Female Character Model (please critique)

[Lauren_O]

Hi, I'm modeling a character for an assignment. This is my third character for the class. I'm still need to make some tweaks to the model though before taking it in to zBrush. Any suggestions will be appreciated.

I've uploaded wireframes of the model and one basic gray model image.

[Lauren_O]

I've uploaded the model sheet for my character along with tweaked wireframes.
I should of uploaded the model sheet earlier, can't believe I forgot.

The areas I tweaked were the shoulder and breasts. I also made adjustments to her shoulder blade area.

[poopipe]

Your overall proportions are a bit masculine which isn't sitting well with the distinctly teenage boobies.
women tend to have a more defined waist and a more slender/longer neck.

Her face is suffering a similar problem - her jaw juts out a bit which is quite masculine, also her nose will appear more feminine if it's upturned slightly.

the good news is that you're at a low enough resolution to start mashing the forms around without too much work.

Put your model sheet away, get some pictures of naked ladies from lots of angles and look at her in a perspective viewport.
Shift things around quite roughly (use soft selection - you can tidy up later) until you've got a more feminine shape that you like. Don't get bogged down in details or clean topology, just concentrate on the gross forms first.

[Lauren_O]

ok, great. thank you for the critique, it helps a lot.