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Old 16-07-2009, 08:33 AM   #1
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Hi guys , this is my last work , 3d max 2009 v ray , using PS for final touch

hope you like it

thanks all
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Old 16-07-2009, 05:54 PM   #2
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I like what you have in the image, it just seems like everything has an even look to it. Meaning, it looks like it's all of the materials look "fake" textures instead of real. I think if you add a bit more reflection to the objects that would help a lot more. I think all of the wood is what really throws off the composition.
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Old 16-07-2009, 06:04 PM   #3
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good rendering mate,
i think the ceiling bump is too much,
and try changing your wood texture, it look fake to me.

finally, i like your ceiling light fitting,
it look real, good job!
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Old 16-07-2009, 08:57 PM   #4
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hi mikeguy thanks for passing here & manythanks for your value comments ... ill try to correct it next time

Jacketeh thanks for comments & your right about the ceiling bump & wood texture ..ill try to fix it ( by the way the file witch im trying to upload it its around 32 MB , & im dieing to upload it for you but ill keep trying , sorry for late im really sorry )
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Old 17-07-2009, 01:01 AM   #5
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it ok and i will keep on waiting for it

oh yeah, do you try send it by gmail?
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Old 17-07-2009, 08:08 AM   #6
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yes i have g mail but 32 MB will be too big file to send it by G mail , dont worry ill find solution mate
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Thank you very much, dark night2008.
i will keep on waiting for it.
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