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13-04-2010, 08:58 PM
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chofstetter- The Lost Jungle
Heres my take on The Lost Jungle. Its an temple half submerged by a pond or lake, bog or swamp. It will be a night shot, with the moon glaring off the water. I like the idea, of an oasis in the middle of a dense, rich jungle.
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14-04-2010, 06:37 PM
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Chofstetter- The Lost Jungle.
Heres an update.
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14-04-2010, 06:38 PM
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Chofstetter- The Lost Jungle.
Heres another update.
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14-04-2010, 08:17 PM
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I like the setting, feels good. Hopefully there will be something interesting in the water area.
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Yeah, you'll have to cover this original reflection in the water as it's reflecting the clear skies from up above
. Beside that, great start!
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Not too bad at all, I agree with evilllama about the water's reflections, but overall it's not a bad start.
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Nice start and Interresting mood. It's the firts night mood in this challenge !
Waiting for more.
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26-04-2010, 05:36 PM
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The lost Jungle
Heres an update.
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27-04-2010, 02:31 PM
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Hmmm I know it's meant to be moonlit but there's usually a bit more light than that, I remember the moon coming through my window the other night when I got back late and it was like a light turned on and it wasn't a full moon either so there really should be a little more light in the scene if possible.
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27-04-2010, 10:40 PM
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The lost Jungle
Lighten it up a bit. still working on the highlights.
what do you think about the two heads??? not sure if im liking that yet. |
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I quite like the two heads actually, it's getting there
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29-04-2010, 10:32 PM
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The Lost Jungle final.
Heres my final work. I really enjoyed this journey, but im happy to be finished. I learned Alot! cant wait for the next challenge.
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29-04-2010, 11:25 PM
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Too much fog for me. I think you can keep the fog over the water and remove the rest. Also, the ruins of the left are too much bright. I think...
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30-04-2010, 04:16 PM
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last update is a big step forward, I think
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very interresting mood !
good work !
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