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Old 18-05-2009, 01:44 AM   #1
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Subzero

I wanted to make a model of subzero. I would like you to tell me what you think about this one. It's been a long time cause I've taken a brake from modeling and I'm now working on my animation skills @ the DAVE School. It's a work in progress ,but I'm happy with it so far. Pls any comments is welcomed. I can't wait to read what you think about it.
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Old 18-05-2009, 02:59 AM   #2
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I am not too familiar with the anathomy, but as a great fan of Mortal Kombat (and Sub Zero), i can't resist not to comment.

Your Sub Zero is too skinny. Too slim.
Remember, he is a ninja warrior from Lin Kuei clan, and they not training their ninjas to play some ballet. Put him some muscules, man!
Also, you could improve his cloth.
His mask looks like the part of the (sad) face

Keep it up mate, I am following this for shoore.
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Old 18-05-2009, 05:42 AM   #3
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nice work, i like your style.
i like your modeling and lighting but what do you want to do about textures ?

that`s my new job, Comment it please.
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Old 19-05-2009, 11:06 PM   #4
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i agree with bobi he need to work out a little.
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Old 20-05-2009, 03:48 AM   #5
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also being a HUGE Mortal Kombat fan, I would say it wouldnt matter if he was bulky. Sure it would look cooler, but it wont break the look.

The two sub-zeros from the films and in Mk1 and Mk2 weren't bulky. I wont go into it, but there are so many different variations of Sub-Zero in the franchise.

I would recommend working a little more on the outfit. Right now it doesn't look anything like him. Add some arm, shoulder and shin guards, go with a more traditional looking robe and make a dragon medallion.

In short, work on the outfit more, worrying about muscles later
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Old 20-05-2009, 10:05 AM   #6
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Errol2Hanse i agree with the guys, but i want to thank you for inspiring me to do a version of subzero of my own, keep up the work m8 see ya soon
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Old 20-05-2009, 03:17 PM   #7
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Thanks for all the comments guys, But my reason for not making him big and bulky like the games is simply this. I say the Spiderman series that was on MTV and he was really Skinny, but he had alot of muscles. That was the look I was going for. I really didn't want him to be big. I would like him to look like subzero, But without all the extra muscles. Once again thanks alot for your comments and I'll make changes to him. I've been working on the guards for his shin and the rest of his budy. Thanks again for your help.
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Old 20-05-2009, 10:46 PM   #8
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Hmmm.......not bad so far. Would have to see later updates to tell.
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Old 31-05-2009, 02:48 AM   #9
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Honestly... I think this model need much improvement. Nice for now... but it doesn't look like sub-zero to me.

Legs, arms looks strange and I think you will need to change his mask little.
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