WIP animation - Cap

[Marina Benites]

hello everyone!

What i can do for upgrade this animation?
Please... coments!!

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[Marina Benites]

I started animation last year. I made this animation but i know their is not good. But i don't know what i do for animation to be interesting. I feel i need something else.
(sorry for my bad English)

[throne]

it's all decent except for the part when he jumps out of happens, Kinda flickery.

[Marina Benites]

He jumps to show how happy he is. I need upgrade this part... it's second people saw this.

Tnks, throne!

[jeremydjutras]

Your timing is nice, and the posing is pretty good, I think the body mechanics could use a little work.

@ the jump there is too much side to side movement in the upper body, it is flickering back and forth, watch the shoulders, you'll see what I mean. If you make the movements less extreme then you can make them ease in and out achieving a more natural organic motion.

When he places the cap on his head, try to move his right elbow (screen left) out more in front of him instead of having it hide behind his head like you have it, push the silhouette.

I like the arcs on the ending arm swing and how they settle into the crossed arms position, but the settling on the rest of the body (mostly the hip control) seems abrupt give it more settle in and it will ease in to a nice stop..

Nice start, it has a lot of personality, just a few additions to the mechanics and you'll be well on your way to a shot that has it all : )