Ranger

al3x · 30-06-2008, 10:19 AM

This is my firs version of my latest character

parleee · 30-06-2008, 01:45 PM

Doesn't look too bad, though the render could use a lot more life to it. It is very empty at the moment. I think his pose could use some work as well, it looks a little wooden at the moment. Lastly, the ground could use some serious work, especially those spikes.

It's kind of hard to tell anything though, with the render being that small.

al3x · 30-06-2008, 02:06 PM

ups that was a w.ip render; this is the real one ..sry

Josh_Strey · 30-06-2008, 02:18 PM

The modeling looks pretty good, especially the bow.
Only crit I can come up with right now, is the textures look kind of flat and very clean. Its almost like hes never been into a battle, and everything just seems like it needs some dirt and grunge.

Cool render though,

J

30-06-2008, 10:19 AM	#1
al3x Registered User Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 680 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Ranger This is my firs version of my latest character __________________ old stufs -------------------- My youtube 3d stufs : (modeling a dodge challenger , HD , ) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pm8iP..._order&list=UL Last edited by al3x; 30-06-2008 at 10:32 AM..

30-06-2008, 01:45 PM	#2
parleee Canadian, eh? Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Manisnowba Posts: 1,230 Thanks: 33 Thanked 38 Times in 36 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Doesn't look too bad, though the render could use a lot more life to it. It is very empty at the moment. I think his pose could use some work as well, it looks a little wooden at the moment. Lastly, the ground could use some serious work, especially those spikes. It's kind of hard to tell anything though, with the render being that small. __________________ Rawr? Looking for work. * http://vimeo.com/27518412 my panhead model, free to use for credited, non-commercial work. https://www.dropbox.com/s/z086qvlg33h42rg/panhead.zip

30-06-2008, 02:06 PM	#3
al3x Registered User Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Romania Posts: 680 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	ups that was a w.ip render; this is the real one ..sry Attached Images __________________ old stufs -------------------- My youtube 3d stufs : (modeling a dodge challenger , HD , ) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pm8iP..._order&list=UL

30-06-2008, 02:18 PM	#4
Josh_Strey Taco Eating Texan Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Texas Posts: 44 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	The modeling looks pretty good, especially the bow. Only crit I can come up with right now, is the textures look kind of flat and very clean. Its almost like hes never been into a battle, and everything just seems like it needs some dirt and grunge. Cool render though, J __________________ My Portfolio JStrey- Sketchbook

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