Terminator

keraj37 · 17-07-2009, 06:27 PM

Hello

THIS IS FINAL:

Model of terminator is not mine, I downloaded it from here: http://www.newtek.com/forums/showthread.php?t=99307

Any comments about what should I change are welcome

Regards
keraj37

YtooB · 17-07-2009, 07:10 PM

I think u have too much contrast in the image. The shadows are too dark and the bright areas are too bright for my taste. I'd put there more light into shadows and lower the brightness of the main light. Also the light divides the head with a straight line from top to bottom and it doesn't look very good either. Try to move the light a bit.

jamie1992 · 18-07-2009, 01:55 AM

It looks really strange, dosen't look like the real terminator, the face is to round, the original terminator face was more squard and blocky, and the contrast is WAY to high, maybe a new render can be shown?

Looks good though.

keraj37 · 18-07-2009, 07:13 AM

thank u for comments

YtooB: that is good idea, thanks. I will play with light and add less contrast. But it is in my taste

keraj37 · 18-07-2009, 02:39 PM

update:

TNTxGRAVE · 18-07-2009, 05:18 PM

Looks good to me. My only issues are that i would like to see a little bit of the detail work on the side of the head. The contrast is a bit high (but to each his own). Play around with your light bounces and also indirect lighting. You want your lighting to compliment and show off the modeling and the texturing. right now your lighting is taking away from both.

keraj37 · 18-07-2009, 06:22 PM

thank u for comment. Im thinking abut changing completly all concept:/ Difrent lighting, background and textures, i hope it will look beter couse now I dont like the effect

TNTxGRAVE · 18-07-2009, 06:35 PM

The effect and mood you are going for is a nice effect that i have seen done countless times. your biggest friend at this point is using reference material (the right way). find images that have the mood and feel you want and emulate that.

keraj37 · 18-07-2009, 07:00 PM

ok thanks, that really good idea, sometimes somthing simple can help

keraj37 · 19-07-2009, 01:47 PM

evry thing is 3d - as u see i Chnaged concpet now it is going to be robot invation

keraj37 · 19-07-2009, 05:38 PM

added some robots made by me

sourabh devli · 19-07-2009, 05:57 PM

hey dude yur..
sun rays part is so odd..
try to more watchin ....hows it clear,,,

may b ...
do 1 thing./.that..

gonnato ground & watch yur postition lighting etc..

& i think you ill do best....

keraj37 · 20-07-2009, 08:26 AM

sun rays are odd? Ok thanks I will remove it

keraj37 · 20-07-2009, 01:43 PM

update - I didnt remove sun rays for now, changed koloros and added city in first plan:

keraj37 · 20-07-2009, 08:57 PM

THIS IS FINAL:

17-07-2009, 06:27 PM	#1
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Terminator Hello THIS IS FINAL: Model of terminator is not mine, I downloaded it from here: http://www.newtek.com/forums/showthread.php?t=99307 Any comments about what should I change are welcome Regards keraj37 Last edited by keraj37; 20-07-2009 at 08:58 PM..

17-07-2009, 07:10 PM	#2
YtooB Freelance Digital Artist Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Jihlava, Czech Republic Posts: 137 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I think u have too much contrast in the image. The shadows are too dark and the bright areas are too bright for my taste. I'd put there more light into shadows and lower the brightness of the main light. Also the light divides the head with a straight line from top to bottom and it doesn't look very good either. Try to move the light a bit. __________________ Online portfolio http://www.richardhomola.com

19-07-2009, 01:47 PM	#10
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19-07-2009, 05:38 PM	#11
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20-07-2009, 08:26 AM	#13
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	sun rays are odd? Ok thanks I will remove it __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

18-07-2009, 01:55 AM	#3
jamie1992 Registered User Join Date: Apr 2009 Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It looks really strange, dosen't look like the real terminator, the face is to round, the original terminator face was more squard and blocky, and the contrast is WAY to high, maybe a new render can be shown? Looks good though.

18-07-2009, 07:13 AM	#4
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	thank u for comments YtooB: that is good idea, thanks. I will play with light and add less contrast. But it is in my taste

18-07-2009, 02:39 PM	#5
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	update:

18-07-2009, 05:18 PM	#6
TNTxGRAVE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Greenbelt, MD Posts: 268 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Looks good to me. My only issues are that i would like to see a little bit of the detail work on the side of the head. The contrast is a bit high (but to each his own). Play around with your light bounces and also indirect lighting. You want your lighting to compliment and show off the modeling and the texturing. right now your lighting is taking away from both.

18-07-2009, 06:22 PM	#7
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	thank u for comment. Im thinking abut changing completly all concept:/ Difrent lighting, background and textures, i hope it will look beter couse now I dont like the effect

18-07-2009, 06:35 PM	#8
TNTxGRAVE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Greenbelt, MD Posts: 268 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	The effect and mood you are going for is a nice effect that i have seen done countless times. your biggest friend at this point is using reference material (the right way). find images that have the mood and feel you want and emulate that.

18-07-2009, 07:00 PM	#9
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	ok thanks, that really good idea, sometimes somthing simple can help

19-07-2009, 05:57 PM	#12
sourabh devli Banned. Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Hell any problem.... Posts: 76 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hey dude yur.. sun rays part is so odd.. try to more watchin ....hows it clear,,, may b ... do 1 thing./.that.. gonnato ground & watch yur postition lighting etc.. & i think you ill do best....

20-07-2009, 01:43 PM	#14
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	update - I didnt remove sun rays for now, changed koloros and added city in first plan: __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

20-07-2009, 08:57 PM	#15
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	THIS IS FINAL: __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

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