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Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 11:47 AM

Well i think i am a stage now that i should post up some images.

i downloaded the concept off the internet.. might have even been of 3dt.. who knows.. But when isaw it i thought.. yeah thats a army of one.. she has a sadness that looks like she is alone in the world..

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 11:49 AM

So now on to the main event.. as they say.. this the work done is zbrush

i know the render with the material isn't great.. but at this early stage i'm not too worried

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 11:51 AM

Finally.. well for now. anyway.. here are some test renders in max.. (no lighting as of yet)... and my wireframes and UVs..

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 11:52 AM

Oh.. the back view as well

BiG ToE-3DT · 18-12-2009, 02:53 PM

are you using any ref images. It will help fix the issue your having with proportions.

example, the shoulders are too manly, need to make them smaller. The legs are too small in thickness, you could keep them the way they are, but then you would need to un-buff the rest of the body. The side view has her looking off balanced, the tiny legs are moved to far forward and as I said before, are tiny. If you make a few changes you will be on your way.

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 03:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BiG ToE-3DT

are you using any ref images. It will help fix the issue your having with proportions.

example, the shoulders are too manly, need to make them smaller. The legs are too small in thickness, you could keep them the way they are, but then you would need to un-buff the rest of the body. The side view has her looking off balanced, the tiny legs are moved to far forward and as I said before, are tiny. If you make a few changes you will be on your way.

yeah i understand what you mean about the legs they are a bit thin.. but i she is an amazon woman.. so surely she would be a bit more butch in the chest and shoulder area.. rather than like a petit woman.. and no- i haven't really got good access to great reference material.. so i am making do with what i can get my hands on.. but considering i am away over the next week.. and the deadline is the end of the month i will probably just leave her the way she is.. and try and make up for it with her clothing and hair..

BiG ToE-3DT · 18-12-2009, 03:35 PM

try some of these images

just plop the one you like on an image plane in max, and then move some verts around.

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 03:52 PM

how this.. have made some changes to the mesh.. hopefully she looks more femanine

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 03:52 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BiG ToE-3DT

try some of these images

just plop the one you like on an image plane in max, and then move some verts around.

yeah have made some changes

BiG ToE-3DT · 18-12-2009, 03:54 PM

much better.

Neil_F01 · 18-12-2009, 03:56 PM

RHedendahl · 18-12-2009, 04:16 PM

Shoulders and neck are to wide. She would also look better with some sort of a waist/make the hips larger. belly button is too far down.

18-12-2009, 11:47 AM	#1
Neil_F01 Neil_01 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: UK Posts: 2,010 Thanks: 171 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Amazon Well i think i am a stage now that i should post up some images. i downloaded the concept off the internet.. might have even been of 3dt.. who knows.. But when isaw it i thought.. yeah thats a army of one.. she has a sadness that looks like she is alone in the world.. Attached Images __________________ Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01

18-12-2009, 11:49 AM	#2
Neil_F01 Neil_01 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: UK Posts: 2,010 Thanks: 171 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	So now on to the main event.. as they say.. this the work done is zbrush i know the render with the material isn't great.. but at this early stage i'm not too worried Attached Images __________________ Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01

18-12-2009, 11:51 AM	#3
Neil_F01 Neil_01 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: UK Posts: 2,010 Thanks: 171 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Finally.. well for now. anyway.. here are some test renders in max.. (no lighting as of yet)... and my wireframes and UVs.. Attached Images __________________ Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01

18-12-2009, 11:52 AM	#4
Neil_F01 Neil_01 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: UK Posts: 2,010 Thanks: 171 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Oh.. the back view as well Attached Images __________________ Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01

18-12-2009, 02:53 PM	#5
BiG ToE-3DT Reputation beyond repute Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Chicago Posts: 8,601 Thanks: 135 Thanked 143 Times in 115 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	are you using any ref images. It will help fix the issue your having with proportions. example, the shoulders are too manly, need to make them smaller. The legs are too small in thickness, you could keep them the way they are, but then you would need to un-buff the rest of the body. The side view has her looking off balanced, the tiny legs are moved to far forward and as I said before, are tiny. If you make a few changes you will be on your way. __________________ Thighten Up The Graphics On Level 3 "something wrongI think" Threedy 4 Life I hate Justin Bieber every day

18-12-2009, 03:35 PM	#7
BiG ToE-3DT Reputation beyond repute Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Chicago Posts: 8,601 Thanks: 135 Thanked 143 Times in 115 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	try some of these images just plop the one you like on an image plane in max, and then move some verts around. Attached Images __________________ Thighten Up The Graphics On Level 3 "something wrongI think" Threedy 4 Life I hate Justin Bieber every day

18-12-2009, 03:52 PM	#8
Neil_F01 Neil_01 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: UK Posts: 2,010 Thanks: 171 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	how this.. have made some changes to the mesh.. hopefully she looks more femanine Attached Images __________________ Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01

18-12-2009, 03:54 PM	#10
BiG ToE-3DT Reputation beyond repute Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: Chicago Posts: 8,601 Thanks: 135 Thanked 143 Times in 115 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 14	much better. __________________ Thighten Up The Graphics On Level 3 "something wrongI think" Threedy 4 Life I hate Justin Bieber every day

18-12-2009, 03:56 PM	#11
Neil_F01 Neil_01 Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: UK Posts: 2,010 Thanks: 171 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	cool __________________ Sketch Book Of Finals: -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post841503 2013 - Work Dump -- http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...d=1#post946582 WheelJack: -- WIP http://forums.3dtotal.com/showthread...969#post841969 I'm On YouTube: -- http://www.youtube.com/user/NeilF01

18-12-2009, 04:16 PM	#12
RHedendahl Registered User Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Sweden Posts: 925 Thanks: 8 Thanked 20 Times in 17 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Shoulders and neck are to wide. She would also look better with some sort of a waist/make the hips larger. belly button is too far down. __________________ Portfolio Sketchbook - Threads: Time for 2d Sketchbook - 2013

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