M e c h n i s m - F a i l u r e

mohsenCG · 09-07-2009, 08:15 AM

Hello guys .. This is my latest art piece " Mechanism Failure "

i`ll leave you trying to figure out the concept.

Software: 3ds max, vray, photoshop

Thanks for viewing, hope you like it.

Comments welcomed ..

CGDreams · 09-07-2009, 08:31 AM

Nice work, realy organic, yet has mechanical. This one has certainly kept me looking, trying to work it out.

Not shure about the platform colour, the way it has a certain iluminated colour patch feel to it. Nice comp, would look nice framed, thanks for sharing.

Bob Marley · 09-07-2009, 08:35 AM

Texturing lighting and comp is pretty cool, I like it, maybe just where the sphere is broken the egdes are a bit to smoothed, instead of being sharp and broken.

Good work.

uchiharuin · 09-07-2009, 09:27 AM

great lighting!

Bubbaloo · 11-07-2009, 08:05 PM

Broken "Phantasm" sphere?

mohsenCG · 19-08-2009, 11:10 PM

sorry 4 late guys

and thx 4 ur sweet comments , appreciate it

SnappedStrings · 20-08-2009, 04:28 AM

I feel like I need a bit of explanation with this piece. Maybe there's something I'm not getting? What is the device? I feel like there's a lot going on here, that I'm just not understanding

Other than that, the texturing and lighting is excellent. Very believable and aged textures.

Things you might change: perhaps add a little bit of bump to the texture. It would benefit from some scratches or dents in the surface. Also, the cracked edges seem a little too uniform. Making things appear random can be one of the most difficult things in any kind of art form.

This is a very nice, unique piece.

mohsenCG · 19-10-2009, 04:37 PM

thx SnappedStrings for critics .. really helped

09-07-2009, 08:15 AM	#1
mohsenCG Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	M e c h n i s m - F a i l u r e Hello guys .. This is my latest art piece " Mechanism Failure " i`ll leave you trying to figure out the concept. Software: 3ds max, vray, photoshop Thanks for viewing, hope you like it. Comments welcomed .. Attached Images Last edited by mohsenCG; 09-07-2009 at 11:02 AM..

09-07-2009, 08:35 AM	#3
Bob Marley Need to work more... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Gold Coast Posts: 1,562 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Texturing lighting and comp is pretty cool, I like it, maybe just where the sphere is broken the egdes are a bit to smoothed, instead of being sharp and broken. Good work. __________________ My Blog:juliencoffin.blogspot.com

11-07-2009, 08:05 PM	#5
Bubbaloo I be learnin me some 3d. Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Tulsa, Oklahoma U.S.A. Posts: 1,938 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Broken "Phantasm" sphere? __________________ Brian Looney Tulsa, Oklahoma My Wesite: http://lunatic-studio.com/

20-08-2009, 04:28 AM	#7
SnappedStrings Criticism Fairy Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: San Francisco Posts: 251 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I feel like I need a bit of explanation with this piece. Maybe there's something I'm not getting? What is the device? I feel like there's a lot going on here, that I'm just not understanding Other than that, the texturing and lighting is excellent. Very believable and aged textures. Things you might change: perhaps add a little bit of bump to the texture. It would benefit from some scratches or dents in the surface. Also, the cracked edges seem a little too uniform. Making things appear random can be one of the most difficult things in any kind of art form. This is a very nice, unique piece. __________________ I like 'em chunky. Portfolio

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09-07-2009, 08:31 AM	#2
CGDreams Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: UK Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice work, realy organic, yet has mechanical. This one has certainly kept me looking, trying to work it out. Not shure about the platform colour, the way it has a certain iluminated colour patch feel to it. Nice comp, would look nice framed, thanks for sharing.

09-07-2009, 09:27 AM	#4
uchiharuin Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	great lighting!

19-08-2009, 11:10 PM	#6
mohsenCG Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	sorry 4 late guys and thx 4 ur sweet comments , appreciate it

19-10-2009, 04:37 PM	#8
mohsenCG Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 6 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thx SnappedStrings for critics .. really helped

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