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Old 18-09-2009, 07:24 AM   #1
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Snake Creature

Did a concept for a Snake creature, not sure where I was going for, just jumped in and tried Zspheres for the first time sculpting.
Just looking for some profession feedback, any would be nice such as whats working, whats not, etc.
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Hey, not bad for a first. What I don't like is the texture you added. It seems rushed. Skin bump is the same on the hands and shoulders but should be smaller I think.

What I suggest you do is to take a real life animal (gecko, crab etc) and sculpt it in ZBrush. You will learn to model to a ref and will learn about textures, proportions, how claws/paws work etc.

Check out http://www.pixologic.com/zclassroom/homeroom/ and follow the making of No More Wine, it's awesome and you'll learn loads!
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