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17-04-2010, 12:59 PM
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Abumomo - The Lost Jungle
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17-04-2010, 01:30 PM
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nice start...
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17-04-2010, 05:50 PM
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looks promising..
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17-04-2010, 11:43 PM
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I think you should make the picture more widescreen. It could open up the sky a bit more and you could do a little bit more with depth. It looks a little bit 2D at the moment. Keep it up!
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18-04-2010, 05:32 PM
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thanks for the comments guys
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18-04-2010, 07:12 PM
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update
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18-04-2010, 07:37 PM
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Good progression. It needs some perspective changes and lighting as well, but your not done so...Keep it going...
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19-04-2010, 06:24 AM
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I agree good start but needs alot more lighting effect yet which i'm sure you're aware of.
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19-04-2010, 12:36 PM
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Good start. Nice and clean mattes in the foreground. The three mountains on the right still look a little to similiar as for height and shape. Good luck.
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19-04-2010, 07:04 PM
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i was not really happy with the temple, so i changed it.
what do you think is the cave better? |
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Cave is definitely better imo.
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20-04-2010, 08:37 AM
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adds a little bit more definatly
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20-04-2010, 08:45 AM
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Much better...
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20-04-2010, 03:18 PM
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update
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good job my frnd, very well done!
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