Jerico - Army of One - Tommy gone WILD - Page 2

Jerico · 14-12-2009, 06:35 PM

Made some details to the head. Lets see how well it works with the (upcoming) hat.

xxxcubanxxx · 14-12-2009, 06:42 PM

Looking awesome dude.

Tarik2d · 14-12-2009, 06:44 PM

Yeah this is looking good, well done

melvinsqualor · 14-12-2009, 07:05 PM

Tommy keeps getting wilder by the second. Sculpt is really taking shape.

E4sY · 14-12-2009, 07:50 PM

I second that. The sculpt is looking better. Especially the beard. Right now it does look like the cheek bones should be less defined, while the upper lip seems like it needs more definition.

setschaos · 14-12-2009, 10:38 PM

FANTASTIC! There it is, you really put it back in. I could see some more playing around in the face if you really want to showcase it, maybe a little soul patch under his bottom lip or letting the eyebrows stick out on the side of the brow some more. Great update, can't wait to see more.

Off to work on mine since you're blowing it out of the water

Jerico · 15-12-2009, 06:37 PM

Weee! Another update for my dear forum.

Tarik2d · 15-12-2009, 08:09 PM

Looking Nice, are you still going to give him the weapon on his back? What is on his back btw?

Jerico · 15-12-2009, 08:14 PM

Tarik2d: Theres gonna be the trafficsign-axe-thingy, shawed off shotgun and a M4 Carbine in a old winchester rifleholster. Kinda mixing different styles, but the weapons are gonna be there later. The rifle is gonna be in his back... naturally.

Basically the concept is still valid in all ways

Chrisp-3DT · 16-12-2009, 09:36 AM

like the idea and the modelling is cool, but i think the arms need some attention. The wrists are quite thick compared to the rest of the arm. but on the whole good start

Mr.fE · 16-12-2009, 10:47 AM

looks really cool!

I guess Chrisp-3DT is right and I might also add some other issues I notice:

kneepads seems too high, or the legs seems just too straight, almost rear bent...

the coat thing he's wearing is strange...

Jerico · 16-12-2009, 11:12 AM

Nice to have constructive comments

The hands really need more work. That's for sure.

About the legs, the cloth fold so that the legs seem distorted. They look to be quite correct in my eyes, but it is true that the kneepads should go more downwards.

The jacket is currently reacting to gear that is non-existent now. The folding is made according some lowpoly placeholders, like the shotgun in the right leg and the weight of the rifle. The design is in my opinion really unique and fun, so it is a bit strange.

Mr.fE · 16-12-2009, 02:36 PM

very good then!
it's a great piece of work!!! keep going!!

VinsanityV20 · 18-12-2009, 02:35 AM

Dude; awesome concept and an awesome model. I can't wait to see you finish!

Something's bugging me about the face though; his mouth seems a little too wide. More like a gorilla than a man, but hell, it could just be stylized. Plus I don't think I'll care when you're done - the key component for his head is his hat. That's what's eye catching anyway. Just thinking out loud I suppose.

Really can't wait to see the finished product. Keep up the great work!

Jerico · 27-12-2009, 12:54 PM

Happy holidays! Here's where I left the model week ago. Only normal- and color map applied... so the specular might be a bit funny currently. Still lots of work to do

Just a clean screenshot from Blender:

14-12-2009, 06:35 PM	#16
Jerico Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Finland Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Made some details to the head. Lets see how well it works with the (upcoming) hat. __________________ Enjoying the world of arts Fav. tools: ZBrush, 3Ds Max/Blender and Photoshop

14-12-2009, 06:42 PM	#17
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,166 Thanks: 149 Thanked 152 Times in 145 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Looking awesome dude. __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

14-12-2009, 06:44 PM	#18
Tarik2d Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,498 Thanks: 20 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Yeah this is looking good, well done __________________ www.tarik-ali.com

14-12-2009, 07:05 PM	#19
melvinsqualor Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, Utah Posts: 40 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Tommy keeps getting wilder by the second. Sculpt is really taking shape. __________________ my site

14-12-2009, 07:50 PM	#20
E4sY aka E4sY_506 (xbox live) Join Date: Mar 2008 Posts: 394 Thanks: 11 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I second that. The sculpt is looking better. Especially the beard. Right now it does look like the cheek bones should be less defined, while the upper lip seems like it needs more definition. __________________ 3D ArTisT - What I'm Working On - - DW 5 - - Fanatic Soldier -- Sci-fi Cop - -Army Of One- - Sci-fi Marine - - Conscript - - Thoughtful Alien - - Club Girl -

14-12-2009, 10:38 PM	#21
setschaos Is portfolio-less Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: MA, USA Posts: 514 Thanks: 17 Thanked 19 Times in 19 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	FANTASTIC! There it is, you really put it back in. I could see some more playing around in the face if you really want to showcase it, maybe a little soul patch under his bottom lip or letting the eyebrows stick out on the side of the brow some more. Great update, can't wait to see more. Off to work on mine since you're blowing it out of the water

15-12-2009, 06:37 PM	#22
Jerico Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Finland Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Weee! Another update for my dear forum. __________________ Enjoying the world of arts Fav. tools: ZBrush, 3Ds Max/Blender and Photoshop

15-12-2009, 08:09 PM	#23
Tarik2d Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,498 Thanks: 20 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Looking Nice, are you still going to give him the weapon on his back? What is on his back btw? __________________ www.tarik-ali.com

15-12-2009, 08:14 PM	#24
Jerico Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Finland Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Tarik2d: Theres gonna be the trafficsign-axe-thingy, shawed off shotgun and a M4 Carbine in a old winchester rifleholster. Kinda mixing different styles, but the weapons are gonna be there later. The rifle is gonna be in his back... naturally. Basically the concept is still valid in all ways __________________ Enjoying the world of arts Fav. tools: ZBrush, 3Ds Max/Blender and Photoshop

16-12-2009, 09:36 AM	#25
Chrisp-3DT Naughty Kinky Boy Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Worcester Posts: 1,166 Thanks: 0 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	like the idea and the modelling is cool, but i think the arms need some attention. The wrists are quite thick compared to the rest of the arm. but on the whole good start __________________ Forum Features Start your own portfolio here Request your awards here

16-12-2009, 10:47 AM	#26
Mr.fE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Milano - Italy Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	looks really cool! I guess Chrisp-3DT is right and I might also add some other issues I notice: kneepads seems too high, or the legs seems just too straight, almost rear bent... the coat thing he's wearing is strange...

16-12-2009, 11:12 AM	#27
Jerico Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Finland Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice to have constructive comments The hands really need more work. That's for sure. About the legs, the cloth fold so that the legs seem distorted. They look to be quite correct in my eyes, but it is true that the kneepads should go more downwards. The jacket is currently reacting to gear that is non-existent now. The folding is made according some lowpoly placeholders, like the shotgun in the right leg and the weight of the rifle. The design is in my opinion really unique and fun, so it is a bit strange. __________________ Enjoying the world of arts Fav. tools: ZBrush, 3Ds Max/Blender and Photoshop

16-12-2009, 02:36 PM	#28
Mr.fE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Milano - Italy Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	very good then! it's a great piece of work!!! keep going!!

18-12-2009, 02:35 AM	#29
VinsanityV20 Vinsane in the Membrane Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Crapsville, PA Posts: 655 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Dude; awesome concept and an awesome model. I can't wait to see you finish! Something's bugging me about the face though; his mouth seems a little too wide. More like a gorilla than a man, but hell, it could just be stylized. Plus I don't think I'll care when you're done - the key component for his head is his hat. That's what's eye catching anyway. Just thinking out loud I suppose. Really can't wait to see the finished product. Keep up the great work! __________________ "Just do it 'cuz it's cool" Current 3DTotal comps: none. Learning Character Rigging, Unity. Comments & Critiques, always appreciated Homepage: This is Vinsanity

27-12-2009, 12:54 PM	#30
Jerico Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Finland Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Happy holidays! Here's where I left the model week ago. Only normal- and color map applied... so the specular might be a bit funny currently. Still lots of work to do Just a clean screenshot from Blender: __________________ Enjoying the world of arts Fav. tools: ZBrush, 3Ds Max/Blender and Photoshop

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