Terrabite - Steam Punk - Pinion

[JHarford]

Hey good work, look forward to seeing more of it..
Hope more than a few people finish this one

[goast666]

bah, dude is a relative term now :P I agree about the foot length. You should also push up the subD level on the knee pads, the slash brush didn't have enough polys to cut in there very well.

I'd take a look at the eyes again as well. She needs belts!!! lots of them. No clue why...too much anime probably.

Keep at it.

[Fbios]

Hi! Nice foto! you are cute. besides greate scuplt and disign.

[Buzzy]

Pretty nice work.

I like the hair alot. And I like the stereo-system-looking thing she has built into her torso. I'm sure they are supposed to be plugs or jacks or something...but to me it looks like she has subwoofers for tits and tweeters for abs...no matter what they are supposed to be, they still look cool. Maybe pinch the skin around them so they look more "implanted".

I don't care for the buttons. Rather than sculpt them, I would probably model them as a separate piece. You'll get a cleaner bake that way.

And I am very picky about hands. For me, hands and faces are the two things that must look correct because those are the two most expressive parts of the body. The face is good, and the hands aren't bad, but that pinky finger is killing me. Its too big and is sitting too far back on the hand. All the knuckles should be almost straight in line, with the pinky dipping just a little.

[BiG ToE-3DT]

going off what Buzzy stated about the hands, I'm thinking they may need to be all around bigger. At first glance, they seem small. Maybe its just the length of the fingers. They seem short too. Try lengthening them and see how that looks.

[Insania]

Good character idea and nice sculpting, but something wrong with her hands, pay more attention her fingers.(sorry if I wrote something wrong)

[TerraBite]

It'd be so hard to reply to everyone now, but thank you soo much for the support and help. I will try and make all of the adjustments as you guys would like and hopefully she will be beautiful! Here's just a head so you can study her face more. It's been really hard to fix her eyes, since i retopoed without the part behind the eyeballs, but I'll be sure to do that for my next sculpt. Thank you again everyone!

[Appr_oved]

deff good job everything is looking beast <3 want morrrrrrrrrrre

[RHedendahl]

Did a fast paintover to help you, hope it's okay.
-eyes are closer together and has thicker eyelids
- smaller jaw and the face are a little shorter.
- forehead a bit smaller
Coloring the eyes was just for fun..
Looking good so far, looking forward to seeing more.

[TerraBite]

Hey guys! I just wanted to make a quick last presentation of the final sculpt. Unfortunately, I can't adjust the face because it's been already decimated (polys are screwed up) But I am going to fix up the hands even more and maybe add some other final touches. If you'd like to squeeze in a critique, let me know asap. Thanks everyone!

[Appr_oved]

this looks wayyyy better from before, love the detail, great job so far

[Tarik2d]

Dont think there is anything wrong with the face, Just the hands like you say but overall its working well

[Raul]

Totally digging the clock gears back pack thingie you got going on!

[ChaosDragonDZ]

coming together awesomely! retopoing those gears might be a hassle tho!

[TerraBite]

Appr_oved - Thank you so much, babe ^__^

Tarik2d - Thank you, I hope they look much better now

Neto - Me too Let's see how much I still like it when i retopo! haha

ChaosDragonDZ - Oh yeaaa, but it's not like I have classes or anything T__T

The sculpt is DONE! I really hope you guys like the hands better, I did my best. Thank you so much for the help along the way Appr_oved <3 Ah, now onto retopo.