SpaceGraveyard - incremation

wil_13 · 01-06-2008, 03:19 PM

wil_13 · 01-06-2008, 03:22 PM

planet incremation.. i think my matte painting is off topic.. any way please C&C

DaddyDoom · 01-06-2008, 04:20 PM

Great colors and composition! Love it.

DD

wil_13 · 02-06-2008, 10:24 AM

- DaddyDoom- Thank you!

Nocturn8 · 02-06-2008, 10:42 AM

wil_13 · 02-06-2008, 10:47 AM

now.. i'm trying to fix the stars at the BG.. hopefully it will give more depth to the picture..

DJdude · 02-06-2008, 10:55 AM

that is awesome.

wil_13 · 02-06-2008, 10:56 AM

-DJdude- Thank you!

wil_13 · 03-06-2008, 05:49 PM

here are some of my updates.. I feel very struck now, need some comments.. please C&C

eyecon · 03-06-2008, 07:04 PM

Hye dude are you done with this image? you might want to post the final one here : http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=58906

If would be a shame if you did not make it...

chubu · 03-06-2008, 08:56 PM

hey man
i think maybe i know whats bothring you in your image:
i think there are too many little stars in the foreground and too few in the BG.
i think you should reduce somthing like 70% of the stars in the foreground because
the light is very bright in the front, so we shouldnt see so many stars in the forground.
its only my opinion, hope it helps

and BTW, its an amazing job. nice!
did you use 3d elements?

wil_13 · 05-06-2008, 07:42 PM

-eyecon- HI

I have done finally..
-Chubu- Thanks alot.. I think it look better.. Only the debris are 3d elements, most are photo elements.. i have scaled down the size of the stars..

Here is my final..
Please feel free to comment..

Rafalf · 05-06-2008, 07:58 PM

Hello

very nice concept, I really like it but maybe if you reduced some objects in the foreground particularly on the left part, it would give us better look on whole image, because now when I`m looking on it my eyes concentrate on each object . I hope you understand what i mean

hehe

You should do something with it

wil_13 · 05-06-2008, 08:10 PM

-Rafalf- Thanks ALot

I will reduce it.. I will take away the aircraft on the left hand side and scale the objects smaller to make it less obvious..

01-06-2008, 03:19 PM	#1
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	SpaceGraveyard - incremation SpaceGraveyard - incremation __________________ -sorry for my English-

01-06-2008, 03:22 PM	#2
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	please C&C planet incremation.. i think my matte painting is off topic.. any way please C&C Attached Images __________________ -sorry for my English-

01-06-2008, 04:20 PM	#3
DaddyDoom has them big as mellons! Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Portugal Posts: 4,779 Thanks: 66 Thanked 56 Times in 33 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 11	Great colors and composition! Love it. DD __________________ Zuckerberg created the Social Network and got filthy rich in the process. Sathe created the Anti-Social Network and wont get rich in the process.

02-06-2008, 10:24 AM	#4
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02-06-2008, 10:42 AM	#5
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02-06-2008, 10:47 AM	#6
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	now.. i'm trying to fix the stars at the BG.. hopefully it will give more depth to the picture.. __________________ -sorry for my English-

02-06-2008, 10:55 AM	#7
DJdude noobster Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: nowheresville Posts: 958 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	that is awesome. __________________ My Dom War-http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=65766

02-06-2008, 10:56 AM	#8
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	-DJdude- Thank you! __________________ -sorry for my English-

03-06-2008, 05:49 PM	#9
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Help here are some of my updates.. I feel very struck now, need some comments.. please C&C Attached Images __________________ -sorry for my English-

03-06-2008, 07:04 PM	#10
eyecon Matte what? Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Singapore, Philippines Posts: 332 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Hye dude are you done with this image? you might want to post the final one here : http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=58906 If would be a shame if you did not make it... __________________ :: Believe in what is real :: visualize in what is not :: My CGportfolio and Deviant CGsociety Deviant 2008 Mattepainting Reel : HIGH RES Low Res

03-06-2008, 08:56 PM	#11
chubu Stranger Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 257 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	hey man i think maybe i know whats bothring you in your image: i think there are too many little stars in the foreground and too few in the BG. i think you should reduce somthing like 70% of the stars in the foreground because the light is very bright in the front, so we shouldnt see so many stars in the forground. its only my opinion, hope it helps and BTW, its an amazing job. nice! did you use 3d elements? __________________ My Portfolio: http://www.wix.com/guyzinger/myportfolio My blog: http://guyzinger.wordpress.com/

05-06-2008, 07:42 PM	#12
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	-eyecon- HI I have done finally.. -Chubu- Thanks alot.. I think it look better.. Only the debris are 3d elements, most are photo elements.. i have scaled down the size of the stars.. Here is my final.. Please feel free to comment.. Attached Images __________________ -sorry for my English-

05-06-2008, 07:58 PM	#13
Rafalf Registered User Join Date: Apr 2008 Posts: 11 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Hello very nice concept, I really like it but maybe if you reduced some objects in the foreground particularly on the left part, it would give us better look on whole image, because now when I`m looking on it my eyes concentrate on each object . I hope you understand what i mean hehe You should do something with it Attached Images

05-06-2008, 08:10 PM	#14
wil_13 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Singapore Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	-Rafalf- Thanks ALot I will reduce it.. I will take away the aircraft on the left hand side and scale the objects smaller to make it less obvious.. __________________ -sorry for my English-

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