image more interesting.

And as my last advice, you should decrease the space between the Mobilephones (less renderspace;better focus)
May you should follow therefor the triangle rule like for still lifes.

Don't take me wrong,
your work is great, constructive crit isn't missplaced, he? ;D

[NeXt 0ne]

Originally Posted by BattlemasterXP

Don't take me wrong,
your work is great, constructive crit isn't missplaced, he? ;D

No, no it ain't , thanks alot for these instructions. tomorow i'll post another "final image".

[NeXt 0ne]

Did soem photoshop corrections. Cose im to lazy to play with rendering. Those sugestion will have to wait till next project. Thanks anyway.