Tim

Mr.T · 13-10-2009, 07:29 PM

This is a reworked version since I really didn't liked the old one,
3dsmax and mental ray. I would be glad to read your crits about
this.

Thanks.

keraj37 · 14-10-2009, 08:31 AM

Suit is ok, but head has bad proportiions and the skin shader is not allright re work it

inveni0 · 14-10-2009, 12:52 PM

This looks like the guy that is in the show "Lie to Me" and was Abomination in the last Hulk movie. Is it him?

I don't think the proportions are bad; I just think he's got a different look to him. Skin shader could use a bit more pink, but otherwise, you've done well.

DaddyDoom · 14-10-2009, 12:54 PM

Yeah, it's Tim Roth... sort of...

dhin · 14-10-2009, 04:05 PM

That was my thought too, It does look like Tim.

Though the head is either too broad or the eyes too close set. Jaw line looks good, but I think the cheek bones are too wide and the the dome of the head seems a little too short. I'm not sure something just seems slightly off.

Mr.T · 14-10-2009, 04:56 PM

Wow I'm really surprised you recognized him, I though I totally messed up
with the look alike Tim Roth.

I have to admit that first I wanted him with hair, so I didn't quite though
about the top of the dome shape, as Dhin said it does look short. I may also
made the mistake to place the camera too far back, giving the whole head
a flatter look, I can't really say.

Keraj37: Thanks for your crit, what bothered you with the skin shader?
The blue tone is too high? (I might have overdone it in post but I kinda liked it)

Inveni0: I'm really surprised as I said you recognized him, I was really thinking
I blew it haha. Tim Roth has a really specific face, I think for a first attempt at
modeling someone famous, it was not a wise choice I maybe should have picked
someone else with better references pictures.
(all my references were different age/weight/etc..)

DaddyDoom:

Dhin: Thanks for these great hints Dhin, I totally agree, something is off but
I couldn't point it neither exactly. I think as you said the head is too wide.

Thank you very much for your comments and feedback, I really appreciate

NinthJake · 14-10-2009, 07:18 PM

Pretty nice model but I think that the head is a tad too wide :O

Also (I just love nitpicking) the collar is intersecting with the tie I think. Look at the tie on the right side just above the knot :P

Great work though man!

Mr.T · 16-10-2009, 03:17 PM

Thanks a lot for your kind words NinthJake! I checked the tie again if it was
indeed intersecting with the shirt, but I didn't saw anything obvious, maybe
it's the occlusion pass I posted that gives you this impression?

13-10-2009, 07:29 PM	#1
Mr.T lost souvlaki.. Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Athens / Greece Posts: 893 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Tim This is a reworked version since I really didn't liked the old one, 3dsmax and mental ray. I would be glad to read your crits about this. Thanks. Attached Images __________________ Mr.T Prodz Monologue Reel Last edited by Mr.T; 15-10-2009 at 12:03 AM.. Reason: small update

14-10-2009, 08:31 AM	#2
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Suit is ok, but head has bad proportiions and the skin shader is not allright re work it __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

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dhin Soy un Perdedor, baby Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Valhalla Posts: 1,335 Thanks: 13 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	That was my thought too, It does look like Tim. Though the head is either too broad or the eyes too close set. Jaw line looks good, but I think the cheek bones are too wide and the the dome of the head seems a little too short. I'm not sure something just seems slightly off. __________________ If you can't be a good example then be a warning. ___________________ AlanMecham.com My site.

14-10-2009, 04:56 PM	#6
Mr.T lost souvlaki.. Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Athens / Greece Posts: 893 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Wow I'm really surprised you recognized him, I though I totally messed up with the look alike Tim Roth. I have to admit that first I wanted him with hair, so I didn't quite though about the top of the dome shape, as Dhin said it does look short. I may also made the mistake to place the camera too far back, giving the whole head a flatter look, I can't really say. Keraj37: Thanks for your crit, what bothered you with the skin shader? The blue tone is too high? (I might have overdone it in post but I kinda liked it) Inveni0: I'm really surprised as I said you recognized him, I was really thinking I blew it haha. Tim Roth has a really specific face, I think for a first attempt at modeling someone famous, it was not a wise choice I maybe should have picked someone else with better references pictures. (all my references were different age/weight/etc..) DaddyDoom: Dhin: Thanks for these great hints Dhin, I totally agree, something is off but I couldn't point it neither exactly. I think as you said the head is too wide. Thank you very much for your comments and feedback, I really appreciate Attached Images __________________ Mr.T Prodz Monologue Reel Last edited by Mr.T; 14-10-2009 at 05:02 PM..

14-10-2009, 07:18 PM	#7
NinthJake The Ninth Join Date: Jan 2009 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,594 Thanks: 86 Thanked 27 Times in 25 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Pretty nice model but I think that the head is a tad too wide :O Also (I just love nitpicking) the collar is intersecting with the tie I think. Look at the tie on the right side just above the knot :P Great work though man!

16-10-2009, 03:17 PM	#8
Mr.T lost souvlaki.. Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Athens / Greece Posts: 893 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Thanks a lot for your kind words NinthJake! I checked the tie again if it was indeed intersecting with the shirt, but I didn't saw anything obvious, maybe it's the occlusion pass I posted that gives you this impression? __________________ Mr.T Prodz Monologue Reel

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