TITAN Mk3 Broadsword Type - Page 2

himadri_sm · 24-07-2009, 04:16 AM

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Originally Posted by Freespace-3DT

You could check out http://anaheimmachines.blogspot.com/ for some sweet Gundam references.

thanx for the link..

Tuss4 · 25-07-2009, 02:23 PM

try this

Freespace-3DT · 29-07-2009, 04:23 PM

Nocturn8: Here you go

himadri_sm: You're welcome!

Tuss4: Thanks for the tips. Now they're all quads, and the topology flows better.

Started blocking out the inside of the Titan, for the symbiote's cockpit.

Freespace-3DT · 29-07-2009, 05:16 PM

Another angle:

Freespace-3DT · 08-08-2009, 09:57 PM

Finally got a bit more time to work on this

Freespace-3DT · 09-08-2009, 12:28 AM

Edwiersma · 09-08-2009, 12:45 AM

realy starting to get nice now!

some more wires?

Freespace-3DT · 09-08-2009, 01:53 AM

JajeBlade: Thanks! I think it's catching some shape too.

Here's some wires for you, I'm trying to keep everything simple and under control.

Edwiersma · 09-08-2009, 08:58 AM

indeed, i expected a little more poly's actually, you did a great job on the efficiency and polyflow.

just something with the colors, check it out>>>

Sathe · 09-08-2009, 04:31 PM

Hey Man,

Loving the head, has some nice curves and shape that makes it really fit together well but i'm noticing the further down you have progressed the model the more its losing this curvy element and becoming boxy and not as well constructed to fit together.
I hope you don't mind but ive done a quicky drawover to try and get back the element from the head.
Let me know if you want it taken down, will sort it immediately.

Freespace-3DT · 12-08-2009, 01:17 AM

JajeBlade: Well he looks like a cop like that, doesn't he?

I'm still playing around with what parts of him are going to be colored, and what are going to be gray, so thanks for the tips.

Sathe: Hey, you're right, it is losing some curviness. So I took the direction of your sketch and adapted it to the model to make it flow better. Thanks Grant, that was a very good idea!

Edwiersma · 12-08-2009, 10:15 AM

i cant see sathe's concept in here... but the new parts are looking great

vang-suna · 13-08-2009, 09:05 PM

good job bro !
you're making a good mecha, keep it up my friend

Sathe · 14-08-2009, 03:21 AM

Yeh to be honest you haven't taken it much further with the curves. You added that little plate in between the neck, but look at the connections, it all just hits on 90 degree angles.
The Head has angles, and plates blending in too each other, the shoulders and that front plate on the body looks very generic though, i think you gotta reconsider these parts, if you wanna really push it further, you know its just my opinion though so all good if it stays.

keraj37 · 14-08-2009, 06:47 PM

just great mesh man, fantastic spot lights, and overall I have nothing to crit here:/

25-07-2009, 02:23 PM	#17
Tuss4 UNCH UNH Yehhh.... Join Date: Oct 2005 Posts: 1,466 Thanks: 2 Thanked 8 Times in 8 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	try this Attached Images __________________ .:\|my take on Iron Man W. I. P.\|:. .:\|my Fairlady Z W. I. P.\|:. Check out my blog click on my sig! Last edited by Tuss4; 25-07-2009 at 02:30 PM..

29-07-2009, 04:23 PM	#18
Freespace-3DT Commando Moderator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Romania, Cluj Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 39 Thanked 185 Times in 158 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Nocturn8: Here you go himadri_sm: You're welcome! Tuss4: Thanks for the tips. Now they're all quads, and the topology flows better. Started blocking out the inside of the Titan, for the symbiote's cockpit. Attached Images __________________ Cinematics: StarCraft: Final Metamorphosis (Final 7.5 Minute CG Animation) Speed Factor 2 (23-NOV-2010) Demo Reel 2010 (1-OCT-2010) StarCraft: First Contact (08-JUL-2009) MY CG&VFX WEBSITE

29-07-2009, 05:16 PM	#19
Freespace-3DT Commando Moderator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Romania, Cluj Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 39 Thanked 185 Times in 158 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Another angle: Attached Images __________________ Cinematics: StarCraft: Final Metamorphosis (Final 7.5 Minute CG Animation) Speed Factor 2 (23-NOV-2010) Demo Reel 2010 (1-OCT-2010) StarCraft: First Contact (08-JUL-2009) MY CG&VFX WEBSITE

08-08-2009, 09:57 PM	#20
Freespace-3DT Commando Moderator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Romania, Cluj Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 39 Thanked 185 Times in 158 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Finally got a bit more time to work on this Attached Images __________________ Cinematics: StarCraft: Final Metamorphosis (Final 7.5 Minute CG Animation) Speed Factor 2 (23-NOV-2010) Demo Reel 2010 (1-OCT-2010) StarCraft: First Contact (08-JUL-2009) MY CG&VFX WEBSITE

09-08-2009, 12:28 AM	#21
Freespace-3DT Commando Moderator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Romania, Cluj Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 39 Thanked 185 Times in 158 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	Attached Images __________________ Cinematics: StarCraft: Final Metamorphosis (Final 7.5 Minute CG Animation) Speed Factor 2 (23-NOV-2010) Demo Reel 2010 (1-OCT-2010) StarCraft: First Contact (08-JUL-2009) MY CG&VFX WEBSITE

09-08-2009, 12:45 AM	#22
Edwiersma 3D-Student Join Date: May 2007 Location: Amsterdam, Netherlands Posts: 546 Thanks: 4 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	realy starting to get nice now! some more wires? __________________ Modo User

09-08-2009, 01:53 AM	#23
Freespace-3DT Commando Moderator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Romania, Cluj Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 39 Thanked 185 Times in 158 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	JajeBlade: Thanks! I think it's catching some shape too. Here's some wires for you, I'm trying to keep everything simple and under control. Attached Images __________________ Cinematics: StarCraft: Final Metamorphosis (Final 7.5 Minute CG Animation) Speed Factor 2 (23-NOV-2010) Demo Reel 2010 (1-OCT-2010) StarCraft: First Contact (08-JUL-2009) MY CG&VFX WEBSITE Last edited by Freespace-3DT; 09-08-2009 at 02:12 AM..

09-08-2009, 08:58 AM	#24
Edwiersma 3D-Student Join Date: May 2007 Location: Amsterdam, Netherlands Posts: 546 Thanks: 4 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	indeed, i expected a little more poly's actually, you did a great job on the efficiency and polyflow. just something with the colors, check it out>>> __________________ Modo User Last edited by Edwiersma; 10-08-2009 at 12:07 AM..

09-08-2009, 04:31 PM	#25
Sathe Hardstyle Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,367 Thanks: 97 Thanked 44 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Hey Man, Loving the head, has some nice curves and shape that makes it really fit together well but i'm noticing the further down you have progressed the model the more its losing this curvy element and becoming boxy and not as well constructed to fit together. I hope you don't mind but ive done a quicky drawover to try and get back the element from the head. Let me know if you want it taken down, will sort it immediately. __________________ ______________________________ Hard Surface Essentials http://vimeo.com/10941211 Threedy 4 life

12-08-2009, 01:17 AM	#26
Freespace-3DT Commando Moderator Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Romania, Cluj Posts: 7,988 Thanks: 39 Thanked 185 Times in 158 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 10	JajeBlade: Well he looks like a cop like that, doesn't he? I'm still playing around with what parts of him are going to be colored, and what are going to be gray, so thanks for the tips. Sathe: Hey, you're right, it is losing some curviness. So I took the direction of your sketch and adapted it to the model to make it flow better. Thanks Grant, that was a very good idea! Attached Images __________________ Cinematics: StarCraft: Final Metamorphosis (Final 7.5 Minute CG Animation) Speed Factor 2 (23-NOV-2010) Demo Reel 2010 (1-OCT-2010) StarCraft: First Contact (08-JUL-2009) MY CG&VFX WEBSITE

12-08-2009, 10:15 AM	#27
Edwiersma 3D-Student Join Date: May 2007 Location: Amsterdam, Netherlands Posts: 546 Thanks: 4 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	i cant see sathe's concept in here... but the new parts are looking great __________________ Modo User

13-08-2009, 09:05 PM	#28
vang-suna suna91.free.fr Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	good job bro ! you're making a good mecha, keep it up my friend

14-08-2009, 03:21 AM	#29
Sathe Hardstyle Join Date: Feb 2004 Posts: 3,367 Thanks: 97 Thanked 44 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Yeh to be honest you haven't taken it much further with the curves. You added that little plate in between the neck, but look at the connections, it all just hits on 90 degree angles. The Head has angles, and plates blending in too each other, the shoulders and that front plate on the body looks very generic though, i think you gotta reconsider these parts, if you wanna really push it further, you know its just my opinion though so all good if it stays. __________________ ______________________________ Hard Surface Essentials http://vimeo.com/10941211 Threedy 4 life

14-08-2009, 06:47 PM	#30
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	just great mesh man, fantastic spot lights, and overall I have nothing to crit here:/ __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

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