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hulahuga · 22-01-2011, 09:06 AM

Like the eyes there

washka · 22-01-2011, 01:46 PM

I didn't mean it in this way: "bad", I mostfully wanted to explain that it's quite hard to work onto this kind of format. And you managed to get some interesting result on it.

And what I wanted to point out, it's that with the perspective there and the skills I know you've got, if (doubling the image height size) you add/paint some more old church/castle kind of ceiling (you know this kind of lightning you got into those dark old romanesque or gothic architecture, there is always plenty of details up there), you'll increase depth, details and athmos. You could even made a SCI-FI interpretation there, it would fit.
You know just this copy/paste technique (decrasing superimposed triangular shapes) that create a depth illusion.

I think it could improve greatly your image (and its athmos), but it's just a personal opinion.

Vatsel · 23-01-2011, 12:31 AM

hulahuga -ty
washka- hmm yeah definitely interesting ideas! though I was just going to do a robotic suit for my portfolio, so the focus is on that im afraid

Vatsel · 23-01-2011, 10:35 PM

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Vatsel · 27-01-2011, 06:08 PM

hulahuga · 27-01-2011, 06:12 PM

Lips look a bit wonky somehow...

MStandar · 28-01-2011, 06:42 AM

Looking good

But like Hula said, The lips on that last one, aint looking right. It seams they are going out from the face, in and odd way. hard to describe =/

Vatsel · 29-01-2011, 05:05 AM

hula and mstandar - yea ended up changing a lot of features on that face, thanks for looking out!

washka · 29-01-2011, 09:29 AM

I liked this "wonky" lips, I would have used that to make her look a bit like a tricky monkey/lion, get some "animal" feeling there, it was a goooood mood.

Nice work btw (+ear).

Vatsel · 01-02-2011, 07:41 AM

washka - yeah I just couldn't make that expression work. I'm not worthy D:

Vatsel · 06-02-2011, 01:54 PM

Vatsel · 10-02-2011, 11:03 AM

Vatsel · 13-02-2011, 05:20 PM

22-01-2011, 09:06 AM	#226
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Like the eyes there __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

23-01-2011, 12:31 AM	#228
Vatsel Slackercide Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Central London Posts: 186 Thanks: 10 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hulahuga -ty washka- hmm yeah definitely interesting ideas! though I was just going to do a robotic suit for my portfolio, so the focus is on that im afraid __________________ Vatsel.com Twitter Sketchbook vatselart@gmail.com

23-01-2011, 10:35 PM	#229
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25-01-2011, 02:05 AM	#230
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26-01-2011, 05:37 PM	#231
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22-01-2011, 01:46 PM	#227
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,723 Thanks: 201 Thanked 126 Times in 113 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	I didn't mean it in this way: "bad", I mostfully wanted to explain that it's quite hard to work onto this kind of format. And you managed to get some interesting result on it. And what I wanted to point out, it's that with the perspective there and the skills I know you've got, if (doubling the image height size) you add/paint some more old church/castle kind of ceiling (you know this kind of lightning you got into those dark old romanesque or gothic architecture, there is always plenty of details up there), you'll increase depth, details and athmos. You could even made a SCI-FI interpretation there, it would fit. You know just this copy/paste technique (decrasing superimposed triangular shapes) that create a depth illusion. I think it could improve greatly your image (and its athmos), but it's just a personal opinion.

27-01-2011, 06:08 PM	#232
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27-01-2011, 06:12 PM	#233
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Lips look a bit wonky somehow... __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

28-01-2011, 06:42 AM	#234
MStandar Addicted to 3D Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,567 Thanks: 64 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	Looking good But like Hula said, The lips on that last one, aint looking right. It seams they are going out from the face, in and odd way. hard to describe =/

29-01-2011, 05:05 AM	#235
Vatsel Slackercide Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Central London Posts: 186 Thanks: 10 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	hula and mstandar - yea ended up changing a lot of features on that face, thanks for looking out! __________________ Vatsel.com Twitter Sketchbook vatselart@gmail.com

29-01-2011, 09:29 AM	#236
washka (Oo) Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Belgium Posts: 2,723 Thanks: 201 Thanked 126 Times in 113 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 6	I liked this "wonky" lips, I would have used that to make her look a bit like a tricky monkey/lion, get some "animal" feeling there, it was a goooood mood. Nice work btw (+ear). Last edited by washka; 29-01-2011 at 09:31 AM..

01-02-2011, 07:41 AM	#237
Vatsel Slackercide Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Central London Posts: 186 Thanks: 10 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	washka - yeah I just couldn't make that expression work. I'm not worthy D: __________________ Vatsel.com Twitter Sketchbook vatselart@gmail.com

06-02-2011, 01:54 PM	#238
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10-02-2011, 11:03 AM	#239
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13-02-2011, 05:20 PM	#240
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