Arteyo - Abominable Snowman

Arteyo · 21-02-2010, 03:54 AM

mine will be a tarzan or a barbarian warrior fighting the snowman.

here are concept study of the man and the composition of the painting.
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Arteyo · 23-02-2010, 01:10 PM

more wips

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Arteyo · 24-02-2010, 08:43 PM

2 more days...

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Arteyo · 24-02-2010, 10:12 PM

just a few more details...

Arteyo · 24-02-2010, 11:38 PM

I'm satisfied with the painting now after a few hrs of work on it today.

this is the final version just gotta do the wip sheets now to post in the final thread entry.

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Randize · 25-02-2010, 01:05 AM

They go, "I'm HER MAAAN!!"

love the color study, especially the 1st and 2nd. however there's some anatomical problem, i believe u can fix them. good luck

Seale · 25-02-2010, 03:27 AM

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Originally Posted by Randize

They go, "I'm HER MAAAN!!"

Lol! I like the design of the abominable snowman. You should do a super close up detailed version of him.

Arteyo · 25-02-2010, 06:15 AM

thanks guys.. ur right randize the anatomy arent perfect. I'm not that happy with the
anatomy of the snowman but he is covered mostly with hairs so I didn't worry too much about it.

we still have 3more days to work on this maybe i can improve things a little more and just edit the final entry before the deadline.

seale yea maybe I should but we got only 3 days. but you can see a closer view of his face if ur using IE just maximize the zoom level setting.

Arteyo · 25-02-2010, 06:39 AM

I made an outline drawing of the snowman here. anatomy isn't perfect but I don't think its too bad.

what anatomy error did you see in this randize? what do you guys think? thanks just really curious.

Arteyo · 25-02-2010, 11:31 AM

I decided to add more details on the snowman and also changed
his color to white like a snow. ok I can call this done now for the last time.

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rocneasta · 25-02-2010, 12:57 PM

you could try to enlarge his face a bit. when compared to the rest of the body it looks really tiny.

Seale · 25-02-2010, 02:09 PM

It looks better like this. I actually like his head smaller like that. It makes him look bigger. It's all taste though.

Randize · 25-02-2010, 03:09 PM

I'm particularly worry about the male, to be honest, you handle anatomy quite well, I don't have much to say, just take care of the small details like the elbows and joint structures, really can bring ur drawing to next level. Also it would be nice to have the pose in balance position, not in the sense of leveraging, but the balance feeling, cos u can have a character jumping and still have it look imbalance if not handled carefully.

The paintover below shows what I said above, there isn't much problem with ur anatomy, i'm just trying to get the right feel for me, easier i suppose haha.

Arteyo · 25-02-2010, 07:46 PM

randize his position is similar to this: http://www.aa.psu.edu/sports/mtennis...ersilhoxj8.jpg

imagine a tennis player when he is about to swing his racquet to hit the ball.
now maybe you can understand better why I painted him in that position that you said isn't balanced.

the painting doesn't show his whole legs maybe thats why his position is looking awkward to you.

thanks I really appreciate the opinions you guys gave me about the anatomy and other things.

nihilicon · 25-02-2010, 07:54 PM

Looks great, I dig the small face, looks like its lost in a mass of fur and that fits I think. Nice light and atmosphere.

21-02-2010, 03:54 AM	#1
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Arteyo - Abominable Snowman mine will be a tarzan or a barbarian warrior fighting the snowman. here are concept study of the man and the composition of the painting.

23-02-2010, 01:10 PM	#2
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	just wips more wips Last edited by Arteyo; 23-02-2010 at 01:17 PM..

24-02-2010, 08:43 PM	#3
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	more wips 2 more days...

24-02-2010, 10:12 PM	#4
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	almost done just a few more details... Attached Images

24-02-2010, 11:38 PM	#5
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	done on time I'm satisfied with the painting now after a few hrs of work on it today. this is the final version just gotta do the wip sheets now to post in the final thread entry.

25-02-2010, 01:05 AM	#6
Randize The Passerby Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 133 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	They go, "I'm HER MAAAN!!" love the color study, especially the 1st and 2nd. however there's some anatomical problem, i believe u can fix them. good luck __________________

25-02-2010, 06:15 AM	#8
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks guys.. ur right randize the anatomy arent perfect. I'm not that happy with the anatomy of the snowman but he is covered mostly with hairs so I didn't worry too much about it. we still have 3more days to work on this maybe i can improve things a little more and just edit the final entry before the deadline. seale yea maybe I should but we got only 3 days. but you can see a closer view of his face if ur using IE just maximize the zoom level setting. Last edited by Arteyo; 25-02-2010 at 06:26 AM..

25-02-2010, 06:39 AM	#9
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	anatomy I made an outline drawing of the snowman here. anatomy isn't perfect but I don't think its too bad. what anatomy error did you see in this randize? what do you guys think? thanks just really curious. Attached Images Last edited by Arteyo; 25-02-2010 at 06:41 AM..

25-02-2010, 11:31 AM	#10
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	more details I decided to add more details on the snowman and also changed his color to white like a snow. ok I can call this done now for the last time. Last edited by Arteyo; 25-02-2010 at 12:58 PM..

25-02-2010, 12:57 PM	#11
rocneasta in search of excellence Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: 25m2 flat Posts: 5,299 Thanks: 111 Thanked 393 Times in 352 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 31	you could try to enlarge his face a bit. when compared to the rest of the body it looks really tiny.

25-02-2010, 02:09 PM	#12
Seale Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: US, MN Posts: 47 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	It looks better like this. I actually like his head smaller like that. It makes him look bigger. It's all taste though. __________________ http://monkatopaints.blogspot.com/

25-02-2010, 03:09 PM	#13
Randize The Passerby Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Malaysia Posts: 133 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'm particularly worry about the male, to be honest, you handle anatomy quite well, I don't have much to say, just take care of the small details like the elbows and joint structures, really can bring ur drawing to next level. Also it would be nice to have the pose in balance position, not in the sense of leveraging, but the balance feeling, cos u can have a character jumping and still have it look imbalance if not handled carefully. The paintover below shows what I said above, there isn't much problem with ur anatomy, i'm just trying to get the right feel for me, easier i suppose haha. __________________

25-02-2010, 07:46 PM	#14
Arteyo Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: California Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	gesture randize his position is similar to this: http://www.aa.psu.edu/sports/mtennis...ersilhoxj8.jpg imagine a tennis player when he is about to swing his racquet to hit the ball. now maybe you can understand better why I painted him in that position that you said isn't balanced. the painting doesn't show his whole legs maybe thats why his position is looking awkward to you. thanks I really appreciate the opinions you guys gave me about the anatomy and other things. Last edited by Arteyo; 25-02-2010 at 07:51 PM..

25-02-2010, 07:54 PM	#15
nihilicon Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Posts: 27 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks great, I dig the small face, looks like its lost in a mass of fur and that fits I think. Nice light and atmosphere.

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