F B I O S - Army Of One - Wasteland Hunter

Fbios · 04-12-2009, 07:33 AM

Hi everyone!
Sketch will comming soon.

Fbios · 04-12-2009, 10:20 AM

This is my 30 min sketch.

Jerico · 04-12-2009, 10:40 AM

Very nice silhouette concept

I suppose there's no game competition logo, like in the sculpting challenges? I was just moment ago looking for it...

xxxcubanxxx · 04-12-2009, 11:14 AM

like Jerico said, silhouette is looking really cool I want to see more.

Fbios · 04-12-2009, 08:42 PM

Thanks Jerico and xxxcubanxxx.
I did n't found any competition logo too

next sketch...

Perversonality · 04-12-2009, 09:00 PM

Just my opinion, but I prefered the simplicity of the original sketch. A lot of the best characters have a very simple and obvious role and I think your second sketch over-complicates things

Rezdoggy · 04-12-2009, 10:01 PM

i liked the first sketch better because it had a more sinister look, the second sketch is fine though cause its showin off details

. maybe you could make his hood cover his face a little more? it would make him look more intimidating

TerraBite · 05-12-2009, 03:18 AM

Very nice concept! Interested to see it modeled. I'll be watching

Kraken · 05-12-2009, 05:41 AM

Looks interesting!
I guess you are big fan of “S.T.A.L.K.E.R”!!! If not here are some pictires that could help you:

Mr.fE · 05-12-2009, 07:48 AM

yeah I guess the first sketch was more WILD!

Fbios · 05-12-2009, 10:39 AM

Thanks for the good advices. I will alter my second sketch.
Kraken, yes i am fan of “S.T.A.L.K.E.R”, thanks for pics!

SnappedStrings · 05-12-2009, 02:08 PM

I agree, the silhouette was more interesting than the second piece of concept. I think it's because the silhouette left so much to the imagination.

On further note, I feel like your character needs something to make him feel more exotic. Right now, I feel like this character would fit into any number of video games, he could play a theif, or a soldier in a ww2 game, or a modern special agent, etc. My point is, he just doesn't feel like an end of the world survivor.

I'm not sure where you should go from here. I think more concept is needed. Try to juice up the feel to him. Nice work, keep it up!

Fbios · 05-12-2009, 06:51 PM

Thanks SnappedStrings, great advice!
Here is my new concept! I tried to consider all advices. Now he is wild and sinister and i hope he look like an end of the world survivor

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But now i have no idea how to do this in 3D, because there are a lot of staff and eqipment

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What do you think about this sketch?

ChaosDragonDZ · 05-12-2009, 07:09 PM

this concept is definitely better, it has way more personality than the other one. also,

Quote:

Originally Posted by SnappedStrings

My point is, he just doesn't feel like an end of the world survivor.

Since the end of the world hasn't happened yet, and nobody knows what the culture that develops out of it would actually be like, you cant say it doesn't "feel" like an end of the world survivor; it may not feel like your vision of an end of the world survivor, but it feels like FBIOS's vision.
keep workin on it man, cant wait for updates!

xxxcubanxxx · 05-12-2009, 09:20 PM

Last concept is rocking dude...

04-12-2009, 07:33 AM	#1
Fbios Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Voronezh, Russia Posts: 140 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	F B I O S - Army Of One - Wasteland Hunter Hi everyone! Sketch will comming soon. Last edited by Fbios; 04-12-2009 at 08:50 PM..

04-12-2009, 10:20 AM	#2
Fbios Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Voronezh, Russia Posts: 140 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	This is my 30 min sketch. Attached Images Last edited by Fbios; 04-12-2009 at 08:50 PM..

04-12-2009, 10:40 AM	#3
Jerico Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Finland Posts: 29 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Very nice silhouette concept I suppose there's no game competition logo, like in the sculpting challenges? I was just moment ago looking for it... __________________ Enjoying the world of arts Fav. tools: ZBrush, 3Ds Max/Blender and Photoshop

04-12-2009, 11:14 AM	#4
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	like Jerico said, silhouette is looking really cool I want to see more. __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

04-12-2009, 08:42 PM	#5
Fbios Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Voronezh, Russia Posts: 140 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Thanks Jerico and xxxcubanxxx. I did n't found any competition logo too next sketch... Attached Images

04-12-2009, 09:00 PM	#6
Perversonality Nick/Spud/Spudmonkey Join Date: Feb 2003 Location: Reading(ish), Engerlandshire Posts: 2,748 Thanks: 21 Thanked 53 Times in 50 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Just my opinion, but I prefered the simplicity of the original sketch. A lot of the best characters have a very simple and obvious role and I think your second sketch over-complicates things __________________ My homepage mostly designed to show off my <400 triangle low poly models My physical model shop: Buy my crap

04-12-2009, 10:01 PM	#7
Rezdoggy Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: York East England Posts: 44 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	i liked the first sketch better because it had a more sinister look, the second sketch is fine though cause its showin off details . maybe you could make his hood cover his face a little more? it would make him look more intimidating

05-12-2009, 03:18 AM	#8
TerraBite Master In Training Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: New York Posts: 123 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Very nice concept! Interested to see it modeled. I'll be watching

05-12-2009, 05:41 AM	#9
Kraken Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Ukraine, Kharkiv Posts: 49 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks interesting! I guess you are big fan of “S.T.A.L.K.E.R”!!! If not here are some pictires that could help you: Attached Images Last edited by Kraken; 05-12-2009 at 05:52 AM..

05-12-2009, 07:48 AM	#10
Mr.fE Registered User Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Milano - Italy Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	yeah I guess the first sketch was more WILD!

05-12-2009, 10:39 AM	#11
Fbios Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Voronezh, Russia Posts: 140 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Thanks for the good advices. I will alter my second sketch. Kraken, yes i am fan of “S.T.A.L.K.E.R”, thanks for pics!

05-12-2009, 02:08 PM	#12
SnappedStrings Criticism Fairy Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: San Francisco Posts: 251 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I agree, the silhouette was more interesting than the second piece of concept. I think it's because the silhouette left so much to the imagination. On further note, I feel like your character needs something to make him feel more exotic. Right now, I feel like this character would fit into any number of video games, he could play a theif, or a soldier in a ww2 game, or a modern special agent, etc. My point is, he just doesn't feel like an end of the world survivor. I'm not sure where you should go from here. I think more concept is needed. Try to juice up the feel to him. Nice work, keep it up! __________________ I like 'em chunky. Portfolio

05-12-2009, 06:51 PM	#13
Fbios Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Voronezh, Russia Posts: 140 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Thanks SnappedStrings, great advice! Here is my new concept! I tried to consider all advices. Now he is wild and sinister and i hope he look like an end of the world survivor . But now i have no idea how to do this in 3D, because there are a lot of staff and eqipment . What do you think about this sketch? Attached Images

05-12-2009, 09:20 PM	#15
xxxcubanxxx Your Cuban Daddy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Austin, TX Posts: 2,156 Thanks: 149 Thanked 147 Times in 141 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	Last concept is rocking dude... __________________ SKETCHES & WIPs PORTFOLIO

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