Modeling Showreel 08

Untamed · 08-11-2008, 05:21 AM

Hey guys,

Could use some quick feedback on this before I mail it off on monday.

I have only had 2 days to render everything in here + cut it all together! (except the ipod transforming) So it's a bit of a rush job, with next week
being the last week of the semester, which doesn't help either

Ill probably have time for one more cut, but I have other work to get onto, so any tips/comments will be great!

Cheers

http://www.aaronhunwick.com/Showreel08_web.mov

brentagain · 08-11-2008, 08:35 AM

I`m impressed,you have an eye for detail that employers will appreciate.
There are a few GI artifacts on the car but that is a minor thing.
I would suggest a different soundtrack though..that one is pretty annoying

but yeah...excellent work

dd_ · 08-11-2008, 09:04 AM

i agree about the music :/ there are a few little bits that need tweaking ie like his feet at the end jumping/moving off the background plate. but saying that the work itself is very good

McFly · 08-11-2008, 10:09 AM

Models are great but yeah, change the music!

As for the iPod transformer, it's too bad you added the blur effect. It would have been better IMO if we could better see the transformation, see how each piece moves and rotates separately. It's kinda hard to see how the iPod turns into a robot. The end piece is nice though. *thumbs up *

Bubbaloo · 08-11-2008, 12:56 PM

I like the blur effect on the ipod, but I agree with the others that music is distracting and overbearing. Camera match on that last shot is not looking good.

Untamed · 09-11-2008, 03:52 AM

Cheers guys

Ill have another look around for some music. Also the ipod transformation animation is a bit dated now, about a year and a half old. I'm planning on rendering out a properly tracked animation but wont have time this weekend

I contemplated not adding it, but I think it's still a strong piece.

Also the blur effect is only on the starting cut of the transformation, at the end its untouched.

Untamed · 09-11-2008, 10:31 AM

Okay, here is an update. I have pretty much run out of time now.

http://www.aaronhunwick.com/Showreel08_web2.mov

madm4tt · 09-11-2008, 12:51 PM

Great Models Man!

Personnally I would change the "up & Down" camera movement in the "I Pod Bot" turn around.

Bye

MARTS · 09-11-2008, 01:04 PM

Hey ! great show. I like like your bot mode

Excellent

brianBurke · 09-11-2008, 02:24 PM

Really nice work, love the Justice.

08-11-2008, 05:21 AM	#1
Untamed Insane detail club Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: New Zealand Posts: 252 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Modelling Showreel 08 Hey guys, Could use some quick feedback on this before I mail it off on monday. I have only had 2 days to render everything in here + cut it all together! (except the ipod transforming) So it's a bit of a rush job, with next week being the last week of the semester, which doesn't help either Ill probably have time for one more cut, but I have other work to get onto, so any tips/comments will be great! Cheers http://www.aaronhunwick.com/Showreel08_web.mov Attached Images __________________ Freelance 3D Artist : Available for Work Portfolio : http://tewicks.cgsociety.org/gallery/ Bell AH-1Z : Work in progress Last edited by Untamed; 08-11-2008 at 06:02 AM..

08-11-2008, 09:04 AM	#3
dd_ Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: uk Posts: 360 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i agree about the music :/ there are a few little bits that need tweaking ie like his feet at the end jumping/moving off the background plate. but saying that the work itself is very good __________________ www.max3d.org www.renderpimp.com twitter: max3ddotorg

08-11-2008, 10:09 AM	#4
McFly Monogon Join Date: Aug 2003 Location: Ye Ole Continent Posts: 3,184 Thanks: 8 Thanked 245 Times in 232 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Models are great but yeah, change the music! As for the iPod transformer, it's too bad you added the blur effect. It would have been better IMO if we could better see the transformation, see how each piece moves and rotates separately. It's kinda hard to see how the iPod turns into a robot. The end piece is nice though. thumbs up __________________ You see what happens Larry? You see what happens when you meet a stranger in the Alps? - Walter Sobchak My WIP dump

08-11-2008, 12:56 PM	#5
Bubbaloo I be learnin me some 3d. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S.A. Posts: 1,938 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I like the blur effect on the ipod, but I agree with the others that music is distracting and overbearing. Camera match on that last shot is not looking good. __________________ Brian Looney Tulsa, Oklahoma My Wesite: http://lunatic-studio.com/

09-11-2008, 03:52 AM	#6
Untamed Insane detail club Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: New Zealand Posts: 252 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Cheers guys Ill have another look around for some music. Also the ipod transformation animation is a bit dated now, about a year and a half old. I'm planning on rendering out a properly tracked animation but wont have time this weekend I contemplated not adding it, but I think it's still a strong piece. Also the blur effect is only on the starting cut of the transformation, at the end its untouched. __________________ Freelance 3D Artist : Available for Work Portfolio : http://tewicks.cgsociety.org/gallery/ Bell AH-1Z : Work in progress

08-11-2008, 08:35 AM	#2
brentagain Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 780 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I`m impressed,you have an eye for detail that employers will appreciate. There are a few GI artifacts on the car but that is a minor thing. I would suggest a different soundtrack though..that one is pretty annoying but yeah...excellent work

09-11-2008, 10:31 AM	#7
Untamed Insane detail club Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: New Zealand Posts: 252 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Okay, here is an update. I have pretty much run out of time now. http://www.aaronhunwick.com/Showreel08_web2.mov __________________ Freelance 3D Artist : Available for Work Portfolio : http://tewicks.cgsociety.org/gallery/ Bell AH-1Z : Work in progress

09-11-2008, 12:51 PM	#8
madm4tt Designer Join Date: Oct 2003 Posts: 832 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Great Models Man! Personnally I would change the "up & Down" camera movement in the "I Pod Bot" turn around. Bye __________________ May The Force Be With You

09-11-2008, 01:04 PM	#9
MARTS Registered User Join Date: May 2007 Location: France Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hey ! great show. I like like your bot mode Excellent __________________ Sorry for my bad English My blog ==>BLOG'O MARTS

09-11-2008, 02:24 PM	#10
brianBurke Registered User Join Date: May 2006 Location: Santa Monica, CA, USA Posts: 98 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Really nice work, love the Justice.

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