Silvani - The Lost Jungle

trevor333 · 22-04-2010, 01:40 PM

Hi there,

Here's reference sheets and a composition sketch for this month's challenge. I am planning on integrating a lot of the reference into the final image.
A long way to go...but I'll be updating again soon

school has been busy!

Cheers,

Trevor

trevor333 · 28-04-2010, 07:31 PM

Hey everyone,

what do you think I could add to my scene to make it more mystic/abandon? any suggestions on the painting in itself- composition/lighting/perspective?

Akim · 28-04-2010, 07:39 PM

I think you can try to play with angle of view, if it possible. Now it looks like pyramid is standing on the construction (on the fast look).

trevor333 · 28-04-2010, 08:12 PM

yea i see what you're saying. I'll try mess around with that, some fog between the two structures might help to separate them too.
thanks

Akim · 28-04-2010, 09:11 PM

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Originally Posted by trevor333

some fog between the two structures might help to separate them.
thanks

right, fog and light should help

2BIG3k · 29-04-2010, 09:09 AM

I think the path the eye takes through your picture is too simple yet. For me it's just a straight line between foreground grass, the podest and the background temple. Some elements in the grass or interesting plants might help. And I'd suggest to open the view a little more. Good luck.

22-04-2010, 01:40 PM	#1
trevor333 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Toronto ON Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Silvani - The Lost Jungle Hi there, Here's reference sheets and a composition sketch for this month's challenge. I am planning on integrating a lot of the reference into the final image. A long way to go...but I'll be updating again soon school has been busy! Cheers, Trevor Attached Images

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trevor333 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Toronto ON Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	update progress Hey everyone, what do you think I could add to my scene to make it more mystic/abandon? any suggestions on the painting in itself- composition/lighting/perspective? Attached Images

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28-04-2010, 07:39 PM	#3
Akim Registered User Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 141 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I think you can try to play with angle of view, if it possible. Now it looks like pyramid is standing on the construction (on the fast look).

28-04-2010, 08:12 PM	#4
trevor333 Registered User Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Toronto ON Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea i see what you're saying. I'll try mess around with that, some fog between the two structures might help to separate them too. thanks

29-04-2010, 09:09 AM	#6
2BIG3k Registered User Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 92 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	I think the path the eye takes through your picture is too simple yet. For me it's just a straight line between foreground grass, the podest and the background temple. Some elements in the grass or interesting plants might help. And I'd suggest to open the view a little more. Good luck.

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