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his bottom right shoulder is higher than his bottom left. It seems a little tense/unnatural. I really like the pose so far. reminds me of that 300 sword smash.
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hey guy's sorry in haven't posted and thing in the past couple of day.
every one work is look great,  thanks Omagamista and J.B. I made those correction and gave him a better pose. So here is my final line art I'm going comic books style, I should start my color flat to day. I hope yall like it. Later guy's |
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15-11-2009, 11:34 PM
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realy cool, the pose is better and i love the comic book style, good job
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Looking great....Really dynamic pose you got there
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Wow! Excellent progress and nice changes. Can't wait to see this in color!
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Thanks guys.
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This is becoming very nice! Love the dynamic pose, the leap with the hammer never fails =D And this black and white style is kickass, I really want to see what's coming next!
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cool, nice powerful scene! keep on
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woho !! big jump MC . gr8 m8
now the only thing that i dnt like is the hero loosing attention , and his face is misfit for this composition. try one: 1) make one eyed or faceless 2 get rid of the extra arms and make wider chest 3) or make him a centaur like as already has been suggested. 4) just make the current head smaller and make the hammer rod thicker , its abnormally slim. 5)try the character wth tail too, for example a 9 head high fire demon. this is all i can think of for now. i hope its enough to soup up some thing awesome. |
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Thanks for the feed back guy's...
This comp is starting to heat up now so many great artist. Aby i see what you mean about him losing attention. him hoping I'm can really bring him out with the color. ;D as for changing the line work I don't think I'll have to much time. I really need to start thinking about hte color right now. Aby are you joining the comp... |
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the comic book line art style is working perfectly, reminds me of the old school comic days of 2000AD etc
is going to be interesting to see how you get colour working with this. my first thoughts were; it dosnt need colour! but sure am interested to see what you come up with. |
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18-11-2009, 04:12 AM
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i like how its coming along
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Really cool stuff. The textures and line art are superb.
I guess you could improve the tight“s proportions in relation to the whole body. “Cuz it looks a little bit short. Also, it looks like he is bending his knees and standing in some kind of invisible platform, you know?  Last edited by Brazucka; 18-11-2009 at 11:30 AM.. |
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18-11-2009, 12:14 PM
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umm yes mc brazucka is right.
it appears that guy is busy playing a virtual reality game ,on an invisible ground. actually the sense of gravity and the thrust of his leap have not been highlighted. |
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18-11-2009, 03:53 PM
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Brazuck and Aby, yeah I agree What y'all are saying Right now he looks like they pause him in middle air, but i really hope to bring it to life with the color i have much more to do. I want to add second light, fog, and stronger High light. Right now I have the flat and start to lay down some shadow and highlight.
much more work on this baby. I even need to work on the black area I want to add some Planet and stars. Thanks for the comments guy. and what do ya'll think? |
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