Silver Car in the city

keraj37 · 28-04-2010, 03:03 AM

Hi, sorry for deleting previous post, but I wanted to make space for this one render, little better IMHO

C&C welcome!

tjerkotten · 28-04-2010, 07:51 AM

could you post some wip shots...

keraj37 · 29-04-2010, 01:23 AM

Sure, I can make some shots, but in what part of it u are intrested? Modeling part took somthing about 1 week and I dont have WIP shots of it, but I can make some grabs of lighting, materials, wire etc, cheers

keraj37 · 29-04-2010, 01:54 AM

here are some shots:

chunkymunky · 29-04-2010, 08:12 AM

I think you're being quite clever here, because you are using an image for the street buildings rather than actually modelling it it won't matter because you are going for a moving image, but it might not look good if you tried a still.....it all depends on how realistic your street building renders out I suppose, but i'm liking the progress so far

keraj37 · 29-04-2010, 11:10 AM

thanks munky, like u said, it wasnt nessesary to model building as far as it will be blured in the end

cheers

ciarand · 29-04-2010, 01:30 PM

Looks good so far, and as Munky said, clever use of the image plane to get the blur right rather than using an image in post.

Looks like you've got some problems with the modeling though, around the arches its quite lumpy, kind of like its been shaped with a hammer and the curve of the arch is also not very smooth.

Around the door seams you could probably harden up the edges, they seem a little soft.

Post a wireframe and clay render, it will be easier to see what can be fixed! Nice work though.

arthurduque · 29-04-2010, 03:09 PM

Great! shaders!!
excelent

keraj37 · 30-04-2010, 05:29 AM

ciarand: thanks for feedback. I think u are right becouse on other forums I got the same suggestions - mesh is bad actually. Thanks again!

arthurduque: thanks man, I am glad u like it

MStandar · 02-05-2010, 11:18 AM

The modeling is good, but a bit bumpy on many areas, but you get better and better all the time, wich is very good, practice and practice, never give up.

Rendering wise i actually like it, don't think that much of the modeling because the composition is very good.

Well nice work, keraj, nice work.

Relderson · 02-05-2010, 10:08 PM

Nice one! looks real

Moises Gomes · 03-05-2010, 02:16 AM

Incredible! ...

keraj37 · 03-05-2010, 06:09 AM

MStandar: thank u u are right about the modeling it is not the best mesh

Relderson: thank u

Moises Gomes: Thank u to, but it is credible I think hehe

cheers

28-04-2010, 03:03 AM	#1
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Silver Car in the city Hi, sorry for deleting previous post, but I wanted to make space for this one render, little better IMHO C&C welcome! Attached Images __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

28-04-2010, 07:51 AM	#2
tjerkotten Knowledge must be free Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: The Netherlands Posts: 851 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 5	could you post some wip shots... __________________ Latest Projects: The Lost Jungle " In Progress " The Chamber Of Oceans " In Progress " The Sunflower Fountain Final The Sunflower Fountain " In Progress " Homepage: Home Of Tjerk Otten

29-04-2010, 01:23 AM	#3
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	Sure, I can make some shots, but in what part of it u are intrested? Modeling part took somthing about 1 week and I dont have WIP shots of it, but I can make some grabs of lighting, materials, wire etc, cheers __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

29-04-2010, 01:54 AM	#4
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	here are some shots: __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

29-04-2010, 11:10 AM	#6
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	thanks munky, like u said, it wasnt nessesary to model building as far as it will be blured in the end cheers __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

29-04-2010, 08:12 AM	#5
chunkymunky General Monkey Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Near Here Posts: 2,981 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	I think you're being quite clever here, because you are using an image for the street buildings rather than actually modelling it it won't matter because you are going for a moving image, but it might not look good if you tried a still.....it all depends on how realistic your street building renders out I suppose, but i'm liking the progress so far

29-04-2010, 01:30 PM	#7
ciarand Registered User Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 15 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Looks good so far, and as Munky said, clever use of the image plane to get the blur right rather than using an image in post. Looks like you've got some problems with the modeling though, around the arches its quite lumpy, kind of like its been shaped with a hammer and the curve of the arch is also not very smooth. Around the door seams you could probably harden up the edges, they seem a little soft. Post a wireframe and clay render, it will be easier to see what can be fixed! Nice work though.

29-04-2010, 03:09 PM	#8
arthurduque Registered User Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Sao Paulo, Brasil Posts: 133 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Great! shaders!! excelent __________________ Keep Walking!! My blog and contacts ZSketchBook

30-04-2010, 05:29 AM	#9
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	ciarand: thanks for feedback. I think u are right becouse on other forums I got the same suggestions - mesh is bad actually. Thanks again! arthurduque: thanks man, I am glad u like it __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

02-05-2010, 11:18 AM	#10
MStandar Addicted to 3D Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Sweden Posts: 1,572 Thanks: 64 Thanked 79 Times in 77 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 8	The modeling is good, but a bit bumpy on many areas, but you get better and better all the time, wich is very good, practice and practice, never give up. Rendering wise i actually like it, don't think that much of the modeling because the composition is very good. Well nice work, keraj, nice work.

02-05-2010, 10:08 PM	#11
Relderson Registered User Join Date: May 2007 Location: Rotterdam Posts: 304 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 1	Nice one! looks real

03-05-2010, 02:16 AM	#12
Moises Gomes Registered User Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: São Paulo - Brazil Posts: 143 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Awards Showcase Total Awards: 9	Incredible! ... __________________ Moises Gomes www.mgcg.com.br Tel: 55+11+987881353 moises@mgcg.com.br Vimeo Facebook

03-05-2010, 06:09 AM	#13
keraj37 3d lover Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Szczecin Posts: 461 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Awards Showcase Total Awards: 2	MStandar: thank u u are right about the modeling it is not the best mesh Relderson: thank u Moises Gomes: Thank u to, but it is credible I think hehe cheers __________________ keraj37@wp.pl

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