Cannonball!

faxe · 02-06-2003, 08:14 PM

Here's a character I designed for a game idea I came up with. (some more background info and pics on my web http://www.danfaxe.tk )

Anyway, tell me what you think. This is my first attempt at doing something like this in Photoshop but don't be afraid to bash me cause I want to improve!

evil_radish · 03-06-2003, 07:24 PM

cool idea, and quite well executed

only crit i have is that it seems flat, not enough deep shadows. also there is something disturbing with that face

oh, and a defined light source would be nice, now its really hard to tell where that ligh is coming from

tdawg217 · 05-06-2003, 02:44 AM

i think its great. the face fits the character. the only thing that kind of screwed me up was the proportions of the head, i know it should be big,but it looks like distorted. maybe its supposed to be.

tdawg217 · 05-06-2003, 02:45 AM

oh sorry, also the little hook thing holding his wrench look weird, the rope is not the same thickness all the way around and on the right side, it doesnt look like the edge of the wrench is over the rope thing

02-06-2003, 08:14 PM	#1
faxe Registered User Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Sweden Posts: 14 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Cannonball! Here's a character I designed for a game idea I came up with. (some more background info and pics on my web http://www.danfaxe.tk ) Anyway, tell me what you think. This is my first attempt at doing something like this in Photoshop but don't be afraid to bash me cause I want to improve! __________________ http://www.danfaxe.tk - Online Portfolio

03-06-2003, 07:24 PM	#2
evil_radish Registered User Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Sweden Posts: 89 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	cool idea, and quite well executed only crit i have is that it seems flat, not enough deep shadows. also there is something disturbing with that face oh, and a defined light source would be nice, now its really hard to tell where that ligh is coming from Last edited by evil_radish; 03-06-2003 at 07:27 PM..

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05-06-2003, 02:44 AM	#3
tdawg217 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 64 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i think its great. the face fits the character. the only thing that kind of screwed me up was the proportions of the head, i know it should be big,but it looks like distorted. maybe its supposed to be.

05-06-2003, 02:45 AM	#4
tdawg217 Registered User Join Date: May 2003 Posts: 64 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	oh sorry, also the little hook thing holding his wrench look weird, the rope is not the same thickness all the way around and on the right side, it doesnt look like the edge of the wrench is over the rope thing

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