Rievilo - The Lost Jungle - Page 3

odell5 · 16-04-2010, 10:50 AM

Love the mood now. Bravo! While it seems there're too many things to attract my eyes... It would be good if your can make the painting easier to read, imo...

TheSaraf · 17-04-2010, 03:20 PM

The first concept opened very nicely when you removed that big tree and parts of ruins in the middle. Now you can feel that water path leads you to the point of intrest. Just finish that awesome mountain/ruin in the background and you are all set. And Indiana Jones as well.

Second concept is realy epic vista and deserves much more time then 15 days left in this contest. If you are fast worker get to it now and compare the results of the two mattes and post the better one. Good luck with both of them.

Rievilo · 17-04-2010, 03:35 PM

Thanks guys for your comments !
I'll try to find time before may 2nd for finish it properly !
Let's see what we can do with the second one with waterfalls.
thanks and have fun !

tjerkotten · 17-04-2010, 11:45 PM

The Last one has a massive depth view. Its nice, but the first one has a more mystic feeling over it...

M_Cederstrom · 18-04-2010, 12:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rievilo

Well, I'll try to finish the first one, then if I can, the waterfalls with the same perspective just to make M_Cederstrom blind

)

hahaha i already where glasses, my wife well kill me if i get any blinder.

Rievilo · 22-04-2010, 04:48 AM

Thanks for Tjerkotten for your opinion.
I agree with you about the mystical side of the first matte.
It's what I like the most, but the truth is that I let this matte go. It happens sometimes. I was just turning around with it. Now it is waiting quietly in its file. Later I'll finish it for sure !

I had just two days to work on something new.
- There it is the pictures that I used.
- The evolution of the WIP.
- The last step (...for the moment...)
- Close-ups

I won't be able to work this week and next week on The lost Jungle, except during the last two days of this challenge. Let me know what you think guys. I always appreciate the fact that you can share easily constructive points of view !

Good luck !

tjerkotten · 22-04-2010, 04:59 AM

Its not mystic, but it looks much better as a composition and an edit than the first one. Cool matte. If this was real i wanted to go there on vacation and go rafting

2BIG3k · 22-04-2010, 08:42 AM

I like how you composited all the different waterfall views. Hope you have the time to work on some of the matte egdes that still make some of the elements look pasted in. And somehow I don't like the cyan sky tint of the last wips so much, in the second step of your wip sheet it looks better to me.
Good luck for the final steps.

chunkymunky · 22-04-2010, 09:08 AM

This looks stunning! I'm not sure about the colouring but it doesn't detract too much from the sense of scale for this matte which is breathtakingly beautiful

hulahuga · 22-04-2010, 01:02 PM

Some perspective issues still, waterflows as well. But it is a nice pic

. Needs some tweaks on the sharpness of some areas...

TheSaraf · 25-04-2010, 12:52 AM

Very nice progress and a very good piece. Little sharpening maybe

...

Rievilo · 30-04-2010, 04:47 PM

Thanks guys !
will consider your points !
Good luck !

Rievilo · 30-04-2010, 11:00 PM

OK Guys !

I added a few hours before the deadline and here's the final product.
I come back to the blue colours (less sepia), I've worked too on the sharpness, textures on the rocks and vegetation, etc...
Well... here we go !

Thanks guys for your advices and encouragements during all this month

Good Luck !

Before

After : go away sepia colour !

After : More sharper and textures

Close-up Before

Close-up After

chunkymunky · 01-05-2010, 12:28 PM

Superb!

Rievilo · 01-05-2010, 05:08 PM

Thanks buddy !

17-04-2010, 03:20 PM	#32
TheSaraf Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 84 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	The first concept opened very nicely when you removed that big tree and parts of ruins in the middle. Now you can feel that water path leads you to the point of intrest. Just finish that awesome mountain/ruin in the background and you are all set. And Indiana Jones as well. Second concept is realy epic vista and deserves much more time then 15 days left in this contest. If you are fast worker get to it now and compare the results of the two mattes and post the better one. Good luck with both of them. __________________ Never put off tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow

17-04-2010, 03:35 PM	#33
Rievilo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Montréal, Québec - Canada Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks guys for your comments ! I'll try to find time before may 2nd for finish it properly ! Let's see what we can do with the second one with waterfalls. thanks and have fun ! __________________ Rievilo ----------------------------------- http://olivierventura.daportfolio.com/ -----------------------------------

17-04-2010, 11:45 PM	#34
tjerkotten Knowledge must be free Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 851 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	The Last one has a massive depth view. Its nice, but the first one has a more mystic feeling over it... __________________ Latest Projects: The Lost Jungle " In Progress " The Chamber Of Oceans " In Progress " The Sunflower Fountain Final The Sunflower Fountain " In Progress " Homepage: Home Of Tjerk Otten

22-04-2010, 04:48 AM	#36
Rievilo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Montréal, Québec - Canada Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for Tjerkotten for your opinion. I agree with you about the mystical side of the first matte. It's what I like the most, but the truth is that I let this matte go. It happens sometimes. I was just turning around with it. Now it is waiting quietly in its file. Later I'll finish it for sure ! I had just two days to work on something new. - There it is the pictures that I used. - The evolution of the WIP. - The last step (...for the moment...) - Close-ups I won't be able to work this week and next week on The lost Jungle, except during the last two days of this challenge. Let me know what you think guys. I always appreciate the fact that you can share easily constructive points of view ! Good luck ! __________________ Rievilo ----------------------------------- http://olivierventura.daportfolio.com/ -----------------------------------

22-04-2010, 04:59 AM	#37
tjerkotten Knowledge must be free Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 851 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Its not mystic, but it looks much better as a composition and an edit than the first one. Cool matte. If this was real i wanted to go there on vacation and go rafting __________________ Latest Projects: The Lost Jungle " In Progress " The Chamber Of Oceans " In Progress " The Sunflower Fountain Final The Sunflower Fountain " In Progress " Homepage: Home Of Tjerk Otten

16-04-2010, 10:50 AM	#31
odell5 Registered User Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 9 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Love the mood now. Bravo! While it seems there're too many things to attract my eyes... It would be good if your can make the painting easier to read, imo...

22-04-2010, 08:42 AM	#38
2BIG3k Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I like how you composited all the different waterfall views. Hope you have the time to work on some of the matte egdes that still make some of the elements look pasted in. And somehow I don't like the cyan sky tint of the last wips so much, in the second step of your wip sheet it looks better to me. Good luck for the final steps.

22-04-2010, 09:08 AM	#39
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	This looks stunning! I'm not sure about the colouring but it doesn't detract too much from the sense of scale for this matte which is breathtakingly beautiful

22-04-2010, 01:02 PM	#40
hulahuga Dr. Hula Join Date: May 2008 Location: Stockholm, Sweden Posts: 4,647 Thanks: 139 Thanked 136 Times in 130 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	Some perspective issues still, waterflows as well. But it is a nice pic . Needs some tweaks on the sharpness of some areas... __________________ What does the doctor ordain today? - Hmm... What about a shot... full of ideas! Currently using: Maya - Mudbox - ZBrush - Photoshop WIP Hula's 2D Sketchbook http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=777808 Hula's 3D Sketchbox http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=76693 Hula and Waska's Joint Project Thread http://forums.3dtotal.com/p=792813

25-04-2010, 12:52 AM	#41
TheSaraf Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Gothenburg, Sweden Posts: 84 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Very nice progress and a very good piece. Little sharpening maybe ... __________________ Never put off tomorrow what you can do the day after tomorrow

30-04-2010, 04:47 PM	#42
Rievilo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Montréal, Québec - Canada Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks guys ! will consider your points ! Good luck ! __________________ Rievilo ----------------------------------- http://olivierventura.daportfolio.com/ -----------------------------------

30-04-2010, 11:00 PM	#43
Rievilo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Montréal, Québec - Canada Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	OK Guys ! I added a few hours before the deadline and here's the final product. I come back to the blue colours (less sepia), I've worked too on the sharpness, textures on the rocks and vegetation, etc... Well... here we go ! Thanks guys for your advices and encouragements during all this month Good Luck ! Before After : go away sepia colour ! After : More sharper and textures Close-up Before Close-up After __________________ Rievilo ----------------------------------- http://olivierventura.daportfolio.com/ ----------------------------------- Last edited by Rievilo; 30-04-2010 at 11:10 PM..

01-05-2010, 12:28 PM	#44
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Superb!

01-05-2010, 05:08 PM	#45
Rievilo Registered User Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Montréal, Québec - Canada Posts: 77 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks buddy ! __________________ Rievilo ----------------------------------- http://olivierventura.daportfolio.com/ -----------------------------------

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