noundo — Hero — not yet

noundo · 15-11-2009, 03:31 PM

Hello everybody! It is my first time on Threedy and it is cool to be here))

First of all, sorry for my English.
And second of all, here's my try.
I have an idea to make my hero pretty tired of endless fights. He had just one battle with some evil dragon-snakes. So he sit and try to forget all this terrible things he have to do every day. We can see some bodies of his enemies, enter to their lair and kinda castle which our hero probably have to defend.

WIP and some sketching process to fine good composition is below.

Really need to know how it all looks like, an idea and whole picture.

thnx for any suggestions)

AbdultheNewt · 15-11-2009, 03:42 PM

Beautiful work and your English is fine. This is a wonderful concept and tells a story very nicely. While most of us focus on the moment before the battle, you capture the feeling of its completion. The castle in the background is also very telling.

I'd love to see a little more clearly on the foreground detail and a little more contrast to better make out the dragon. It took me a moment to understand what was happening in the image, but once I did, wow!

Excellent image!

M_Cederstrom · 15-11-2009, 11:12 PM

I love the mood on this one.

noundo · 16-11-2009, 08:57 AM

Thank you guys for feedback! I am working on, adding more details and try to make it clearer.
Now it like this

Resenhista · 16-11-2009, 12:13 PM

Wow this is such a beautiful drawing...That kind of 'dirty' painting style fits very nicely with the story...Excellent atmosphere, landscape, poses, very inspirating scene! But there's a WIP that I liked the most...the foreground is lit, showing better the dragon and the knight...you could do that, like a clearing sky focusing on them, I think it would be a nice add to the picture!
Overall, congratulations! =D

noundo · 16-11-2009, 05:13 PM

thnx man!
i do my best to make foreground more recognizable, now it is like this

AbdultheNewt · 16-11-2009, 05:18 PM

Incredible! Wonderful storytelling and a beautiful image.

noundo · 16-11-2009, 05:23 PM

thanx, AbdultheNewt!

J.B. · 16-11-2009, 07:37 PM

Welcome to Threedy!!!

realy cool job you did here and it is getting better and better, those lights and colors from the last post really changed the mood of the painting, have fun

M_Cederstrom · 16-11-2009, 11:12 PM

agree nice light.

aby arty · 17-11-2009, 02:17 PM

wow!! teach me too,i wud like to beat someone too , who u ask ? well MC

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animationutz · 17-11-2009, 11:31 PM

very beautiful. i love this pic

noundo · 24-11-2009, 01:24 PM

guys, thank you all for support!!! here's some update, I guess it is almost finished

AbdultheNewt · 24-11-2009, 02:03 PM

Wow! Even stronger with your latest additions. I also have to say that I like the composition better when it's flipped this way. Beautiful work!

Smot · 24-11-2009, 04:29 PM

I like your colors .. nice work!

15-11-2009, 03:31 PM	#1
noundo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	noundo — Hero — Lateran Hello everybody! It is my first time on Threedy and it is cool to be here)) First of all, sorry for my English. And second of all, here's my try. I have an idea to make my hero pretty tired of endless fights. He had just one battle with some evil dragon-snakes. So he sit and try to forget all this terrible things he have to do every day. We can see some bodies of his enemies, enter to their lair and kinda castle which our hero probably have to defend. WIP and some sketching process to fine good composition is below. Really need to know how it all looks like, an idea and whole picture. thnx for any suggestions) Attached Images Last edited by noundo; 29-11-2009 at 02:11 PM.. Reason: name giving

15-11-2009, 03:42 PM	#2
AbdultheNewt Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Beautiful work and your English is fine. This is a wonderful concept and tells a story very nicely. While most of us focus on the moment before the battle, you capture the feeling of its completion. The castle in the background is also very telling. I'd love to see a little more clearly on the foreground detail and a little more contrast to better make out the dragon. It took me a moment to understand what was happening in the image, but once I did, wow! Excellent image! __________________ http://www.lunatechfringe.com Webcomics posted Monday-Friday

15-11-2009, 11:12 PM	#3
M_Cederstrom Right Here Join Date: May 2005 Location: Dallas, Texas Posts: 2,984 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	I love the mood on this one. __________________ Study Thread (crite's are super welcome) mostly 2d work...

16-11-2009, 12:13 PM	#5
Resenhista Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: João Pessoa, Brazil Posts: 341 Thanks: 4 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Wow this is such a beautiful drawing...That kind of 'dirty' painting style fits very nicely with the story...Excellent atmosphere, landscape, poses, very inspirating scene! But there's a WIP that I liked the most...the foreground is lit, showing better the dragon and the knight...you could do that, like a clearing sky focusing on them, I think it would be a nice add to the picture! Overall, congratulations! =D __________________ "Pick a work that you love, and you won't have to work a single day in your life." http://resenhista.deviantart.com

16-11-2009, 05:18 PM	#7
AbdultheNewt Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Incredible! Wonderful storytelling and a beautiful image. __________________ http://www.lunatechfringe.com Webcomics posted Monday-Friday

16-11-2009, 08:57 AM	#4
noundo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thank you guys for feedback! I am working on, adding more details and try to make it clearer. Now it like this

16-11-2009, 05:13 PM	#6
noundo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thnx man! i do my best to make foreground more recognizable, now it is like this

16-11-2009, 05:23 PM	#8
noundo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx, AbdultheNewt!

16-11-2009, 07:37 PM	#9
J.B. Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Romania, Targu Jiu Posts: 219 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Welcome to Threedy!!! realy cool job you did here and it is getting better and better, those lights and colors from the last post really changed the mood of the painting, have fun __________________ Life is a work in progress ("The Floating Opera", J.Barth) My Blog (wip)

16-11-2009, 11:12 PM	#10
M_Cederstrom Right Here Join Date: May 2005 Location: Dallas, Texas Posts: 2,984 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 7	agree nice light. __________________ Study Thread (crite's are super welcome) mostly 2d work...

17-11-2009, 02:17 PM	#11
aby arty loving...... Kerem Beyit Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 893 Thanks: 30 Thanked 40 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	wow!! teach me too,i wud like to beat someone too , who u ask ? well MC . __________________ My 2D Thread My 3D Thread

17-11-2009, 11:31 PM	#12
animationutz Animation is life! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Denver, CO Posts: 121 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	very beautiful. i love this pic __________________ "You dont' do it for money, or you're a monkey. You don't think of the bottom line, or you're a monkey. You don't think of it in terms of hourly wage, yearly wage, even lifetime wage, or you're a monkey. In the end you don't even do it for love, although it would be nice to think so. You do it because to not do it is suicide." -Stephen King

24-11-2009, 01:24 PM	#13
noundo Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	guys, thank you all for support!!! here's some update, I guess it is almost finished Last edited by noundo; 24-11-2009 at 11:02 PM..

24-11-2009, 02:03 PM	#14
AbdultheNewt Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wow! Even stronger with your latest additions. I also have to say that I like the composition better when it's flipped this way. Beautiful work! __________________ http://www.lunatechfringe.com Webcomics posted Monday-Friday

24-11-2009, 04:29 PM	#15
Smot Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Brno, Czech Republic Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like your colors .. nice work! __________________ by Smot http://www.smot.cz

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