raulfabi - After the smoke clears

[raulfabi]

Don't worry Akim, i'm open for advices and suggestions.
You know, always 4 eyes are seeing better the two.

PS: Youre both right with the hand !

Cheers!

[TheSaraf]

Great concept man ! Those "footsteps" on the sand in foreground are great indication of life after armageddon.

[DannyCG]

That reflection on the lake got to go good work, good luck

[raulfabi]

Hi,

Here's another update.
I think it is better now, and reflections are gone .
Chers and see you at next update

[2BIG3k]

The camels and the oasis are a great idea. But don't quite buy the giraffe as for scale and it's new habitat.

[raulfabi]

Don't worry the giraf was just for fun
Cheers.

[yaRa]

Hi!

Nice start, but I see some strange thinks )))
building reflection in water can not be there... And hand looks too green in desert...

Keep on working, it is original idea in this challenge!!! )))
Good luck!

[raulfabi]

Hi everybody,

Here's my new update.
A lot to go
Suggestions are welcome
Cheers !

[Claw]

I like the sand storm sweeping in. Looks cool. I still think the green is to powerful, you could try moving its hue more towards the yellows so it looks a little sun damaged but not to much. and the building on the right looks out of scale, maybe you could add some mist/haze/dust in front of it so it feels farther back. just a few ideas but over all looking really good.

[raulfabi]

Hi,

I am already working on the green issue, and I also began to destroy the buildings.
Some sand, dust arround I will try.
Cheers.

PS: What do you guys think, the sky should be more blue or it's ok like this?
Let's vote.

[yaRa]

the sky is ok )
I think, you should work on the shadows at sands ) It is too black to cloudy weather )
Or am I hurry with comments like this?..

Originally Posted by raulfabi

Hi,

I am already working on the green issue, and I also began to destroy the buildings.
Some sand, dust arround I will try.
Cheers.

PS: What do you guys think, the sky should be more blue or it's ok like this?
Let's vote.

[raulfabi]

Hi there,
My new update are here.
Crits are most welcome.
Still a lot to go, more destruction, and working on the foreground.
Cheers!

[Claw]

I think that green looks a lot better! coming along nicely.

[raulfabi]

Hi, everybody.
Here's my new update.
Background buldings are now damaged, and I begun o add some foreground.
Need to add more foreground and arange the sand dunes colors.(Like Yara said )

Cheers.

[2BIG3k]

It's getting better, I particularly like the sandstorm. One thing you should consider to work on is the introduction of a more unique light direction. For example the dunes are lit from the right side, the camlels are lit from behind and the building on the right seems to have no particular lighting yet. This would also help you to set the right mood.

Cheers,
Marc