Inner jail (Chain) ...

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This is my new work that i made it from my dreams and combined it with some fresh idea, i hope every one like it.
I`m working on it yet and it`s not finished yet.
Please comment it, even one word.

Go to page 2 for final job or Click on this link to see it in final art work.
http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread.php?t=67302

Here there is Render sample ...


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Omid Ghotbi (TAO).

[NeXt 0ne]

Looks very interesting, i like it. ćhope you make a great picture out of it.

[Zoli]

Hi!
I think the anatomy is correct,maybe the stomach a lil bit wierd.Which render e. do you want to use?

[OMIDT]

Thanks for your comment.
I want to use mentalray for object rendering and default scan line for effects, but i`m not sure yet.

[OMIDT]

just fix some problem and add chain ...
I use a few sample textures from 3dtotal textures ...



Still not finish ...

[Ikarah]

awsome!!!

[qwed88]

Nice, I think you should go thicker with the chain links they don't seem that restrictive

[Layla-3dt]

Some of the scars on the chest don't look quite real to me, but I like the concept...

[Krazy8]

i like the concept. would like to see more.

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Here, i add some a few bat in the scene, this bat means about his ideology.



Omid Ghotbi (TAO)امید قطبی.

[The_Caveman]

hey,

since ur replying in pretty much every thread asking people to comment on ur stuff I'll give it a shot

first of all I'd take of the horribly annoying: "Please comment" you got on every picture. It is distracting and would give a lot of people not the will to reply. If people want to reply they reply but stop begging them for it lolz and it ruins ur artwork if u put that big note on it.

The chains like mentioned before look pretty weak. make them thicker looks like he could break loose without a problem.

The water looks a bit to much like gel still. it doesnt look very liquid and not very waterish. why use realflow? I think u can achieve a better effect by just modeling it and creating the appropriate shader for it since that will be selling your water as being water realflow takes days of tweaking just to make it look like water and not like jelly

his tummy looks a bit weird too . like his ribcage is huge. in the middle there is an indent that makes it look that way I think. I d make the indent less

The adams apple in the neck is lacking a bit of detail compared to the rest of your model. a bit missing the muscles around it.

The muscles on his upper arm look very harsh. the line is a bit to visible I'd say, no expert but all of his other muscles are nicely definied and you can see them but they are not too obvious that one his arm is very obvious and kinda pulls the attention of the eye to it

the scars could use some work. since there is blood in there I'd play with the spec. would play with the spec level of his entire body since he is in pain, and has water running over him I think he will be wet and sweating so his skin tone should have more spec to it to give that shiney and wet look.

I like the poses of the hands a lot, nice job on that one

for the last picture dont really know what there is to comment about we should see it all together I guess to be able to judge it. maybe some test renders with your lighting would help people to give more comments on this since ur bats look fine there isnt much to say

I like the idea behind it, think it could turn out pretty cool. hope this helps

Cheers

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you think right about the chain but if you look good can see something else keep him in jail, and this is his mind not chain not fence, hi can burn the fence and can break the chain, so something else keep him in this situation.
and exactly i want you understand this, the fence not around us just inside of our minds. and this is not water inside his face just look it again, and about the bat, that means about his foolish ideology ...
you are so clever gay but must think more before judge ...
i finish this work over one month and just want every one think about it.
i`m sorry for my bad English if i cant explain this well ...
thank you for your comment at all.

[The_Caveman]

Oh okok, I get the chain idea now. sounds pretty cool. Maybe you could add a broken chain? to emphazize the fact of him being able to break his chains but who can't break out of his mind? Since right now that idea is pretty hard to understand.

I thought u wanted comments about how the works looked not about the idea behind it hehe ^^ my bad.
Would like to see a full render of this if u got some time

good luck

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Originally Posted by The_Caveman

Oh okok, I get the chain idea now. sounds pretty cool. Maybe you could add a broken chain? to emphazize the fact of him being able to break his chains but who can't break out of his mind? Since right now that idea is pretty hard to understand.

I thought u wanted comments about how the works looked not about the idea behind it hehe ^^ my bad.
Would like to see a full render of this if u got some time

good luck

thank you i can send you final work but not for place in this forum at this time.
do you have any idea for the comment because maybe some one don`t understand my word in my worst English.

[IsmaiL R]

nice work
best regards dude