mushrooms

boh-lev · 19-08-2009, 07:46 PM

hi, everybode. this is my last concept. i hope you like it

inveni0 · 19-08-2009, 07:50 PM

Honestly, everything looks great except for the mushroom "stem" textures. They really ruin the whole illusion. Some of the other shaders need a little work, too. For instance, the tree trunk seems to reflect light more like a stone than anything organic. Also, some of its edges are too angular (the same with some mushroom stems). It's off to a great start, but needs some tweaking and remodeling in some areas.

avishek · 20-08-2009, 12:59 PM

Frankly speaking, i liked everything other than the mushrooms. They are looking very hard and unnatural. You should put some curvature on these mushrooms.

Tank[NL] · 20-08-2009, 01:20 PM

shroom town ^^

i like it, but i agree with the other comments. the shrooms look very hard and the stem doesnt look as good as the other parts. make them less shiny and fix the stem texture and i think you're in the clear.

gl

keraj37 · 20-08-2009, 08:31 PM

agreed, but nice lighting

19-08-2009, 07:46 PM	#1
boh-lev Registered User Join Date: Jul 2009 Posts: 2 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	mushrooms hi, everybode. this is my last concept. i hope you like it Attached Images

19-08-2009, 07:50 PM	#2
inveni0 Man of the Hour Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Why right here, of course... Posts: 6,805 Thanks: 40 Thanked 35 Times in 31 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Honestly, everything looks great except for the mushroom "stem" textures. They really ruin the whole illusion. Some of the other shaders need a little work, too. For instance, the tree trunk seems to reflect light more like a stone than anything organic. Also, some of its edges are too angular (the same with some mushroom stems). It's off to a great start, but needs some tweaking and remodeling in some areas. __________________ The Easter Bunny is a MONSTER! - It's Out!

20-08-2009, 12:59 PM	#3
avishek Registered User Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: KOLKATA, INDIA Posts: 464 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Frankly speaking, i liked everything other than the mushrooms. They are looking very hard and unnatural. You should put some curvature on these mushrooms. __________________ ========================== Circa1850 Colour Pencils Old House

20-08-2009, 01:20 PM	#4
Tank[NL] New goal: Platinum spam Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Your happyplace. I stole it... Posts: 3,423 Thanks: 3 Thanked 12 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	shroom town ^^ i like it, but i agree with the other comments. the shrooms look very hard and the stem doesnt look as good as the other parts. make them less shiny and fix the stem texture and i think you're in the clear. gl __________________ NEW SIGNATURE! aint it pretty?

20-08-2009, 08:31 PM	#5
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	agreed, but nice lighting __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

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