Low poly Flying suit

chiba · 19-09-2009, 06:14 AM

So i decided to model a new character with the intent to make a female hi-tech assign(yeah MGS cyborg ninja type of thing) and this is how it turned out. I plan on finishing this and hope to greatly improve my texture skillz, Like it hate it? tell me what ya think.

katana · 21-09-2009, 11:47 PM

Your edgeloops seem pretty good, I'm going to suggest an extreme look at design, starting with Daniel Simon and his Cosmic Motors....then rip those thrusters off and give her a proper suit to wear that shows direction movement...I think the breasts are too far apart and maybe a bit too small.

Raul · 23-09-2009, 06:36 AM

I think ur edge loop is fantastic, but the proportions and weigth of the model is lacking on some parts. I like what you have going on on the back of the suit, but then it just doesnt blend in right.

I would do some sketches 1st and then go ahead and just tweak ur model, and adjust parts here and there.

Nice job tho!

19-09-2009, 06:14 AM	#1
chiba Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 10 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Low poly Flying suit So i decided to model a new character with the intent to make a female hi-tech assign(yeah MGS cyborg ninja type of thing) and this is how it turned out. I plan on finishing this and hope to greatly improve my texture skillz, Like it hate it? tell me what ya think. Attached Images

21-09-2009, 11:47 PM	#2
katana Registered User Join Date: May 2007 Posts: 794 Thanks: 6 Thanked 13 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Your edgeloops seem pretty good, I'm going to suggest an extreme look at design, starting with Daniel Simon and his Cosmic Motors....then rip those thrusters off and give her a proper suit to wear that shows direction movement...I think the breasts are too far apart and maybe a bit too small. __________________ http://katana2665.deviantart.com/ Last edited by katana; 21-09-2009 at 11:52 PM..

23-09-2009, 06:36 AM	#3
Raul Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 976 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	I think ur edge loop is fantastic, but the proportions and weigth of the model is lacking on some parts. I like what you have going on on the back of the suit, but then it just doesnt blend in right. I would do some sketches 1st and then go ahead and just tweak ur model, and adjust parts here and there. Nice job tho! __________________ folio \|\| my game art thread

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