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Old 08-02-2009, 05:07 PM   #16
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Great stuff, that background is awesome and the girl is looking sweet. Hope to see the finished product.
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Old 08-02-2009, 05:29 PM   #17
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Today I outlined the city and painted night sky.
I'll keep the contrast between them.
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Old 08-02-2009, 06:08 PM   #18
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Wow man, this is some serious competition .. I think I better quit while I still can
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Old 08-02-2009, 07:08 PM   #19
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Thanks for all the comments . I really appreciate the support.
The last update for today. Tomorrow I have to go to work....
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Old 08-02-2009, 07:28 PM   #20
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..hey my friend...
... you really got some skills there...
... I was just wondering on the shoulders' part of the armor...
... are those syringes???...
... because at first glance, that was my impression...
... for me... that's the only confusing or not clearly expressed part of the design...

... but I like marriage the of your futuristic character placed on a classic back draft...
...let's see the colors!!!
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Old 08-02-2009, 07:40 PM   #21
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Husam: Please don't quit! Turbo your creative juices ! Hope you were kidding .

Harorudokun: Thanks a lot . No, those aren't syringes. Those are some kind of conductors. I hope I get Electrica coloured soon .
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Old 08-02-2009, 07:55 PM   #22
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hey man this is awesome, I love your drawing and inking, top notch work. keep up the good job and cant wait for the colored version.
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Old 09-02-2009, 01:35 AM   #23
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Great line handling...
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Old 09-02-2009, 05:22 AM   #24
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So fresh and so clean. Very good line work.
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Old 09-02-2009, 10:29 AM   #25
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your perspective on the church ledge tower just below the 3 windows is a bit off - I saw it pretty quickly cos it throws off the nice fisheye effect.


There's just a couple of things I think you should maybe try.

one : perhaps get some more extreme perspective into the character - to me her feet should be pulled away more (if that makes any sense - so they look smaller)

two : perhaps shift her downwards in the frame slightly or extend the image at the bottom- there's space there that isn't really committed to anything.
it'd be really nice to see the front faces of buildings coming up towards the camera at the bottom


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Old 09-02-2009, 10:56 AM   #26
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Very interesting character, you've a nice touch mate, my compliments!! What did you do in real life? Are you a comic designer?

P.S.: the last draw posted is a scanned hand made sketch? Or there's a post work in PS?

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Old 09-02-2009, 02:46 PM   #27
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Thanks for all!

poopipe: I'm not planning to do any changes on this one, cause this is only a concept but thanks for the reflections anyway . I'll consider them.

madm4tt: Thank you! I was drawing comics a few years ago for Hungarian papers, but now I'm a designer student and I work as an archeologist technician for a living. Plan to work as an illustrator, but it's really hard to make some money from this in my country.

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Old 09-02-2009, 03:21 PM   #28
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Awesome work, man. I really like the way you draw faces. Very expressive but still sharp and clean. I'm looking forward to the finished work.
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Old 09-02-2009, 03:24 PM   #29
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WHOA!

Trashmito, these are GORGEOUS, you are unbelievably talented!
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Old 09-02-2009, 05:35 PM   #30
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I really REALLY like the "bent" perspective view which you've really captured Very good job mate!.

Though I have to agree with poopie's crit: "your perspective on the church ledge tower just below the 3 windows is a bit off"

Looking forward for the rest of the inking
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