Gender Bender - Raziel (Riza) Soul Reaver

[Harbinger]

Raziel from Soul Reaver

[Harbinger]

My concept for Riza the Soul Reaver.

[Quintonius]

Yo son, this gon be nice, I've seen a Raziel on here already, but yours is gonna **** on the others guys LOL and I didn't see anything in the rules that says u can't do something someone else is doing, but ne wayz I'mma stay tune to this post, Holla

[dhin]

Hey Quin watch the personal slams there, this is a friendly comp, and we all help each other out where we can here. <-Edit: thinking faster than I type again...

I don't mind someone else doing Raz, it make for interesting comparisons on interpreted styles. Beside my total of completed entries is dismally low, so... I really don't care. I enter for the fun of it.

Harbinger, nice start. Proportions seem off a little though, legs look too short and fat (angle issue I think) and the head looks too large (it looks like overcompensation for the scarf, I'd drop the size slightly.) Anyways be fun to see how yours turns out.

[VinsanityV20]

Very Nice, Harbinger! Someone else is doing Raziel, but to be honest it didn't look too promising (shh. No offense to any artists around here; these comps are great for learning new stuff) This however is looking excellent! I'm gonna be paying attention to this one.

[Quintonius]

Hey (dhin), sorry about that bro, didn't mean to offend you or anyone else. I just gotta a little bit rowdy for my friend here (Harbinder), he was a little worried so, I thought I'd cheer him up with that comment. No hard feelings bro, Good Luck Guys

[Harbinger]

Thanks Dhin for the critique. It will be cool to see how each of our raziels turn out.

[dhin]

I forgot a smilie, my bad No offense meant, and none taken. It's easy to misread the meant tone of a post.

And Vinny20 get ready for a beat down!!! First the boots comment now this, its war I tell you, WAR!

[Harbinger]

this is the model sheet for Riza (Ri-sa).

[Buzzy]

and by Riza, I'm sure you mean this guy:


j/k


In all seriousness. The model sheet looks very solid. I like where you're going.
Will she/it have clothes? Perhaps see-through ones?

[SnappedStrings]

The model sheet looks good, but I would suggest exaggerating the size of the calf and forearm muscles just a liiiiiiittle bit more. More so in the calves

Also, the thigh muscles look a little funny, maybe just take another quick look at that spot

The only other thing I can think of is the hairstyle. There's nothing wrong with it, but it seems like you're playing it safe, toy around with it a bit, see what the other female vampires in the LOK series are doing with their hair, have fun with it. But this is just a suggestion.

Everything else looks fantastic

[Harbinger]

Thanks SnappedStrings for the critiques and suggestions. I realize I added muscle groups in the thighs that don't exist. As for the hair, that's still up for debate. Sadly, i haven't any vampire women in Soul Reaver. But, i search/research more on hairstyle for vampires and dark ages.

[Harbinger]

look at possible hairstyles. but, gonna get started on the body.

[Prince-G]

Yo "I'M LOSING BLOOD" but all inside jokes aside, nice character pick. Ummm yea bro exaggerate the character a little more. I dunno make her skin color lighter and you know about the hair situation so... yea. (I'm sorry don't get mad bro jeez)

Can't wait to see the modeling tho, keep going.

[Harbinger]

ok, so here is my WIPs of the modeling. Keep in mind the cloth is made out of NURBS ( i plan to convert to polys later on). I'm thinking about lowering the cowl to cover more of her breast and adding more wrinkles on the cowl. I plan on also adding more edges for those big face since i see I'm still under 6K Tris. I'm working on fixing the back and adding the torn wings. So, yeah. Critiques are welcome. BTW, I included what her hair is going to look like too.