Avatar - 2D - CLP - The Last Prince - Page 2

FireSunFox · 15-02-2009, 11:44 PM

Looks great, I don't think it's too much at all, maybe it will get alittle as you define it more?? Keep it up!!^^

Josiah · 16-02-2009, 01:40 PM

I prefer the first background more.....the overall composition was more impressive...having that lone man being blow out was more epic in my opinion.

great work though

miycko · 17-02-2009, 01:42 PM

Cool. Way Cool. Can't wait for the next stage!!

CLP · 19-02-2009, 11:18 PM

been doin coursework for deadline but then worked on this lol. feels kinda complete, any crit now would hopefully be about specific details? i put eyes on him at first but then it kinda looked weird, i dont think eyes suit the painting style. anyway crit away if u like.

dw IV coming up v soon ;]

FireSunFox · 19-02-2009, 11:35 PM

It needs closed eyes, you know just a line or two to show eye lids. That would work and not effect the look I think you are going for. Great work!!^^

CLP · 19-02-2009, 11:40 PM

ah i did not think of that, shall try that now lol

cheers for the tip

CLP · 20-02-2009, 12:05 AM

i was bout to paint shut eyes then realised that would probably be silly as hes walkin! lol but i popped in the original eyes i was workin on, do they work? or make him look weird?

Darchand · 20-02-2009, 02:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CLP

i was bout to paint shut eyes then realised that would probably be silly as hes walkin! lol but i popped in the original eyes i was workin on, do they work? or make him look weird?

I don't know if it means much but I think it looks good

mr_carl · 20-02-2009, 02:04 PM

I agree it would look kind of weird with his eyes shut. The eyes looks good now, he looks real angry

FireSunFox · 21-02-2009, 02:37 AM

I so worded that wrong, what I was thinking of was that he is shamefully looking down, But I'm liking the eyes better anyway. Good luck!!!

POSEIdOON · 25-02-2009, 12:23 AM

That's really looking good

like a pro

CLP · 25-02-2009, 12:35 AM

Cheers for the feedback and support guys, probably wont make much advancement from this stage as i hav piles of deadlines comin up, Imagine Cup and Dominance War too so mega busy. Good luck to everyone else, any other students on here doin imagine cup btw?

decosouza · 25-02-2009, 04:41 AM

Very expressive! The eyes, the soldiers behind him.. very good. Maybe be you can show some steps of the process creation.

hulahuga · 27-02-2009, 11:09 AM

It's a stunning picture!
I sense that your art style is kinda similar to the one used in wow wrath of the lich king poster.
Great job!
Though I got one crit now; the left eye (from our direction) looks weird, like it's non existent

Husam · 27-02-2009, 12:56 PM

I'm loving this

He just needs a bit more detailing to make him pop out from the background.
Keep it up. Can't wait to see the final version

16-02-2009, 01:40 PM	#17
Josiah Aka: Joser Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: NY, USA Posts: 2,563 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	I prefer the first background more.....the overall composition was more impressive...having that lone man being blow out was more epic in my opinion. great work though __________________ --------------------------- ---------------------------------- ----------------------------------------- omfg ps3 is teh w1n Yeah. It says in the Bible to only judge an opinion by its production value. I'm shutting it down. Like some kinda...thread stopping ninja. ----------------------------------------- ---------------------------------- ---------------------------

19-02-2009, 11:18 PM	#19
CLP Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: UK Posts: 129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	been doin coursework for deadline but then worked on this lol. feels kinda complete, any crit now would hopefully be about specific details? i put eyes on him at first but then it kinda looked weird, i dont think eyes suit the painting style. anyway crit away if u like. dw IV coming up v soon ;] Attached Images

20-02-2009, 12:05 AM	#22
CLP Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: UK Posts: 129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	i was bout to paint shut eyes then realised that would probably be silly as hes walkin! lol but i popped in the original eyes i was workin on, do they work? or make him look weird? Attached Images

20-02-2009, 02:04 PM	#24
mr_carl Registered User Join Date: Aug 2004 Posts: 258 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I agree it would look kind of weird with his eyes shut. The eyes looks good now, he looks real angry __________________ DWIV AVATAR Blogg - kwit.tv

27-02-2009, 11:09 AM	#29
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	It's a stunning picture! I sense that your art style is kinda similar to the one used in wow wrath of the lich king poster. Great job! Though I got one crit now; the left eye (from our direction) looks weird, like it's non existent __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

15-02-2009, 11:44 PM	#16
FireSunFox Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: New Zealand Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks great, I don't think it's too much at all, maybe it will get alittle as you define it more?? Keep it up!!^^

17-02-2009, 01:42 PM	#18
miycko Looking For Work Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Lusaka, Zambia. Willing to relocate to anywhere in the world. Posts: 458 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Cool. Way Cool. Can't wait for the next stage!!

19-02-2009, 11:35 PM	#20
FireSunFox Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: New Zealand Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It needs closed eyes, you know just a line or two to show eye lids. That would work and not effect the look I think you are going for. Great work!!^^

19-02-2009, 11:40 PM	#21
CLP Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: UK Posts: 129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	ah i did not think of that, shall try that now lol cheers for the tip

21-02-2009, 02:37 AM	#25
FireSunFox Registered User Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: New Zealand Posts: 66 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I so worded that wrong, what I was thinking of was that he is shamefully looking down, But I'm liking the eyes better anyway. Good luck!!!

25-02-2009, 12:23 AM	#26
POSEIdOON Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Portugal Posts: 45 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That's really looking good like a pro

25-02-2009, 12:35 AM	#27
CLP Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: UK Posts: 129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	Cheers for the feedback and support guys, probably wont make much advancement from this stage as i hav piles of deadlines comin up, Imagine Cup and Dominance War too so mega busy. Good luck to everyone else, any other students on here doin imagine cup btw?

25-02-2009, 04:41 AM	#28
decosouza Character modeler Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Rio de Janeiro - Brasil Posts: 57 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Very expressive! The eyes, the soldiers behind him.. very good. Maybe be you can show some steps of the process creation.

27-02-2009, 12:56 PM	#30
Husam Registered User Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 46 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm loving this He just needs a bit more detailing to make him pop out from the background. Keep it up. Can't wait to see the final version

Currently Active Users Viewing This Thread: 1 (0 members and 1 guests)

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode