Eye, Robot

dopefish · 11-02-2010, 04:14 PM

hello, this is another WIP proeject, and also my first try in modeling a character. it's inspired by the following concept I found on this polycount thread's first page: http://boards.polycount.net/showthread.php?t=40839.

I also attached the concept(NOT DRAWN BY ME!!!USER IS ZATOICHI FROM POLYCOUNT) to the image so there are no problems in not seeing it.

I know the posse is a bit stiff right now, but i'll solve this in the future. hope i'm going the right way! tell me what you think!

thefmilyofblood · 11-02-2010, 08:46 PM

Impressive work, but the hands (and some parts of the eye) really need some work. They seem out of place with the quality of the hard surface.

chunkymunky · 12-02-2010, 07:10 AM

Yeah looks really cool but hands and eye is letting down your otherwise excellent modelling. Work on those some more and it'll be getting there.

Monsignor · 12-02-2010, 11:29 AM

Nice hard edge modeling, but you need to improve it's hands. And there are no joints on arms so it will be difficult to animate or pose it.

dopefish · 17-03-2010, 08:03 AM

i am not fully satisfied with the background. stll working on the hands and eyes. now, I only worked on the anorganic parts of the model, texturing them.

thefmilyofblood · 17-03-2010, 08:13 PM

As before, the hard-surface, and now the textures, are awesome, but the organics just aren't up to snuff. You should really give them some love. Also, the render is a little dim.

11-02-2010, 04:14 PM	#1
dopefish ╚══════════╝ Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: ☺ Posts: 678 Thanks: 1 Thanked 11 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Eye, Robot hello, this is another WIP proeject, and also my first try in modeling a character. it's inspired by the following concept I found on this polycount thread's first page: http://boards.polycount.net/showthread.php?t=40839. I also attached the concept(NOT DRAWN BY ME!!!USER IS ZATOICHI FROM POLYCOUNT) to the image so there are no problems in not seeing it. I know the posse is a bit stiff right now, but i'll solve this in the future. hope i'm going the right way! tell me what you think! Attached Images __________________ MY PORTFOLIO Last edited by dopefish; 17-03-2010 at 08:26 AM..

11-02-2010, 08:46 PM	#2
thefmilyofblood Threadjacker Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: United states Posts: 730 Thanks: 4 Thanked 8 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	Impressive work, but the hands (and some parts of the eye) really need some work. They seem out of place with the quality of the hard surface. __________________ Fight in the Dominance war!

17-03-2010, 08:03 AM	#5
dopefish ╚══════════╝ Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: ☺ Posts: 678 Thanks: 1 Thanked 11 Times in 6 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	i am not fully satisfied with the background. stll working on the hands and eyes. now, I only worked on the anorganic parts of the model, texturing them. __________________ MY PORTFOLIO

17-03-2010, 08:13 PM	#6
thefmilyofblood Threadjacker Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: United states Posts: 730 Thanks: 4 Thanked 8 Times in 3 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 3	As before, the hard-surface, and now the textures, are awesome, but the organics just aren't up to snuff. You should really give them some love. Also, the render is a little dim. __________________ Fight in the Dominance war! Last edited by thefmilyofblood; 17-03-2010 at 08:23 PM..

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12-02-2010, 07:10 AM	#3
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Yeah looks really cool but hands and eye is letting down your otherwise excellent modelling. Work on those some more and it'll be getting there.

12-02-2010, 11:29 AM	#4
Monsignor Marshmallow Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Zara, Agram and somewhere far away in space and time Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Nice hard edge modeling, but you need to improve it's hands. And there are no joints on arms so it will be difficult to animate or pose it.

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