CLP - Abominable Snow...babies? - Page 3

nihilicon · 21-02-2010, 05:06 PM

That looks much more coherent in terms of lighting. Well done.

Randize · 21-02-2010, 11:21 PM

yea!!! nice!! thats a leap improvement u got there.

i think u need environment bounce light for the people. now they are too dark unless the environment comes dark too. hehe

wargrafix · 22-02-2010, 05:50 AM

nice! Everything seems to be coming together. love the expressions.
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Beldragim · 22-02-2010, 09:59 AM

Cool! Lots of action there. There is something about the babies (maybe too round? too big eyes) that made me stop and think, but the rest is very good, specially with the new lighting and values.

rocneasta · 22-02-2010, 10:09 AM

points of interest, smiling baby faces, flash light spotlight and the left guys detailed face. nice capture

CLP · 22-02-2010, 04:53 PM

cheers for all the crits and support dudes. Already submitted my final entry but will work on more if somethin really pops out at me, perhaps the final entries section is editable in case i wanna update it lol.

jaist · 23-02-2010, 10:45 AM

Hi, nice work!
I'd deepen the composition not only using darks and haze but by choosing a different angle for the background perspective.. It's too central. Since the flow seems to be going from left to right i'd try to shift the vanishing point.
But this is good so far!

EDIT: The comment is still valid, but i didn't see your last post, i should read before posting

zakuro · 23-02-2010, 11:19 AM

it's becoming cooler and cooler! there's only one thing that i don't like: the baby up close. Maybe it's the eyes, they seem too big, but i'm not sure... I just have the impression that something is clashing.

hulahuga · 23-02-2010, 05:32 PM

This turned out very nice!
I like the babies and the general idea of the scene, a shame you missed the parent's stomach/chest detailing. The hair turned out nice on all characters, especially the little one on his right leg (from our point of view)!

Insania · 25-02-2010, 09:50 PM

Cool. Very nice creature. The babies - cute.
I like this one:
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animationutz · 26-02-2010, 09:44 PM

good work on the painting. i just feel as though the babies are not mixing with the "viciousness" of the adult so much. maybe a bit more sinister but cute at the same time. kinda like the pygmies in "The Mummy Returns", small, cute (for being dead), and highly vicious.

aby arty · 27-02-2010, 08:38 AM

the bearded man in the corner(who hs face towards us)and the large kid .

itlooks as if the kid has caught the man by his arm , seperate them a lill bit.

21-02-2010, 11:21 PM	#32
Randize The Passerby Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 133 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea!!! nice!! thats a leap improvement u got there. i think u need environment bounce light for the people. now they are too dark unless the environment comes dark too. hehe __________________

22-02-2010, 05:50 AM	#33
wargrafix The alpha and the omega Join Date: Feb 2006 Posts: 401 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	nice! Everything seems to be coming together. love the expressions. ________ Fix Ps3 Last edited by wargrafix; 04-05-2011 at 02:33 PM..

23-02-2010, 05:32 PM	#39
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	This turned out very nice! I like the babies and the general idea of the scene, a shame you missed the parent's stomach/chest detailing. The hair turned out nice on all characters, especially the little one on his right leg (from our point of view)! __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

26-02-2010, 09:44 PM	#41
animationutz Animation is life! Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Denver, CO Posts: 121 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	good work on the painting. i just feel as though the babies are not mixing with the "viciousness" of the adult so much. maybe a bit more sinister but cute at the same time. kinda like the pygmies in "The Mummy Returns", small, cute (for being dead), and highly vicious. __________________ "You dont' do it for money, or you're a monkey. You don't think of the bottom line, or you're a monkey. You don't think of it in terms of hourly wage, yearly wage, even lifetime wage, or you're a monkey. In the end you don't even do it for love, although it would be nice to think so. You do it because to not do it is suicide." -Stephen King

27-02-2010, 08:38 AM	#42
aby arty loving...... Kerem Beyit Join Date: Jul 2007 Posts: 894 Thanks: 30 Thanked 40 Times in 38 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	the bearded man in the corner(who hs face towards us)and the large kid . itlooks as if the kid has caught the man by his arm , seperate them a lill bit. __________________ My 2D Thread My 3D Thread

21-02-2010, 05:06 PM	#31
nihilicon Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	That looks much more coherent in terms of lighting. Well done.

22-02-2010, 09:59 AM	#34
Beldragim Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 25 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Cool! Lots of action there. There is something about the babies (maybe too round? too big eyes) that made me stop and think, but the rest is very good, specially with the new lighting and values.

22-02-2010, 10:09 AM	#35
rocneasta in search of excellence Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: 25m2 flat Posts: 5,319 Thanks: 111 Thanked 395 Times in 354 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 31	points of interest, smiling baby faces, flash light spotlight and the left guys detailed face. nice capture

22-02-2010, 04:53 PM	#36
CLP Registered User Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: UK Posts: 129 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 4	cheers for all the crits and support dudes. Already submitted my final entry but will work on more if somethin really pops out at me, perhaps the final entries section is editable in case i wanna update it lol.

23-02-2010, 10:45 AM	#37
jaist Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 12 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hi, nice work! I'd deepen the composition not only using darks and haze but by choosing a different angle for the background perspective.. It's too central. Since the flow seems to be going from left to right i'd try to shift the vanishing point. But this is good so far! EDIT: The comment is still valid, but i didn't see your last post, i should read before posting

23-02-2010, 11:19 AM	#38
zakuro Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Italy Posts: 25 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	it's becoming cooler and cooler! there's only one thing that i don't like: the baby up close. Maybe it's the eyes, they seem too big, but i'm not sure... I just have the impression that something is clashing.

25-02-2010, 09:50 PM	#40
Insania Registered User Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 139 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Cool. Very nice creature. The babies - cute. I like this one:

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