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Old 14-02-2009, 07:14 AM   #46
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Update.....

the the fire burnssssss.......
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Old 14-02-2009, 07:20 AM   #47
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So.....

Most of the main character is done, just need to work on the tree head parts, then on to the buildings, hopefully on monday.

So what does everyone think of it so far??

To have a up to date look refer to the first post!!^^
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Old 14-02-2009, 09:52 AM   #48
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Looking really good dude .
The lip's shadow seems a bit exaggerated though. The hair is looking really good!
The red colors made her look much younger and not as mysterious though...
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Old 14-02-2009, 02:14 PM   #49
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It's realy great............ the colors are amazing.......
She looks mysterious, magic and a little scary at the same time.........awesome....
And I agree with hulahuga about the shadow on her lips....
There is one thing that concerns me...........there is a lot of colors already (that looks great)......but what will you going to do with the buildings for not making it to confusing?
Don't need to answer me..........I hope to see the final........
Good luck!!
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Old 14-02-2009, 09:05 PM   #50
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Looking awesome, reminds me of Batman's Poison Ivy.....
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Old 14-02-2009, 09:40 PM   #51
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Looking awesome, reminds me of Batman's Poison Ivy.....
ooo yes it does,
Anyway colours look great, really want to see what's going to happen with the buildings.
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Old 15-02-2009, 12:14 AM   #52
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Hi, thanks for your feed back, keep it coming. I see what you mean about the lips, I'll try to fix it before the next update. On the too much going on part, I was going to first fade out more of the paint on her skin and also fade the whole background and texture as I started to paint the buildings, I know it's all abit too much at the moment!!^^

Anyway, you'll get to see what I mean.^^ Later!!^^
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Old 15-02-2009, 06:08 AM   #53
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Update 2.0

Not sure about the buildings, maybe I'll keep them white stone???
Anyway heres a update on my wipsheet. Keep all your helpfull comments coming, thanks for all the help so far. Good luck everyone!!!!
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Old 15-02-2009, 11:59 AM   #54
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I think you've lost some contrast during your painting work. Maybe you should use a lighter background, it's the same for the "clouds", they seem heavy, (maybe too much shadows). But i'm talking about sensitivity here, it's really a non-objective comment, it's a subjective one.
Your painting and sketching work are fabulous, i also really like the fineness of the frame, how it enhances the whole image.
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what's throwing me off is the extra bits of boarder you have going on at lower mid level. Not sure why it's there. It would make sense if there was an opposite to it. But because there isn't one, it looks out of place.
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Old 17-02-2009, 04:04 AM   #56
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I did something before my old tablet went on the fritz

At least I got some of the work done that you guys said was needed. The stupid thing just stopped working and I have no idea why?

Any way, going to post some close ups soon, really need some feed back!!! Thanks for your comments so far.
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A close up look...

Of the head....
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Old 17-02-2009, 04:27 AM   #58
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A list...

Of things that need to be done?

Lips: still not happy with the way they are looking.
Branches: same thing really. Leaves/Flowers??
Buildings: need a more painted look.
Clouds?: not sure if I can get them looking any better, not really good at painting them non stop.

Thats what I think needs doing, anything you think I should add?
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Old 17-02-2009, 08:34 AM   #59
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NICE,
Love the eye and hair, and as you said there is something about the mouth just cant put my finger on it, maby it´s the colour and there is something about the upper lip.
And as I have said before love the art nouveau, the new corners looks awesome.

I also think the specular of the navel is a bit to big, other than that it looks really great and keep up the good work.
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Old 17-02-2009, 10:58 AM   #60
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Gaia. Pretty cool idea and i like your scketches too. The style is awsome.
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