rofiqalfata – A new beginning

rofiqalfata · 15-01-2010, 03:17 AM

hi all, i'm new here. here's my rough concept...

atulkatdare · 15-01-2010, 03:29 AM

nice! nice mood you have created...i liked this

rofiqalfata · 17-01-2010, 05:00 AM

thanks atulkatdare...

update. i just added more destructions, wreckages, buildings, new lives (plants, water and birds) and changed lighting mood... but I'm not so sure with that mood

rofiqalfata · 26-01-2010, 05:16 PM

update...

Aramor · 26-01-2010, 07:48 PM

It's really cool.

Only criticism I have is that I don't think that building in the middle will be that intact if it's been standing at an angle like that for a while.

rofiqalfata · 28-01-2010, 06:26 AM

-Aramor: thanks, you're right. it's destroyed now

i changed the angle slightly, almost there...

rofiqalfata · 29-01-2010, 01:35 AM

i think this would be my final image..., but there's still time to do some refinements...

any comments, critics, suggestions?

szaszgbr · 29-01-2010, 09:17 AM

I like it!
maybe brownish color is better. brings out the difference between vegetation and the buildings.

Tarik2d · 29-01-2010, 09:22 AM

Post 6 has defo got a better mood to it

2BIG3k · 30-01-2010, 03:29 PM

Really nice result.

One thing that seems bit strange to me is the city appearing more futuristic in the background than in the foreground, but just a personal sensation I guess.
Oh, and is it possible to have two lensflares from light source?

Good luck and cheers,

Marc

rofiqalfata · 31-01-2010, 03:19 AM

thanks for the comments, critics and suggestions guys..., it's really final now..

W.I.P sheet here

Final image:

Good luck everyone!

PS: where is the final image submission thread?

Akim · 31-01-2010, 07:29 AM

Cool! Good chaos here! And I like final color gamma!

15-01-2010, 03:17 AM	#1
rofiqalfata five years old boy... Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: jakarta Posts: 91 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	rofiqalfata – A new beginning hi all, i'm new here. here's my rough concept...

15-01-2010, 03:29 AM	#2
atulkatdare Registered User Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: mumbai, india Posts: 130 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	nice! nice mood you have created...i liked this __________________ my online cg portfolio

26-01-2010, 07:48 PM	#5
Aramor Registered User Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Enschede, Holland Posts: 376 Thanks: 1 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	It's really cool. Only criticism I have is that I don't think that building in the middle will be that intact if it's been standing at an angle like that for a while. __________________ It's always hard to put something good here, but someone once said "If you don't have anything good to say, don't say anything." So, following that rational, I'll leave this empty. ... Wait...

29-01-2010, 09:22 AM	#9
Tarik2d Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 1,498 Thanks: 20 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Post 6 has defo got a better mood to it __________________ www.tarik-ali.com

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17-01-2010, 05:00 AM	#3
rofiqalfata five years old boy... Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: jakarta Posts: 91 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	thanks atulkatdare... update. i just added more destructions, wreckages, buildings, new lives (plants, water and birds) and changed lighting mood... but I'm not so sure with that mood

26-01-2010, 05:16 PM	#4
rofiqalfata five years old boy... Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: jakarta Posts: 91 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	update...

28-01-2010, 06:26 AM	#6
rofiqalfata five years old boy... Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: jakarta Posts: 91 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	-Aramor: thanks, you're right. it's destroyed now i changed the angle slightly, almost there...

29-01-2010, 01:35 AM	#7
rofiqalfata five years old boy... Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: jakarta Posts: 91 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	i think this would be my final image..., but there's still time to do some refinements... any comments, critics, suggestions?

29-01-2010, 09:17 AM	#8
szaszgbr Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Hungary Posts: 60 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I like it! maybe brownish color is better. brings out the difference between vegetation and the buildings.

30-01-2010, 03:29 PM	#10
2BIG3k Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Really nice result. One thing that seems bit strange to me is the city appearing more futuristic in the background than in the foreground, but just a personal sensation I guess. Oh, and is it possible to have two lensflares from light source? Good luck and cheers, Marc

31-01-2010, 03:19 AM	#11
rofiqalfata five years old boy... Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: jakarta Posts: 91 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	thanks for the comments, critics and suggestions guys..., it's really final now.. W.I.P sheet here Final image: Good luck everyone! PS: where is the final image submission thread?

31-01-2010, 07:29 AM	#12
Akim Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Cool! Good chaos here! And I like final color gamma!

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