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Old 13-08-2008, 10:01 PM   #1
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Smile My First Vehicle

Hi all, long time no post.

WOW I have just seen Classicgamers post; it looks so detailed, very professional.

This is my attempt at a SWB series 111 Land Rover.

This is my first real attempt at a vehicle. What I have learnt is that I should have got some more reference photos and done some more research.

I have been building this in my spare time, for fun and because I love Land Rovers. There is some modelling and material editing that I am still not happy with especially the tyres.

All I really need to do is to watch Classicgamers post.

Advice critics and comments are very welcome.
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Old 14-08-2008, 03:13 PM   #2
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Nice Model^^
If you have Problems of finding Refs for some special places i can make you a few
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Old 14-08-2008, 05:34 PM   #3
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Looks good, you'll see just how similar ours look when mine is finished as all I can see so far is that my headlights are different.

Not bad at all though, thank you for the mention

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Old 14-08-2008, 07:25 PM   #4
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If you have Problems of finding Refs for some special places i can make you a few
Thanks, FatteWorst

That is very kind of you to offer your support.

Not sure what my next project is going to be. Possibly my old 1971 Triumph T120 Bonneville; that’s been in my shed since I’ve had children, although it will take some time to find it under all the cob webs.

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Looks good, you'll see just how similar ours look when mine is finished as all I can see so far is that my headlights are different.

Not bad at all though, thank you for the mention

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Thank you CLASSICGAMER, for your comment.

The underneath of your series II looks absolutely brilliant, can’t wait to see the rest.

I think the series II and III are very similar, although I am no expert. The main differences are the smaller details such as the hinges and as you mentioned the positioning of the lights.

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Old 04-09-2008, 10:12 PM   #6
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Hi again,

I have just been away on my hols. so I havnt had much time to do much.

All I have had time to do is re-shape the rear wheel arch and add the roof to the back as well as some smaller details.

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Old 04-09-2008, 10:36 PM   #7
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Looks good, but these wheel arches are a bit rough at the moment. Btw when will you start modeling that T1 camperwan you have on sig. If it is what i am thinking?
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Old 04-09-2008, 11:00 PM   #8
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Looks good, but these wheel arches are a bit rough at the moment. Btw when will you start modeling that T1 camperwan you have on sig. If it is what i am thinking?
Thanks Next One,

You are correct, they are a bit rough, I will try and smooth them out soon. I am still not happy with the wheels either.
I may atempt a camper at some point, the one om my sig is a T2, need to try and finnish this first.

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PS. Very nice Lada, I will be watching your thread as well.
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Just added some more details and rounded the wheel arches more, thanks Next One.
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Hey looks much better. When you decide to model that Wan, tell me, we can have a little comp. or something, cose i also really wanna model one of them. good luck with you project.
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Old 08-09-2008, 09:32 PM   #11
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Modelling looks pretty solid. Only thing I can suggest is to try and add some thickness to the body work if you can.
I think with a scene though, this will stand out
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Hey looks much better. When you decide to model that Wan, tell me, we can have a little comp. or something, cose i also really wanna model one of them. good luck with you project.

Thanks, Next One.

I will love to do a camper van one day, but not sure when, I will let you know.
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Modelling looks pretty solid. Only thing I can suggest is to try and add some thickness to the body work if you can.
I think with a scene though, this will stand out

Nice one, Kage.

Yes you have noticed my door (handle), has no thickness. I had already given the body thickness but I had completely over looked the door (handle). Thanks again.
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Hi again,
Just started sorting out the materials, they still need a bit more work. Not sure about the white roof.
Any more advice or crits. will be gratefully received.
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Just started adding some bump maps, not sure that they are a bit to much?
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