Ipod Shuffle

nexusbird · 10-11-2008, 03:16 AM

Here is my latest work, a I-pod Shuffle, it took me one day to model and texture, and it took me 5 hours to render and composite, would of took less but i had to learn how to render separate parts and put them together in Photoshop.

C&C's are welcome.

Robbert543 · 10-11-2008, 06:21 AM

it's looking good, it's a shame the 'Off' is a little pixelated.

See if you can get some higher resolution maps, and I'm your buddy!

Sathe · 10-11-2008, 06:36 AM

He's not your buddy friend!

Nice model and render, i think image could just be a bit less large and you wouldn't have to worry about the pixelation and aliased edges.

/.G

dd_ · 10-11-2008, 06:50 AM

agreed with the above, make the model not so large, but looking good mate

nexusbird · 10-11-2008, 04:17 PM

Thanks for the comments, so would you suggest to reduce to size of the model maybe add another model but a different angle? or just the same pose but smaller.?

dd_ · 10-11-2008, 04:23 PM

just zoom out a little (maybe)

Kage · 10-11-2008, 04:48 PM

That looks really impressive I think. I agree about the pixelation, but to be honest, I didn't notice that at first glance. Might have just been a style they were going for, as I haven't actually touched one.

nexusbird · 10-11-2008, 06:21 PM

I have reduced the size, added the green on light to give it a bit more character, and i have also got a better camera position and size. Hope you like it.

Kage · 11-11-2008, 01:19 AM

That new renders fantastic!!!

10-11-2008, 03:16 AM	#1
nexusbird Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 119 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ipod Shuffle Here is my latest work, a I-pod Shuffle, it took me one day to model and texture, and it took me 5 hours to render and composite, would of took less but i had to learn how to render separate parts and put them together in Photoshop. C&C's are welcome. Attached Images __________________ www.creativecg.net Last edited by nexusbird; 10-11-2008 at 06:21 PM..

10-11-2008, 06:21 AM	#2
Robbert543 Mental Raytard Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Netherlands Posts: 1,661 Thanks: 5 Thanked 13 Times in 12 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	it's looking good, it's a shame the 'Off' is a little pixelated. See if you can get some higher resolution maps, and I'm your buddy! __________________ Wireframe, or GTFO. uʍop ǝpısdn ƃuıʇʇıs ǝɹ,noʎ 'sıɥʇ pɐǝɹ uɐɔ noʎ ɟı

10-11-2008, 06:36 AM	#3
Sathe Hardstyle Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,367 Thanks: 97 Thanked 44 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	He's not your buddy friend! Nice model and render, i think image could just be a bit less large and you wouldn't have to worry about the pixelation and aliased edges. /.G __________________ ______________________________ Hard Surface Essentials http://vimeo.com/10941211 Threedy 4 life

10-11-2008, 06:50 AM	#4
dd_ Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: uk Posts: 360 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	agreed with the above, make the model not so large, but looking good mate __________________ www.max3d.org www.renderpimp.com twitter: max3ddotorg

10-11-2008, 04:17 PM	#5
nexusbird Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 119 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the comments, so would you suggest to reduce to size of the model maybe add another model but a different angle? or just the same pose but smaller.? __________________ www.creativecg.net

10-11-2008, 04:23 PM	#6
dd_ Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: uk Posts: 360 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	just zoom out a little (maybe) __________________ www.max3d.org www.renderpimp.com twitter: max3ddotorg

10-11-2008, 04:48 PM	#7
Kage Perfectionist... Join Date: May 2006 Location: UK Posts: 3,651 Thanks: 36 Thanked 66 Times in 61 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	That looks really impressive I think. I agree about the pixelation, but to be honest, I didn't notice that at first glance. Might have just been a style they were going for, as I haven't actually touched one. __________________ First Finished Project: Z-5500 Speaker Set Current WIP Projects: Korg Krome from PMC Xbox 360 set Older WIP Projects (Some dead for now): Z-5500 Speaker Set WIP (Now Finished) Dance Pad Model (DDR/DS) WIP

10-11-2008, 06:21 PM	#8
nexusbird Registered User Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 119 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I have reduced the size, added the green on light to give it a bit more character, and i have also got a better camera position and size. Hope you like it. __________________ www.creativecg.net

11-11-2008, 01:19 AM	#9
Kage Perfectionist... Join Date: May 2006 Location: UK Posts: 3,651 Thanks: 36 Thanked 66 Times in 61 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	That new renders fantastic!!! __________________ First Finished Project: Z-5500 Speaker Set Current WIP Projects: Korg Krome from PMC Xbox 360 set Older WIP Projects (Some dead for now): Z-5500 Speaker Set WIP (Now Finished) Dance Pad Model (DDR/DS) WIP

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