Concept Car "ASTIN"

[punjabifrog]

Hi Friends,

This is my Concept car. I am developing this model in 3ds Max.

well basically i started this car last year. but then i got so busy learning final things of my Course at college. so now i am done with my course, and I started working again on this project

Wip:-






Comments and Critics will be helpful. SO Please feel free to post.



Wishes
Nitin Kapoor
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ArtBlog : www.punjabifrog.blogspot.com

[McFly]

Looks like the front is falling apart. I think it's missing some kinda flow from the hood to the front wheel arch.

Can you post a front view render please?

Thanks.

[punjabifrog]

Thanks for you Reply "McFly". well here's the (Front View and the Top View)

as you asked for the front view, I have attached 2 View's for good idea.


Any suggestion will Be helpful to improve my design. so Please feel free to post.



Thanks
Nitin Kapoor
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ArtBlog: www.punjabifrog.blogspot.com

[Sathe]

Maybe this will help with your curve flow. you have some really interesting and original shapes here, but it is spoiled by a few inconsistent forms and frameworks.

[DaddyDoom]

Listen to Sathe. He doesn't throw away that sort of visual advice very often.

[punjabifrog]

Originally Posted by Sathe

Maybe this will help with your curve flow. you have some really interesting and original shapes here, but it is spoiled by a few inconsistent forms and frameworks.

Hay Thanks for your time you gave to the Sketch suggestion.

It is very interesting. and u turned my baby into beast. but the beast is looking just amazing. SATHE.

I am sure that this will be very helpful for updating my overall design

And thanks DADDYDOOM, I will follow his suggestion.


Warm wishes and thanks for help
Nitin
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ArtBlog: www.punjabifrog.blogspot.com

[punjabifrog]

This was in my mind for adding details but i will take help from your suggestion-ed design.



Thanks
Nitin

[cg-mag]

a complete ****. it is falling apart. sketch punjabifrog much more interesting

[punjabifrog]

Hi friend,

i am back with few days old render, where i last added few details as per new design. well I am still not happy with the overall design, and i have few more design's in my dumb mind .

Actually I was not well in past few days, that why there is a gap in updates.

today i will try to upload new updates in this thread.

and CG-MAG : i am sorry brother dont understand your reply. can you please simplify it



Thanks
Nitin
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ArtBlog: www.punjabifrog.blogspot.com

[zipel]

Great, radical design!

I'd change few things- maybe lower the roof, and make the body wider. It would look better if you make a smooth transition between the roof and rest of the body, i think it's too sharp right now. And just one more thing - the front part should be something like one continuous smooth surface, it's not very aerodynamic right now.

All in all- great!

[punjabifrog]

Hello friends,

I am apologized for the long gap between posting the work in progress. Actually I was bit busy with other projects, nd i was not getting much time to complete this dream car, so I am still stick to this project.

I hope to come up with updates soon.

nd Thanks "ZIPEL". for the suggestion, well car is already wider, i think it don't look wider due to camera settings. nd roof is lower too. I think orthographic view's render will make it bit clear . rest I wanted my design too be, bit sharp overall, and I agree the flow is not matching .... lets hope i will dodge my lazy mind to make new changes


warm wishes
NITIN
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ArtBlog : www.punjabifrog.blogspot.com

[punjabifrog]

Friends this was the Update, last worked on

[chunkymunky]

That is such a unique style, i'm really liking the detailing so far, with that sweeping section for the doors

[punjabifrog]

Thanks Chunkymunky

[lebaje]

Hi, i love your design but there is one thing that annoy me is the curve on the front that we dont see on the left side

http://img255.imageshack.us/i/testqj...s/i/testqj.jpg