xxxcubanxxx – Army Of One – Ölinka

xxxcubanxxx · 02-12-2009, 12:57 AM

I'm gonna start this one a bit different, I don't usually write down ideas, but is helping me visualize my concept better along with my reference pictures.

CYBERPUNK CHICK

Concept coming soon.

kevinck87 · 02-12-2009, 02:12 AM

this is a great way to start!

pogimonz · 02-12-2009, 02:13 AM

good job!.. clever approach, that really helps visualize the character..

Cordero · 02-12-2009, 08:20 PM

Thats exactly the way i started to imagine the lone wanderer in my head

The only difference, that i was thinking about a night vision, on his neck

I vote for high heels, if its voteable

I hope you will post some sketches soon, im curious about the girls body/design/outfit

Raul · 02-12-2009, 10:17 PM

well..get to work!

xxxcubanxxx · 03-12-2009, 02:36 AM

Roughing out ideas, pretty close to what I want.

Mr.fE · 03-12-2009, 10:48 AM

looks cool!

xxxcubanxxx · 04-12-2009, 02:43 AM

Thanks Mr. fE, glad you like it.

UPDATE - Started working on the base mesh for her body, this is my first female sculpt in zbrush so this is a learning process for me as I go along. If you guys have some suggestion I would love to hear them.

SR_6274 · 04-12-2009, 03:41 AM

Looking good so far. I really like the concept and can't wait to see this one get developed.

xxxcubanxxx · 04-12-2009, 04:38 AM

Cheers SR

Update...

Playing around with concepts for her Hand Gun

Mr.fE · 04-12-2009, 08:11 AM

wow the model is coming out really cool!

and you are fast too!

Perversonality · 04-12-2009, 08:19 AM

The model is looking good so far mate, though some of the details look like they could use a little positional tweaking. The mouth in particular looks a bit too low right now unless you are going to age the body to around 50 years old

xxxcubanxxx · 04-12-2009, 11:13 AM

Thanks for the comments and suggestions guys, I'll get on it once I get home from work today.

SnappedStrings · 04-12-2009, 05:39 PM

Hmm... just a few proportional issues.

As you said yourself, this is your first zbrush female, which shows
there are many masculine features on this sculpt.

For one, the head seams a bit small (from a realistic perspective). And the shoulder muscles seem a bit too large (masculine). Also, the neck seems just a weeeeeee bit too long.

Also, the abdomen seems a bit too broad, but this might be just in relation to the size of the head/neck.

And lastly, and this is just my personal opinion, but do away with the big perky anime tits. I might be alone on this, but the last time I felt a booby, it sagged a bit. I haaaate the big basketball ones people use. Again, just personal opinion, so take it with a grain of salt.

I like your concept, lots of good ideas there. The color scheme is a bit weird to me. Light blue and pea green just clash really hard. Maybe some more color comps will help you find a better match.

Good luck and keep up the great work!

DeadMonkey · 04-12-2009, 06:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SnappedStrings

Hmm... just a few proportional issues.

As you said yourself, this is your first zbrush female, which shows
there are many masculine features on this sculpt.

For one, the head seams a bit small (from a realistic perspective). And the shoulder muscles seem a bit too large (masculine). Also, the neck seems just a weeeeeee bit too long.

Also, the abdomen seems a bit too broad, but this might be just in relation to the size of the head/neck.

And lastly, and this is just my personal opinion, but do away with the big perky anime tits. I might be alone on this, but the last time I felt a booby, it sagged a bit. I haaaate the big basketball ones people use. Again, just personal opinion, so take it with a grain of salt.

I like your concept, lots of good ideas there. The color scheme is a bit weird to me. Light blue and pea green just clash really hard. Maybe some more color comps will help you find a better match.

Good luck and keep up the great work!

What?! the body seems pretty impressive and i would have to disagree with everything you said except the head part. that could use a little work. This person probably wants her a little masculine cause of the theme "ARMY OF ONE"

02-12-2009, 12:57 AM	#1
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	xxxcubanxxx – Army Of One – Ölinka I'm gonna start this one a bit different, I don't usually write down ideas, but is helping me visualize my concept better along with my reference pictures. CYBERPUNK CHICK Concept coming soon. __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO Last edited by xxxcubanxxx; 02-12-2009 at 01:32 AM..

02-12-2009, 10:17 PM	#5
Raul Registered User Join Date: Jul 2003 Location: Dallas, TX Posts: 976 Thanks: 0 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	well..get to work! __________________ folio \|\| my game art thread

03-12-2009, 02:36 AM	#6
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Roughing out ideas, pretty close to what I want. __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

04-12-2009, 02:43 AM	#8
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Thanks Mr. fE, glad you like it. UPDATE - Started working on the base mesh for her body, this is my first female sculpt in zbrush so this is a learning process for me as I go along. If you guys have some suggestion I would love to hear them. __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

04-12-2009, 03:41 AM	#9
SR_6274 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Orlando, FL Posts: 1,022 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Looking good so far. I really like the concept and can't wait to see this one get developed. __________________ Speed Modeling Challenges Winner SMC #60 - Done in 60 Seconds Second Place SMC #52 - Take a closer look Honorable Mentions The New SMC's - 025 - Large Cappuccino with sugar My Web Site MY DWIV Thread

02-12-2009, 02:12 AM	#2
kevinck87 Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Malaysia Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is a great way to start!

02-12-2009, 02:13 AM	#3
pogimonz mango smoothie! Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Seattle, WA Posts: 702 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	good job!.. clever approach, that really helps visualize the character..

02-12-2009, 08:20 PM	#4
Cordero Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Hungary Posts: 1,335 Thanks: 5 Thanked 16 Times in 15 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Thats exactly the way i started to imagine the lone wanderer in my head The only difference, that i was thinking about a night vision, on his neck I vote for high heels, if its voteable I hope you will post some sketches soon, im curious about the girls body/design/outfit

03-12-2009, 10:48 AM	#7
Mr.fE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Milano - Italy Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	looks cool!

04-12-2009, 04:38 AM	#10
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Cheers SR Update... Playing around with concepts for her Hand Gun __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

04-12-2009, 08:11 AM	#11
Mr.fE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Milano - Italy Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	wow the model is coming out really cool! and you are fast too!

04-12-2009, 08:19 AM	#12
Perversonality Nick/Spud/Spudmonkey Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Reading(ish), Engerlandshire Posts: 2,749 Thanks: 21 Thanked 53 Times in 50 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	The model is looking good so far mate, though some of the details look like they could use a little positional tweaking. The mouth in particular looks a bit too low right now unless you are going to age the body to around 50 years old __________________ My homepage mostly designed to show off my <400 triangle low poly models My physical model shop: Buy my crap

04-12-2009, 11:13 AM	#13
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Thanks for the comments and suggestions guys, I'll get on it once I get home from work today. __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

04-12-2009, 05:39 PM	#14
SnappedStrings Criticism Fairy Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: San Francisco Posts: 251 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Hmm... just a few proportional issues. As you said yourself, this is your first zbrush female, which shows there are many masculine features on this sculpt. For one, the head seams a bit small (from a realistic perspective). And the shoulder muscles seem a bit too large (masculine). Also, the neck seems just a weeeeeee bit too long. Also, the abdomen seems a bit too broad, but this might be just in relation to the size of the head/neck. And lastly, and this is just my personal opinion, but do away with the big perky anime tits. I might be alone on this, but the last time I felt a booby, it sagged a bit. I haaaate the big basketball ones people use. Again, just personal opinion, so take it with a grain of salt. I like your concept, lots of good ideas there. The color scheme is a bit weird to me. Light blue and pea green just clash really hard. Maybe some more color comps will help you find a better match. Good luck and keep up the great work! __________________ I like 'em chunky. Portfolio

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